FF: IPK New Year Teaser Pt. 4 PG 19 (24/01) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
you should continue
it was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
you know what?? i loved your story!! and doesn't matter that the new year was one month ago... hame ff se matlab hai... please do continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Definitely continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Continue the story when you feel free...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Do it anyways dear. Our imagination would take us to the time you put in your story. We will have a ride of your time machine...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
I am absolutely sure that all of us IF readers would very much appreciate if you would continue and complete the story😊😃!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
waiting cotinue soon and plz pm me when u upload
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Well I thought of not to continue with the story, but then all the nice and motivating comments made me to continue.
But again I was stucked by another story in my mind, which resulted into my very first OS: He's married. So what!
After that I continued with the writing of this story, but due lack of time, I haven't finished the update as I have thought of it to be. But I will soon post a part of it as a teaser. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Quoting a movie hero from the last year named 'Rowdy Rathore':
I am back! 😎
Yeah after a very long time and I'm sorry for that. But due work (new projects) and not to withhold my laziness I wasn't able to update as planned when I had started this FF and this let me also think of not continuing this FF.
But some particular readers made me to rethink and get all the credit for the teaser below.
So my special thanks goes to dewdropsoflove, because she again and again told me to continue and even adviced me, how to continue despite lack of time. 😊
And I also want to thank
arunasankar
..Divya..
Rohinid
lazylad8-FauZi
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Jyo.Arshi.IPK
aishu3003
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Ok now as already mentioned here comes the teaser. Enjoy it. 😃
Teaser

Location: Raizada Mansion (RM), Main hall
Time: 30th december, late evening after dinner

Camera showing Akash and NK sitting on the couch with the big wall picture in the background.

Camera swings to right and shows Payal and Anjali sitting on the couch with the windows in the background. Payal is holding a big photo album in her hands. The Camera swings again to right and now shows Mamiji, Naniji and Mamaji sitting on the couch with the stairs in the background. The camera moves up the stairs till top of them.

Arnav and Khushi appear in the frame holding hands and start walking down the stairs till they are standing left to the couch, where Mamaji , Naniji and Mamaji are sitting.

Naniji: 'Aarav so gea?'
[Is Aarav sleeping?]

Khushi: 'Ji Naniji. Abhi hi use sulaa ke neeche aaye hain.'
[Yes grandma. Just made him sleep and then came down.]

Anjali: 'Sachi? Par uske awaaz to kabse nahi aarey hai aur uske kamre ke light to bhi kabse bandh hai. Lagta Aarav to kabse soreya hai. Tum dono phir itni der kahan te?'
[Really? But his voice wasn't hearable for long time and even his room light was switched off long
ago. Looks like Aarav has been sleeping long time ago. So what were you both since then doing upstairs?]

And Anjali is having a big smirk on her face. Arnav looks at his Di, eyes narrowed, but also smiling at his Di. Khushi is blushing.

Khushi: 'Nahi to, hamara matlab kuch nahi.'
[No, I mean nothing]

Payal: 'Kya hua Khushi? Tum itna shar ma kyun rahi ho?'
[What happened Khushi? Why are you blushing so much?]

Anjali: 'Payal Bhabhi, lagta hai Khushiji ko kuch yaad karne se itni sharam aarey hai.'
[Payal, looks like Khushi is blushing because of she is remembering something.]

Khushi now is blushing even more.

Khushi: 'Diii, aap bhi na.'
[Anjali, you na]

And she runs towards Anjali and Payal and sits next to Anjali hugging her from the side.

Camera shows everyone in close-up laughing and stops at NK.

NK: 'Come on Khushiji. Tell tell!'

NK looking around with a smile on his face. Suddenly he stops and also his smile disappears.

Camera swings around where Arnav is still standing. Camera moves close to his face. His eyes are narrowed, but this time there is no smile on his face.
Camera zooms out and Arnav starts walking towards NK.
Camera swings back to NK on the couch, who is now looking panickly in every direction.
Edited by A_R_S - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
nice teaserr!! updatee soon please 😛

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