For my angel FF #1 (Chap 1 to chap 37) 20-05-2013 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I Loved it.
I am glad Anjali and the baby are fine now and back home.
Lily asking Khushi to be her mom was heartbreaking.😭😭😭
She really needs KHushi in her life.
Can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃

Edited by zafi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh so updated part 8... anyways i read it in ur blog alrdy... i cried... *sobs* sobs* ... 😭
one such awesum part among 8 parts... loved it... lily is surely a swthrt... 🤗
i litrly felt lyk to take her in arms... i really dint get bored re-reading it... 😆
i frgt to tel u yaar... the way she learnd songs seeing kushi... as u said dramatic...i would say magical... a unknwn smile crept inbtwn my tears... i just love ths plot sooo much...love it... 😃
sry ..i missed telng it tat day ...cz i was busy affected by lily's wrds ' i want you...to b my mum...'''' 😭
love they way u write her gestures... 👏
as a person i always luk fr ths kind of smal smal gestures rathr big thngs... tats y lily got into me so much...just lyk armaan...or i would say a lttle mre than him... 😆
Edited by saranyaaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Loved the update..my heart goes to the little one Lilly...
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... Great story... 👏
U have portrayed arnav soo well... His anger.. harshness... Indifference... All due to his lost love... Esp in d initial chapters...
Loved d way khushi told things to arnav abt lilly's birthday... Without caring his warnings... Her bond with lilly is soo sweet...
Lilly asking her to become her mother was really emotional... I had tears... Marvellously written... Thier conversation... Could feel d kids want for a mom... That was superb 👏
Hope lilly will ask pappa also for her mom... Or will nani act as cupid??... Or is it anjali???

Waiting for d story to unfold..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read dis part. lily is so adorable. wen lily is gonna tel arnav dat she needs a mother dat 2 her mith. waiting 4 dat

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update..my heart goes to the little one Lilly...

Continue soon

hey yes...evn my hrt is full of tat little cracker... 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note: this post is already posted in my blog!


For my angel: chapter 9

Strawberry Ice (ithe) cream...



