FINALLY 😲, finally you published this fanfiction 😆.. seriously it was hightime and you have right, i thought really you will never publish it. But i am so glad you did it finally 😊
I am really later than late 🥱, 6 pages already and i am commenting NOW, and i really needed a lot of time to edit, sorry tough.
and yeah congraaatz :) hope this thread will end soon :) and update faster you already have 10 chapters written :D
coming to the update, okey i said always you dont need to rewrite it and so on, and i think you really dont need to rewrite it, but GOSH seriously now, you write damn well 😃.
it was really nice reading the proloug, after knowing already a lot of the story. Actually, how you summarized all the incidence with ammy and all her emotions, actually cant describe it what i want to say, but hats off, really well written :)
you know i seriously thought, that i wont like this all, you know i LOVE youre first adition of LI, and seriously i love everything about the story. The convos, the text messages, and i have to say youre AMAAZIN in it, and i am soo happy that you didnt let it be :D.. and honestly speaking i miss the hindi convos in this adition but its okey :), and after readin 3 times the first adition, i really did thought that this adition cant be better than the first one, but i am was WRONG :D
i really enjoy youre style a lot and as you said its really better written than the first one :) but phir bhi i miss the hindi convos 😆.. okey now comin the the actual update :D
really really beautiful update. seriously, what i love about youre new style, you describe EVERY SINGLE thought, every single move she does and you did it soo well :) and through ridhimma, i think, we can understand you as a person :) .. love the way she thinks something and than aprublty changes her mind and how you write this thing is OUTSTANDING.😊
AHHH 😃, those amaazin text messages :) i am soo glad they didnt changed and they have the same magic, like the hindi text messages :) AHH I AM SOO GLAD :D
Calm down Riddhima. You're flawless. You're going to blow his mind. You're going to turn on that charm Rahul says you've got, and bowl him over. And he's going to hire you, give you that contract because you've got talent and everything that's happened so far is a build-up to this. Because this, is where you begin, and you're going to nail it
I LOOOVE THIS PART 😆.. i sooo love that monolog :) so damn well written. I have so much in my mind, to say how much i love everything you write and i want to convey it in words, BUT i am so bad in describings something, then outbreaks like that will come out and then nothing :D hope you get what i want to say :D
the emotional part, was soo perfeclty penned down 😊. just wanted to say PERFECT. you didnt overdo it, just perfect :) the bonding btw them is magic you portrayed it just brilliantly :)
enjoyed the convo btw ridz and ammy :) and AGAIN those amaazin text messages 🤣.. i love them :D..
Briliant update and i think that was one of my biggest comments ever, but what to do, so many emotion are connected with this fanfiction :)
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