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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I Love it, Love it, Love it, Love it a lot! 🤗
Continue Please as soon as possible!

Hey, Do you still want the summary ?? you pm'ed me that you mixed it up?? So do you?

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow awesome start👏

continue soon😊

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

it was amazing...

thnx for pm...

waiting for next part..

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome concept!
Beautifully penned..
I wanted to read further!!

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful work yaar, mast plz continue

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

jst one wrd i can say...BEAUTIFUL.

luved the way it started... plz do continue it nd update asap...

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

^^ Due to unavoidable circumstances, called Examinations, this One Shot is on a *hiatus* . The author apologizes for all the inconveniences caused, albeit, she would be semi-active.

The PMs would be received sent by fellow authors, yet, updates would be processed slowly.*Inconvenience Regretted.*

Updates would be posted as soon as possible, albeit, the readers are requested to wait for some time.

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huma

@d3ians

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

great!!!!!!!!! pls pm me for the nxt update!!

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Plz plz plz pm me. M damn curious about the story...

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

I do not get the logic behind one shots having parts. The whole idea behind a one shot is that it does not have anymore parts and the story ends within one itself. As it is, I must tell you the reason behind this bitter opening is that I was engrossed and you ended abruptly enough break my heart, figuratively of course. 😳 Anyway, please continue it and continue soon. 😳

This is a mature piece of writing. I sense a lot of maturity in your sensibility as an author in this prose. It is exceptionally well written and a delight for every grammar and vocabulary obsessed reader. Besides this is really the first one shot (which isn't quite a one shot, because it has parts) that I wholesomely like. From the writing to the theme to the flow of it all - it's a neat and exceedingly sublime piece of writing. I like my read better when the subject is relative. So, yeah it is relative. Swayum, the character is phenomenally penned. Sharon's got an edge of mellow understanding to her character, also she's in love with him. They're best friends now. Cliched as it is, it's cliched for a reason - the theme almost always works. 😆 Ah, well.

That'd be it. Thanks for the PM.

PS The title also is beautiful. 😳

PPS Good luck for your exams, mate! (:

Kanks