Arjun FF: The Lady in Red.. Thread 2. Link added.. - Page 29

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Di awesum kya jhakas update lol
loved it..
rosy just wow... Thanks!
fbs too gud di..
any chance of arisha talking to each other lol..
Kya karoon.. Koshish toh yahi karti hoon.. Lekin dono hi ek se ziddi hain..
superb di
amazing concept...
p.s. di net ni chalta sorry fr short coment di..!!
yay!!
me done..
tc di..!

Originally posted by: Seenavas

so arjun and ayesha childhood frinds???

they all r connectd but how?

hope u will reveal it soon

waiting

for the next

Originally posted by: anahita.095

reading all parts in one go.its awesome.I m New to IF so haven't read any of yours work .
thanks for such a lovely story.

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

Another mind blowing update Avantika.

All I can say is wow, wow, I was so engrossed in the story, didn't even realized it that the update had ended, I kept waiting to read more.

Anyway, Rosy is just as mysterious yet I can't help but feel as though I know who she is to Ayesha and Arjun, I hope what I am thinking is right.

One thing I have yet to figure out is if Arjun has recognized Ayesha or not, and if he has then why has he not acknowledge her yet?

Really want to know what happened to her family and why is Arjun blaming himself for whatever happened int their past.

From the glimpses of the past you have given us it seems they were good friends at one time, but now they act as strangers for whatever reasons.

Why does Ayesha get shy and withdraws when Arjun is around, I am wondering just like Rathore, but hope to learn some more soon.

What can I say, once again you left me wanting more, but I loved what you gave us and I am looking forward to more. Please do update soon.

Thanks for the PM.

P.S. I was supposed to update today, couple of my family members just came back from India and they are both sick, so didn't get to finish the update, hope to do it tomorrow.

Originally posted by: nishal310

hey avantika it was awesome update dear

i like it. you are such a brilliant writer yaar

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: 1likeNoOther

Very interesting though I am a little unsure.
Ayesha's cousin is roshni or some1 else????
Good update 😛

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome posts...read both in a go...

Love Rosy more now...she is such a superbly drafted character...great creation dear!

Karan is again a cute amazing one...loved his flirty yet sweet talks with Rosy!

and that dialog of getting a humsafar was soo nice...loved it!

So Arjun and Aisha are childhood friends...WOW that sound cool..a great plot in fact!

Rosy also knows him...thats a surprise! you are adding suspense and secrets...unfold it soon!

cont soon!

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb mindblowing update..!!!

loved it..!!!

still confused about rosy's past..!!!😃

but am loving her more and more with each update..!!!

love karan and rosy convo..!!!

karan's ishq wala love dialogue was amazing..!!!

arjun ayesha are childhood friends..!!!!

and ayesha's cousin is roshni right?

loved ayesha and her cousin's bonding..!!!!

ayesha arjun and her cousin's flashback scene was nyc..!!!

so rosy also knows about ayesha and arjun but how?

cant wait for the next part..!!!

continue soon...!!!

thx for the pm..!!!

Originally posted by: Enchantress

My dearest Avantika ,

Let me tell you this story is just turning to be more and more interesting and intriguing. So, much of suspense , i really can't handle my curiosity.

At times i m confused thinking what exactly is the relation between Ayesha and Arjun. They have a lot in common, lot of memories actually. Back from there childhood. One thing that i m able to make out of it is that Ayesha is the cousin of the girl who was Arjun's i guess childhood friend or should say something more. And, this girl is no more now. And, both Ayesha and Arjun are there for a case but actually they did recollect many past memories , good one's and bad one's.

Now, what i m confused about is who this dead girl is ??? Roshni??? By the way I have one question and that is -Is Arjun already married in this Fiction too??? I don't remember something of this issue being mentioned in the previous updates or if it is i just can't recollect. I m just confused. And, if he is married then i guess a lot more will be clearer.

Rosy, she is the most intriguing character in this one. Bold, beautiful , intelligent and emotional at the same time. She does have a lot more stored within her then she actually portrays. M confused between the relation between Ayesha and Rosy too. Are there past connected to one another or they have different issues from there past. But, are working on a same matter. Ufff!!! M hell confused and at the same time curious. Because someway i know one thing these confusions will be sorted as the story moves forward and unfolds it layer by layer. This is the reason i m hell eagerly waiting for the update and you better update soon!!!

Also , i would love to have a picture of karan too if you have someone in your mind, because even he is turning to be an important character.

Amazing chapter , dearie..

~Dee~