Morning...
RM
Dining table

Lily:-papaa!...you drop me to thchool, na?!
Arnav:-mmm…no, today, you will spend it with me!
He said looking at her…
-mmm but my Mith is waiting for me!
-mmm…today is no school!
-no! today is Tuesday…not thunday!
-mmm…you're right! But today …what about we go to the zoo! Me…I'm feeling so lazy to go to office!
-Not good! You should work…me, I'm ready to go to school!
She insisted, holding his hand:
-come on! I want to go!...Mith is waiting…
-what about going to the park?
-no! can't…my mith is waiting, for me…
Lily insisted…
Nani, Anjeli and Shyam was there looking at her
Shyam:-this is the first time, I saw children who want to get to school and teachers!
He said smiling to Lily…
Nani:-if the teacher is good then every child wants to go!
-my mith is good! Too good! (she said excited that they are talking about her teacher)
-I know!
Nani caresses her hair…
-eat first!
-Lily, listen…today is holiday, you don't have school…no one will go neither to school, nor to work! So even your Miss will not be there!
He lied…he starts to lie…
The great ASR who never lie…lied only for his angel…he could do anything to not see her hurt…or see one tear dropping from her eyes…this is a mother party day, he will not goanna send her to school, no matter what…
Shyam looks at him…with questioning eyes and all looked at him strangely…
Today is a holiday??
Lily looks at him:
-okey…paa…today cartoon day?
She said looking at him…
He smiles and nodded positively and she winked to him…
Arnav and Lily spend all the day watching and playing…they forget about the lunch…as Nani was out and Anjeli was busy with her baby like always…
Arnav saw the time…
-Angel! You're hungry?
-no! not yet…
-oh yes! You don't eat anything since morning! What about going to your favorite restaurant?
-what ??? yeeehhh …you're tho nith! (so nice)
-you're altho thooo nithhh (you're also so nice)
She giggled when he starts talking like her…
****
Restaurant:
Arnav and little princess having her favorite meal: cheese and mushroom pizza…
-eat well….little angel!
-and you eat, paa!
She said while she drinks her coke and then she licked her mouth throw her tongue, he smiled…
-not only the coke, eat the pizza too!
-yeah, my paa
-are you happy, bitiya?
-mmm
She nodded positively…
-where you want to go now??
-home!
-home? You don't want to go out with me somewhere?
-mmm
She starts thinking…cutely…
-ok! To the big big mall!
-mall? And why?
-because I want…to buy something to you!
-me?...(he smiles) something like what?
-mmm like new clothes!
-what? You think that my clothes are getting old and ugly?
Lily giggled as Arnav was acting like he was desperate…
-no! Nani thought you need new shirts!
-achaa…
-yeah!
She nodded positively…
-you and your nani!!...and which color you want me to buy those new shirts?
-pink!
-Pink?...hey Lily, am I your doll? I'm a boy, not a girl!
-so?
-so? So, choose to me boys colors!
-boys colors? Like red?
-red is a girl's color!! Lily…
-but you loved this color too much!
-yes but I can't wear this color to go to office! Still I love this color! You're right!
-then purple (she giggled wanting to tease her papaa more)
-purple? Right? Come here!
He picks her from the chair and holds her…making her sit on his lap!
Arnav:-we goanna buy what we want! All what we want!
Lily:-many shirts?
-yes!
-ithe cream! (ice cream)
-of course!
-new tharee to nani!...a gift for everyone!
-you're so generous!
-Mith thaid should give to others…help others…
Arnav nodded:
-good! You're just good! I love youuu!
-I love you too my paaa
They start to yell "I love you" in the center of the restaurant…and poeple start looking at them...
*****
the mall:
As in the evening, after the party, Khushi was free …she went out of the school early that day, she benefits to go do shopping with Payal too that day…
The two friends go to the maul as well…
And the destiny want that they went to the same maul Arnav and Lily visit same time…
Payal and Khushi in the second floor of that maul…
Arnav and Lily taking the automatic stairs to come there as well…
before the shop:
payal:-imagining you with that saree, Khushi, beautiful to kill! In a party…a luxurious party and many, and there it was a handsome guy, looking just at you...your prince charming and there is another one for me too…I will be there also…in that party…
kh:-oho Payal! You stay a teenager! No! not just a teenager, a stupid one! Life doesn't educate you yet???
-what don't stop me from dreaming!
-no! Of course not! You can dream but don't involve me …after meeting some people…guessed is just safe to not dream at all!
-come on girl!...shut up! Will you? For now, let's enter this shop and try …just try those sarees…this you can do it , right?
Payal just pushed Khushi inside the shop where many sarees where there…
Payal picked two sarees…
She gives Khushi one red saree… and picked the purple one to her…
Khushi smiles and verified the price…she gets shocked opening her mouth!
-no! this …no! I will not even try it! Look! I should give all the money I have!
-oh come on! Just try it! Don't buy it!
Khushi nodded positively, she too wanted to try it…it's so beautiful!
In the other hand,
Arnav and lily comes inside the same shop…
-here for Nani!
Lily gestured a saree to Arnav…
He nodded and the shop girl arranges this to him…
-and for Di? Which color for her?
He looks at Lily asking and saw she's busy with something else: her ice cream…
Khushi gets out from the fitting room to admire herself in the mirror…
When she saw Arnav and Lily in the shop…
He was leaning in one knee to wipe her mouth and he was really smiling…
Her heart bits so fast seeing him…his smile for the first time…
Lily giving him an ice cream peck on his mouth …all smiling too…
Khushi, automatically, smiles…but nervously…
Payal comes out and see Khushi, Khushi was mesmerized seeing Arnav and Lily bond:
Payal:-you're just perfect and then like that (she takes off the hair clip from her hair, and Khushi's hair went down) more perfect!
Payal said so and enters again the fitting room to try another saree…
Khushi still mesmerized..when she heard:
-My mith?!...my mith!
Lily shouts seeing her miss…
Arnav looks at the same direction his daughter was looking …
And god…
The time has stopped turning…
He just stares at her…Khushi…
Is he seeing right?
Khushi was looking gorgeous… just perfect…
And his eyes naturally scan her from head to bottom…
And from bottom to head without even he gets conscience about his state…
He can see that pretty face…that long hair…
That tall and fit body…that milky skin…
The color giving her more life…
He can't get his eyes off of her…
He doesn't know what happen to him…
He should have getting fever…he just doesn't know what happen to him to that he looks that way to her…




