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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

awesome update
loved the flashback
so arjun nd aisha are childhood friends...bt who is the other girl
love to read mre
thanks 4 the pm
continue soon

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

sorry for late comment dear:(

i m loving this ff...😳

while reading this ff... i feel like as if i m watching a movie...😉

brilliant job avantika...👏

thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

wow!! lovely update...

it is indeed very interesting...!!!

i m curious as ever,, please do continue soon...!!

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

avantika :

so my guess on arjun-aisha relation is confirmed in this update ..even though they are in Khopoli for a case, but they cant stop their past and the cruel memories associated with the place from haunting them😭, waise, does rathore knows about it 😕? and how does rosy know about it 😕? update soon.

ps : rosy being the child of a catholic father and hindu mother who also happened to be an intelligence officer and a classical singer respectively makes her an even more interesting character. do utilize this aspect of her more in the future too. 😊

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shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

mindblowing updates
loved the flashback scean
and liked present scean also
continue soon

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: samiya.059
Hey it was awesome avantika di...
I loved it so much
u r wonder ful writer i must say...u r just brilliant
so both arjun n ayesha know abt each other...
Rosy...also knows abt arjun ayesha...how
let us hope yeh mystry jaldi khatam ho jaye...
Karan is so sweet...
Bt this is one thing one loves her/his native place so much.
We used to cry so much n ask Abaji to request baba jani to allow us for one more day to stay there...bt studies
anyway it was just fantastic n awesome...
Update soon..
Enjoy the tour if it is nt official lol

Thank you Samiya.. 😃
Yes Arjun-Ayesha know each other.. Chapter 7 will be entirely dedicated to them.. 😃

I know.. I miss my Nani's place as well.. It's been several years since I've been there.. Those memories are simply priceless..

P.S.: Pah! The tour is official but my fiance is accompanying me.. So, I doubt I'm going to enjoy it.. 😉😆😳

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: CrAzYaRjUnIaN92
firstly..👏⭐️👍🏼 superb writing.. ekdum feelwa ajata hai tohri writingwa se😉😆👏

Nooo... Don't remind me of Hello Hi Bye Bye.. I miss her!! 😭😭

i am loving this story even more now..❤️

i want to hug ayesha🤗😭
plzzz (arisha) ek doosre se baat kar lo..!!!

flashbacks were..👏

rosanna ki toh baat hee kya hai...uske parts toh hollywood ki movie k jese feel hote hein...superb👏

Haha.. That's what I had intended to do.. Chalo Mission Accomplished! 😎
update soon..

and thanks for the PM dear😊 aaj mene PM milne se pehle hee dekh liya😎 or res bhi kar diya😉😆

Hmm.. Dekha tha maine.. 😃

Thank you soo much.. 😊

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: beatrice_89
Nice update

Thank you.. 😃

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: kunchu
beautifull update dear.
loved the flashbacks along with the present scene.
loved it a lot. and do come back fast

Hey.. Thanks... 😃
Pehle jaane toh do.. 😉😆

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: dia121
OK first
Im very lazy in commenting work but for u will cope up😉
Hmm.. good.. Being lazy is not good.. 😛😉

Avantika dii let me first congratulate u on ur previous successful ff,ss and os
I have gone through some and will read others...
all are awssome...
well ur a brilliant writer and i know u know thiss..

Well, thank you so much.. 😊

Lady in Red
is a fiction which is reallly awsome one...i mean the story the criteria seems like of movie type...
The emotional contact between rosy and Aisha looks realistic...
the character of rosy and karan they both are depicted very well...
I will be eagerly waiting for the next chap but in the end todays chap was just WOW
i mean some mystery is now solved and some will get solved i hope so soon...
waiting for next update👏