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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Onset of troubles.!
Interesting.


Indeed! Haha thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chulbuli94

GHAUSIA~~~~update was so short

</div><div>I m with Khushi's mom~~~~~I loved her protective nature
ASR~~~~u'll have to prove your love !!!!
update soon !!!!



Maaf kardo yaar! When I had written these chapters back in December the parts were this short. I'm just posting them how I originally wrote them.
Her mother's reaction was one that could be expected of a mother. She is just concerned for her daughter; she doesn't want her heart broken! Arnav has a long way to go!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia_92

THAT'S what he did to her? Crap! I couldn't have imagined... the flashback, I mean, crap... no he's not like his father but that act would scare anyone, let alone khushi. Although I do understand khushi is at fault too, for ignoring his calls, but his anger was unreasonable, to some extent if not entirely.

cheers
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Yep, and it was a big risk writing it because I didn't know how it would be received. Arnav was scared too, mostly of the fact that he could actually do something like that & an action like that was bound to remind him of what his father did. But he cannot be justified in what he did - he took his rage out in an aggressive way on a third party; yes he was drunk but does that at all justify it?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Wow! Very emotional and power packed update. Arnav has so many demons inside of him that he takes it all out on Khushi.

It made me sad that her first kiss was so horrible and with so much fear involved.

They really need to talk & he needs to start begging for forgiveness.


Thank you! Yes, Arnav is a very troubled character and when he lashes out he doesn't care who he hurts in the process. He has much to learn still, and maybe it's time he learnt some things from Khushi now as she has grown up too.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was quite an intense update, but however written perfectly. I think both have misunderstood each other, because Arnav tried contacting khushi and she ignored him then when khushi tried contacting Arnav it was too late. Poor guy was dealing with his mothers illness, but however if he had been drinking it does not justify how he behaved with khushi and forcing himself on her by kissing her, but I'm sure Arnav has realised that he might be turning into his dad, gave him a wake up call. Continue soon please xx



Thank you! I'm glad you felt I did justice to the chapter! 😳
Exactly. This communication breakdown has been going on for a while and it has to be addressed by both. Maybe this is the wake-up call both needed!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wens the next update im dying to read on after tht scene
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mxk3444

So I don't know whether to comment on forums or your blog.. So India Forums it is. I can see why this was a hard chapter for you to write. I can't believe they weren't in contact for months. Arnav should have at least informed her of his mothers deteriorating health. Arnav really had no right to accuse her like that esp since he left her for so long.their friendship isn't the same anymore... Thanks for the update :)


You can comment on either, but I reply more on IF 😊
Yes, I tried to keep an element of reality in there in that people do get separated for long periods of time and Arnav tried his level best to stay as far away from her as possible, hence he didn't tell her about his mother. They're both now beginning to realise there is something different in their friendship. Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ASR6262

very interesting part love it
continue soon please and thank u for pm me


Thank you & no problem!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurima.devu

A very emotional chapter...very well written... Loved the update..


Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

wow intense update
emotional


Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply fabulous.loved it


Originally posted by: sheenalipkknd

aww khushi 😭

and love the update 😊


Thanks guys! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1408

I m nt able to get this arnav.wht he wants from khushi


Your questions will hopefully be answered in future parts. If there's anything in particular you want me to explain though I will 😊

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