SS: Colours & Promises (Part 8 Pg 39) 23/07

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Great, intense update!!

According to me, I don't think Khushi was fully justified enough to slap him. Yes, he did say some dirty things, but a slap was uncalled for..

Though Khushi was hurt at what he said, I don't think she's able to understand the inner turmoil Arnav is going through.

She didn't answer his calls..and he did not inform her of his mother's illness..so both are kinda balanced here..

But what is more important is Arnav's mental state. He's mentally messed up. With his mother being ill. So my take is that he behaved like this just because he's not in a good state and he's also drunk..

And by slapping him, she made things worse. He ended up kissing her

But I'm quite glad he has realized that maybe he's turning to be like his father...

Disclaimer 😛

My opinion on the slap is partly because I've always had a soft corner for Arnav. I always sympathize with him. In this SS & the show..he's an angry young man coz of his treacherous father 🤢

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Very emotional update dear. Fell bad for both Arnav and Khushi. So much misunderstanding.

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Just read it all in one go. A wonderful story.

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Annie Mookerji

@absolutelyarshi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Hey Ghausia!!!

Annie here..

Oh man!!!! Intense chapters yr!!!! You just keep me on the tenterhooks with ur story.. I just cant wait to find out wats gonna happen next... the kiss scene was sooo intense n dramatic... I'm imagining what wud have happened if this scene really happened in the show.. I wud literally have jumped off my seat...

Still, the wait is never-ending...

As usual, a song describing Arshi-

"All night staring at the ceiling

counting for minutes I've been feeling this way

So far away and so alone

But you know it's alright
I came to my senses
Letting go of my defenses
There's no way I'm giving up this time
Yeah, you know I'm right here
I'm not losing you this time

And I'm all in, nothing left to hide
I've fallen harder than a landslide
I spent a week away from you last night
And now I'm calling, calling out your name
Even if I lose the game, I'm all in
I'm all in tonight, yeah I'm all in, I'm all in for life"

(All In by Lifehouse)

dont know why i felt this song was for Arshi. I was listening to it, it just made sense in the way Arshi is dr in my mind...

Neway, Take care dear.. waiting for ur updates...

Love always,

Annie😊😊

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Sia

@SiasCreations

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

I will reply to all the comments before the next chapter is up. Please bear with me!

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Waiting for update Dear...its more then 13 DAys...😭😭

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Very wonderful!

Loved it

It's a bit sad and confusing but the memories do help in clarifications... Awesome!

Please update soon!

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

I wonder why isArnav like this??He always hurts Khushi !!

pls write a longer update😊

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Wow, I came across this story in your VMs. And I am so impressed Gausia, I had no idea you were such a good writer. Khushi's reaction to her mum's words is natural. She knew about his ex-girlfriends, and he did disappear while he was in Harvard, on top of it all he did try to kiss her. So obviously she's confused. Arnav's reaction to her, while not exactly abusive, is disrespectful. He has a lot of apologising to do. Looking forward to the next chapter.