arshi ssWHY ALWAYS SHE HAD TO PAY? ch1 6/1/13 pg17

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why always she had to pay???

why alsways she had to pay to prve her..

to prove her innocence...

why always hse has to lose her precisious things..

why always she has to face humiliation....

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chapter 3-pg-17

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Author's note:
"I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u".
If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME.

i know i have started this stpry long ago but my previous threads got destrpyed soo i made this new thread for new readers u can read it here...

chapter 1

KHUHSI'S
BIRTHDAY SURPRISE


Arnav decorated there room with flowers and lights like a marriage hall and set up a mandap
there and gifts khuhsi a very beautiful red lehanga to wear and said her to get
ready and wen she came out in that lahenga arnav was stunned to see his
beautiful bride who was looking like an angel.

LAHENGA-



Then arnav
and khushi goes to the mandap pandit was there and they got married againg and
then arnav tolds pandit to goo back without letting anyone know that what
happened.


Arnav see's
khuhsi she see's arnav and hugged him tightly crying with tears of happiness.khushi
says


k-arnavji
you are soo sweet I'.


a-what I
khushi ??


k-nothing'.


a-plsss say
na I have also said that to you on phone remember


k- arnavji I
LOVE U


a-I LOVE U 2
khushi


k-thank you '.. for this lovely surprise


a-my pleasure khuhsi kumara gupta arnav singh raizada


arnav
carries khushi in his arms and take her to there bedroom and puts her down he
slowly takes her dupatta down frownm her head and slowly takes his three heavy necklace's off and kissed her on neck than he take of her earings and kissed her ears he take off his bangles and kissed on her both the hands he then took of her payals and kissed her feets he was about to kiss her on lips than she rans away to the corner he hold's her
there and kissed her they both kissed eack other with passion.he slowly takes his shirt off and then he opens khushi's dori and then they goes to bed IN NIGHT
THEY CONSUMED IN FLAMS


NEXT MORNING


Khuhsi was
sleeping her one hand was on arnav's chest along with her head and his chest arnav's hand was on khushi's head khushi slowly opened her eyes as the harsh rays of sun were broking the
romantic moment and seeing her and arnav in this condition she blushes and became like a red tamato.


She kisses
arnav on his cheeks and then on his forhead and then gets up from the bed without disturbing her laad governor b'coz she didn't wanted to wake him up
from such a besutiful sleep.


She gets
ready and goes down and makes tea for arnav and goes to there room she slowly
goes to arnav and said


k-arnavji
wkae up!!


a-hummm''.


k-wake up
mr.hubby it's 8:00 clock now


a-let me
sleep I am not going office today.


k-it's ok
but plsss wake up now nani ji is calling u for breakfast


arnav pluss
khushi on him self and says I love u khushi she blushed and was about to get up
when he pulled her on bed and was about to kiss her but she pulls him and he
falls down of the bed and khushi loughs and arnav also thay were loushing very
loudky that mami heared and muttered


m-phti sari
toh phati saari ab arnav bituabhi usike ke hoo gaye hai kaise has rahe hai
donno anjaali bitiya kit oh fikar hi nahi ahi


they goes to
diining table and ate there breakfast




1 MONTH PASSED


Payal and
khuhsi were in sabzi market for buying subzi than suddenly khushi faints payal
was shocked and worried she called the driver and they take her to the hospital:-


Payal-is
everything alright docter is she fine??


Docter-nothing
happened to her but something is going to happen very soon


p-what
docter anything serious


d-no no she
is pregnebt congrats..


p-really
docterd-yes you can meet her I have told her about this news..


payal goes
in to the room and hugs khuhsi and says


p-khushi I am
very happy for u little sister


k-jiji I am
also very happy


p-let me
call naniji and tell her about this news


k-no jiji
this is not the right time to tell everybody about this new once everything
will get ok then I will myself tell all of them.promise you will not tell
anybody not even amma and buaji


p-ok.khuhsi


k-after 1
month I myself will tell then about this.


p-ok khushi.


DOCTER
ENTERS WITH THE REPORTS IN HER HAND AND SAYS


d-mrs.raizada
you have to take care a lot of yourself b'coz now u r not alone you are
carrying a baby with you.


k-ok docter I
will.


Docter prescribes
her some medacines and they leaves


RCHD RM

driver parks the car and
goes in running payal and khushi understand he has gone to tell everybody about
her fainting


Driver-arnav
bhaiya naniji mamiji(in a hurry and worried tone)


Everybody
came down and arnav asks what happened


Driver-bhaiya
who khushi bahbi fainted in the market and payal bhabi has taken her to
hospital and now they are back


a-what
khushi fainted but how?


Driver=I don't
know




Payal and
khushi enters in payal was helping khushi to walk b'coz she was felling week


Arnav-runs
to khushi


a-what happened
khushi are you alright how you fainted??


a-payal u tell what happned to her is she alright?


p-yes
arnavji she is alright therte is nothing to worry.


a-but how
she fainted


p-docter
said that she has some weakness and has to take a complete bed rest for 3
days,no work,no tension,nothing only rest




a-thank god!Now khuhsi you will not do anywork for three days you even don't think of geeting off the bed without my permission. Did you get that.


k-yes! Arnavji!


p-arnavji. They are khushi's medicine plsss give them to her on time docter said medicine's are very important t for her ch'(she stopped) health.


a-ok payal.


Nani-khushi bitiya abb app kaisa mehsoos ker rahi hai


k-hum theek hai ani ji app chinta mat kijiye


k-naniji how is di?


Nani-she is fine and sleeping you take care of yourself..


k-ok naniji.


She was going
ti satirecase but arnav stopped her and carries her in his arm's and said now you are not going to think of climbing up and staires without me kkgasr'.


chapter 1

plzzz do tell how was it???

i know its not that much good coz i posted the same part which i wrote in july...

part will also be the same as before...

its a little amature writing coz this was my second story in the forum and i started it on 16th july...

soo plzzz give ur views...


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Like the concept. Continue soon.
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Loved it.
I hope they dont make her give her baby away to anjali!!!!
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osm...do cont soonish :))
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#6
Interesting start..
Continue soon..
Thanks for the PM.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start
I just cant wait to read more
Plz plz plz update soon
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awww... he's so sweet
loved the update cont. soon
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Interesting storyline. do continue soon.
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The concept is interesting...
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

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