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abditory.

@abditory.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

CONGRATULATIONS AANYA!!!🥳

Congo baby!! May you write many more FF's .I m glad i came across your FF. And Yes you were right its a lot better now but earlier also it was good 😆. Aww i feel sad for Rahul and Riddhima though Muskaan was a nice support for them. I love the way you showed Riddhima's emotions and her thoughts in the prelude .Its actually true human nature. The prelude just gave away the emotions and yes power of love. 😳 And the chat you showed between the friends is exactly so real 😆. And Armaan's polite nature i just love it. Cant wait for love story to start. Overall it was just P.E.R.F.E.C.T^^

P.S.HAPPY NEW YEAR. WISH YOU A GREAT YEAR AHEAD:)- Salwa

Edited by Salwa_Mehrin - 12 years ago

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Congrats Aanya! Now I can't wait to read the first chapter!

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i missed the first page... Hawww

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Aanya_PMaccount

@Aanya_PMaccount

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

PMs sent :)

I want long comments :P

HAPPY NEW YEAR 🤗

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shewolf.

@shewolf

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

I should have kept an eye on the thread or bugged you to res for me on pg 1. but koi nai mera bad 😆
and just so I don't sound all creepy 😆 I've been stalking quite some people, well all my writer friends, idk i've picked this habit of reading between breaks 😆 and damn you write so well 😳 now I feel like kicking myself for now stalking before 😳

I'll read soon and comment but for now its a res :)

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Aanya, I have to say that your writing has changed a lot and I mean in that in a good way...LOL! I like to read FFs that have a clear understanding because it makes it more easier to understand. The first chapter was amazing! I liked the little humor you added it into and it was sad what happened with Rahul and Riddhima. Muskaan being in here obviously has to make it fun. Can't wait to read when the AR love story starts! Hope this is long enough, but I can't promise you that every single time it will be this long! :P Happy New Year to you BTW. It's still New Year's Eve where I live.

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Bookmarked for last-day-before-school-reopens-after-newyear-hols-read..😳

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awwiee loved it...

it is soo good that u interlacing flashback with present...

i like this way of writing... coz many a times all the flashback gets boring... i get bored actually... didn't mean to hurt u... sorry if did...

too good...

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Because I have loved your writing for quite a time now, couldn't help but divulge in the prelude on my new year's eve and guess what, I am glad this is among the last things I did in 2012. Profoundly intelligent words with the absolute realism of human thought was oh-so-well blended into those few sentences and well yeah they came off as addiction catalysts as I put this in my must-read lists. Brilliant start and among the best preludes I have read so far.

-Amal.

PS.Happy New Year. Wishing you a memorable and joyous 2013, dii. <3