Khushi felt nervous…

Seeing his eyes travelling all over her…
If she had some power of getting invisible that second, she will use that power…
He's shameless to look at her like that…
-My Mith…how beautifulll you are…
Lily comes running to her and hugs with the ice cream along in the middle…Khushi hugs her back and then both discovered the ice cream dirtying the clothes of both of them…
Khushi gets shocked…this saree…the pice of this saree…damn ittt!!!!!!
Lily opens her mouth…and eyes widely:
-thorry! (sorry)
Khushi looking at her…she's so cute and that too holding her ear…she hugs her again more tightly…
-it's ok! It's ok! Lily! We goanna clean that!
Lily smiles and pecks her in the mouth…just the way she was kissing her father…
It was kind of strange thing was happening…because Khushi immediately looks at Arnav feeling he was looking at her…still…he was scanning her…
Both look at each other after that…but Arnav was surprised…
Arnav knows Lily…she can't kiss that kind of kiss to everyone…
Ice cream peck is only to him that Lily gives that…
Not even to nani or to Di…only to him…
And Khushi was nervous also seeing Arnav was there and still looking with same intensity…
Both start to stare at each other…for seconds…which seems to be an eterninty…
When Lily pecks Khushi again…
-Ithe cream peck!
She said commenting her kiss…
Khushi looks at her amused and kisses her not only back on her mouth but all over her face…
There is all over ice cream on her soft face…
Arnav felt something strange…
He comes closer towards them…
For the third time, he gave her his third hanky to Khushi…
And khushi starts wiping Lily's face nervously because he was there, standing while she was leaning…in one knee taking care of Lily but she wasn't comfortable with him looking and looking and looking…
Lily was smiling in heaven…
-I'm thorry again!
-it's ok! I'm also sorry about your ice cream too!
Khushi silently standing up and starts cleaning the saree…how to pay it, now??
Payal gets out and looks at Khushi…
-oh god! How this is happened?? Sanka devi!...it's getting spoiled ….
Payal was about to continue when she saw Lily and Arnav looking at her…Arnav looked at her angrily:

Payal looked at Lily sawing the same strawberry ice cream traces in the red saree was in Lily's dress then she starts to understand...that's when Lily speaks:
-Hi! I'm Lily! It's me who did that! I'm thorry!
Payal looks at her and she smiles because it's the cutest girl she saw ever…
Arnav:-we are sorry Miss Gupta! Let me fix that!
he finally speak...
He gets out his credit card and gives that to the shopper…
Khushi:-no! no! it's not even necessare!
-it is!
He said firmly…


Khushi gets more and more and more tensed…
She saw him paying already for the saree…and for more sarees (the ones for Nani and Anjeli)
Arnav has the reflex to look towards her, again…and she comes closer with that outfit...
he can't look...he felt he can breath difficultly as she was so damn beautiful...
Khushi:-I can't accept Mr Raizada! It's too much! Why you pay for it?...I'm goanna just pay me for it!
he doesn't answer...
Lily comes to her and holds her hand…
-it's ok…it's because he loves red!
She said smiling…
-is that right paa?
-come on Lily! Let's go, now!
He said while he walks to get out from the shop…
Lily kissed her miss again and runs to hold her father hand
She turns again to said bye to her miss with her other hand…and send another kiss with her mouth...
Khushi continues to look at them while they are walking away…
Payal:-what kind of fathers is that?...if I'm his wife! I will never allow him to go here and there without me!...is she crazy?
-she is no more!
-what?...dead? I'm so sorry! So sorry for them…they are so cute…and the father is just and his girl also…poor baby! Poor big baby and poor little baby!
-will you stop?...he is the one making me lose my job months back!
-what?...such a monster…he's not handsome at all: how dare he?...and he's playing he's the generous guy paying a saree because his daughter gets it dirty! I can't believe those people at all! Those rich handsome arrogant people!
-shut up please and let's go away from here!
-but his daughter is such a sweetheart!
-she's my Lily!
-your Lily?
She nodded…
-she's my sweetheart!
She said looking at the hanky full of strawberries ice cream traces…


Note: I know I know I know
it's getting slowww between Arshi
I know it's getting so slow...( this is their first Rabba Ve)
but I can't do anything about it...
to be honest the real story doesn't start yet ...
don't throw tomatos pleaje
as it's part 9 and as I say their story dosen't start yet! still more to come...don't be impatient please, when you're this way, I became this way too :D
Let me please dedicate this chapter to Lopa... because this girl is just adorable and I want to be adorable also just like her :p
of course I want to say Hi and hug all my little lovely friends...
they know themseleves ;)



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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
yepieee im d frst one to lik and comment... 🤣 🤣🤣
ofcourse ths is t6he frst tym im being frst ... 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆
dinka chika...dinka chika hey hey heyyy...oh ya hey hey heyyy...
oh my god im nt gettng enough of ths icecream chap... love it yaar 🤗
Edited by saranyaaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: saranyaaa

oh my god im nt gettng enough of ths icecream chap... love it yaar



you're here?
hiii 😃
I send you Unfaithful the epilogue, I'm sure you will find it good also 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: the-crazy-girl



you're here?
hiii 😃
I send you Unfaithful the epilogue, I'm sure you will find it good also 😉

so fast u quoted me... b4 i could actually edit it... 😆 yes...i gt the mail...tats y i loggd in to chk...but as always chkd my angel here frst...

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