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MriduB thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 👏
Waiting for the next part!
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
now it seems to get it a clear😛...yet there are a lot of things which still seem to be unclear😛...but i know u'll clear all of them one by one after every superb update of yours😃
arjun n ayesha are related😲...i kind of thought that n now u actually confirmed it...and i presume that ayesha's cousin was roshni !...everything is getting clearer with each passing update except our dear rosy n that is the best part of your story...the very fact that we know almost nothing about rosy,her motive,her past,how she knows ayesha...we know almost nothing about her n yet u have manged to en-grip us totally😃...this really is the usp of your story!😃
will be waiting for your coming updates n more such disclosures😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic awsum update...!!!!
lvd it...!!!
ayesha n arjun's past is related????😲
rosy has a past too...!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part...!!!
update soon...!!!!
m luvng this story..!! full of suspence and mystery...!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago

My dear Avantika,

This was shorter than usual, but in no way is it a filler chapter. You have divided it half and half between the Rosanna track and the Aisha-Arjun track, with an equal number of teasers (or red herrings?) left trailing all over them.

The world of intelligence and counter-intelligence work is very different from that of the regular police, and the skill sets needed in it overlap only in part with that of police work. It is far more demanding than police duty, for the successful intelligence operative has to be able to completely become another person, and at times several other persons, for long periods at a time. The only way to do that so well as to fool the professionals in the enemy camp is to shut out your real persona altogether while you are on an assignment, and live, talk and even think like the person you are pretending to be. Otherwise there will be slip ups, leading to covers being blown and valuable lives los and morale shattered. The mask must never slip, preferably even in private.

Now your Rosanna knows all this, but there seem to be corners in her mind where old traumas linger, so that when she sings, she bares herself too much emotionally and makes herself vulnerable. This is what Karan concludes, and as she does not contradict him, we can take it that it is true. However, I do not think Karan is right in thinking that she does not accept Pereira's offer of a job at his hotel because of this mental block. I think she wants to make Pereira run after her a bit more, so that when she does accept in the end, it does not seem that she has no option but to do that, and she has a stronger hand to play vis a vis Pereira.

I am sure your readers (except me) will now be busy working out if Karan is falling for Rosanna. I am not interested in this, except that I want make one point. Between intelligence operatives, falling in love can be dangerous, for it is almost sure to affect their mental focus and thus their mission. In a mission such as this one, there is always very serious risk, and Karan, and even more so Rosanna, run this risk deliberately. Love will make each of them afraid for the safety of the other, and this might make one or both of them choose to protect the other at the expense of the mission. So long as they are dedicated professionals, such weaknesses need to be avoided. It sounds cruel, but that is the way it is.

The Aisha Gupte turned 'just Aisha' is obviously Roshni's cousin, and so the dard ka rishta that she and Arjun share is now up front and centre. After Rosanna, Aisha is the character I like the most. She is a very strong woman, but not unemotional, only tightly controlled. A time will surely come when she will be less controlled. As will Arjun Suryakant Rawte, as he goes back to his old haunts and the familiar environs of his boyhood, where old traumas lurk, just waiting for the right moment to surge forth, like so many Jacks-in-the-Box.

But many questions still remain, as they should. On to Khopoli!

Shyamala Aunty

PS: I have noticed one more thing. You are now hooked by this tale as much as I am, or your other readers are. If this was not so, you would not update it so regularly. I am of course more than pleased about this!😉


Heylo dearies.. A biig thank-you to each one of you for having read and commented on the FF so far.. I can see many of you are confused by twists popping up every now and then; have to warn you.. 'there's a lot in store here'. 😉😆

Okay, for those of you, who are confused about Arjun-Aisha's connection with Khopoli: Maybe, you seem to have forgotten that Arjun had met Inspector Sanjay Gupte at a police station in Raigad.. Who knows, it could be the one at Khopoli!! 😉😃

This one might appear as a filler to a few of you.. I'd say, this and the next one will prove to be truly significant in the days to come.. 😃

Okay then, sit back and read on.. 😃

Chapter 4
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
the story is getting even more nd mre intresting by each update
curious to knw mre about their past
intersting precap
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thnx a lot 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for being so late...Just loved the story so far...
Read 2parts...would complete reading the other parts with a lil break..

Its awesome story yaar...

Loved the Airport entry you gave for ROsana..
So the Trio are on a secret mission...

Arjun's pain...This Sikky is here too.
Loved the way Arjun expressed that he too wanted to be a police officer...

KAran and Rosy..they are so cool...finally she is done with the Tatoo..

The story is really going so intence...Suspence qoutient on high...

Karan and Rosy how calmy they managed everything with the earpiece..
that was really great going...
Karan already hooked to Rosy..

"KaSy " would be the name..
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Posted: 12 years ago
avantika :


commenting on three updates together, rosy d'cousta had been one of the most amazing characters i have come across in the FFs till date on IF. and i loved the way you have added layers to her character while keeping that "mysterious " feel about her intact.. must say, karan and her made a fabulous pair when it came to work. the entire drama at the Club, starting from rosy's seductive dance moves to attract perriera to slyly attaching the bug to know of his moves better, from the fake fight to the car drive .. only revealed more and more of her courage and quick-wittiness, enough to cover her occasional vulnerable moments. back to team ETF, seems like Arjun and Aisha shares a common past ..umm, let me guess, is Aisha Sanjay Gupte's daughter😉 ? and the cousin being referred ..Roshni 😉?

update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ,
U make me fall in love with Rosy again !!!!!"Sigh"She is definately a very well written character .
Also i think Aisha & roshni were cousins is that true ...😉
Karan insights towards rosy and there understanding is definately something i look forward too..
Brilliant update !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi avantika di...it was an brilliant update...rosy is too mysterious and karan is also agood friend aisha n arjun's past are attached to each other... waiting for the revealations...i just want to tell u since this is exam season so i may not comment on ur updates plz bear with it...just for this week...awesome update di...update soon

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