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For my Angel:
chapter 12:

For Buaji sake...



Payal comes also to the hospital…
Knowing by the neighbors also…as Khushi doesn't call her…
Nani , Anjeli and Payal are consoling her now…
But Khushi couldn't stop crying…she felt all weak and stands up…
All stand up also…
Kh:-I'm going to wash my face! I will come back!
Nani:-yes! dear!
Payal:-I will come along with you!
K:-no! I prefer being alone!
She walks away from them…
Arnav and Shyam were back from the doctor's office…
And in the hall of the hospital…they met…
Khushi looks at Arnav…and Arnav was looking at her too…
Both look at each other…
They don't know what happens right at that moment…
Shyam looking at that, he wanted to disappear but finding that it will be really awkward…
Khushi was looking at Arnav…and only him…she doesn't saw a pity but a concern in his eyes…
He walks towards her:
-Miss Gupta! Anything you need…just tell me…I…
But he doesn't finish his words…she looks at him
And then she walks away…
He was hoping to hear anything…
But nothing…nothing at all…
This is the first time, he proposes a help for someone…
The first time, someone ignores his effort being nice and concerned…
And the first he doesn't even feel bad about it!
He knows she's suffering!
*****
Late in the evening:
The doctor allows them to enter…
When they all enter the hospital room…
Khushi holds her Buaji hand…trying to hide her pain…
Nani looks at Buaji:
Nani:-Namaste!
Buaji said difficultly:-Namaste!
Nani smiles…
K:-Buaji! They are Lily's family: her nani, her aunty and her husband and her father…
Arnav approaches and greets her…
Ar:-I hope you're better now!
Buaji nodded…
Buaji keeps looking at him…and then at Khushi…
Nani..whatever was the situation was excited…she wants to benefit from the situation somehow…she doesn't know that Buaji has a dangerous disease…or nothing of that…she was thinking, she's getting well…
Nani:-we are not only Lily's family…we could be one family!
Arnav looks at her and then nodded negatively to that she doesn't say anything about the marriage proposal…
Not now…not before Khushi who is sad…not at this situation!
But Nani ignores that completely…
She looks at Buaji and then smiles…
-well…we liked your daughter Khushi so much!
Buaji looks at Nani wanting to understand the point…
Between old ladies…everything is possible…and by just exchanging looks…Buaji starts to understand…she knows already that Arnav is a single father…
Both understand each other…but silently…
Khushi doesn't understand the point…Buaji…yes…
The others remain silence…
But it was it…
A secret promise has been taken…
**********
After some days…
In Gupta house:
-what???
-you heard it right! I want you to get married! This is my wish before I die!
-you don't say this again or I will…
Khushi takes the two hands of buaji and kisses her palms…hiding her face there…she cried silently:
Buaji:-I know the doctor told you everything, Sanka Devi…
Khushi sobs…
-you don't cry my princess…will you realize my wish? Will you make this old lady happy and in rest?
Khushi nodded positively:
-you want my marriage and you're in that state?
Buaji nodded:
-a huge wedding…I want to see the mehendi on your palms…wearing the lehenga…wearing the mangalsutra…I want to see you with your husband and your family in law…
Khushi was crying silently…but smiling throws her tears…nodding positively to her Buaji…
-I want to see you protected before I...
Khushi puts her finger before her Buaji's mouth...
she gets up from there and goes towards Buaji closet…she takes out all the photos of the guys her buaji gives to her for the arranged marriages she always plan to her…
K:-All right my queen! This is Sameer and this one is….who is this one? And all single and just want to marry me? right?...see! I have just to choose…and your wish will be true…
She said that and sits down on her knees…putting her head on her buaji's lap…she cries again...
Buaji takes the photos from her hand…and then caresses her cheeks to wipe her tears…
Buaji caresses her hair and slowly makes her look at her and said:
-your husband is no one from those! Promise me that you will agree to marry him!
-I promise!
-Remember this promise! You go now and prepare yourself! Put some make up on!
-he will come now and take me in his home?
Khushi holds her Buaji knees…childishly…
-Pagal! no!...he and his family will come to ask for your hand, officially today!
******
Same time:
RM: Arnav and Nani:
Arnav:-No way! Nani! I couldn't do this while her buaji is dying!
Nani:-you do whatever you want! I'm doing whatever I want!
Nani walked away…he runs and stands before her…
Ar:-No! It's inappropriate, the lady is sick and you're going to ask for her daughter's hand!
Nani:-chote! All is done! I asked already! ...I visited her already before! ...Now, We are going to just fix the wedding's date!
Arnav looks at Nani…shocked, angry and nervously….
-Nani! Why all this?...it's my life damn it! And the girl's life!
-you said "yes"! her buaji told me that she said "yes"! we are just helping to make this fast! It's her Buaji wish also!
-she said "yes"??
********
Gupta house:
Khushi called Payal as she wants her friend with her…
Even if her marriage proposal will be arranged…and fast…
She wanted it to be complete…only for the sake of her Buaji, she could do anything…
They are in her room…
Khushi selects the red saree…
Kh:-even if I was decided to give him this saree back…still…it's so beautiful…I'm goanna wear it! I didn't have the time to buy another good one!
Payal looks at her:
P:-are you ok, Khushi?
Khushi looks at her friend, helplessly…
Kh:-No!
Payal:-you said yes for a man you don't even know!
-I know!
-you're crazy!
-if this will make my Buaji happy than I'm ok! I can't refuse this to her! (she takes a deep breath) I can do this! But what I couldn't do is to act that I'm alright before her, whenever I'm with her, I can't stop my tears…
Payal comes to her and hugs her tight…
P:-I'm always here as your sister! Not only a friend! Khushi! I really think that all this marriage is craziness but it's ok if this will make you feel better and make Buaji feel good!
Payal thought a little that this will maybe a good decision as she knows the level of the sickness of Buaji…if Buaji will leave….then Khushi will feel alone…In her heart, she prayed that the future husband will be perfect for her friend…that his family will be good to her…
She helps Khushi wearing the saree…
A knock on the door…
Payal and Khushi look at each other for awhile…
Payal:-it's ok! (she holds her friend's hands to support her) I will open!
Kh:-I will see Buaji in the room!
Payal went to open…Khushi comes behind her…
Before she enters her Buaji's room to call her…
She saw…something strange…
All the Raizada Family is there…
Nani, Arnav and Anjeli and Shyam…
No…
She doesn't feel surprised…
The last thing she could think about would they are coming to ask for her hand…
She imagined many other versions but this…
She thought they are here to see her Buaji…
They are good because also they were there in the hospital and she couldn't thank them enough…
"Namaste" exchanged…
An awkward moment was spend looking at each other…
After it…Payal invites them to have a sit…
Buaji comes greets them and sits on the sofa…
Nani sits beside her…
They exchange some talks secretly…seems like they know each other very well…
Anjeli looks at Khushi and finds her so beautiful…she couldn't hide her smile…
Khushi was feeling all strange…she's wearing the saree he pays for instead of giving it back to him…
Now, he saw her wearing it again…shame! She thought…angry against herself…
But why she's even thinking about this! Now…
She's now waiting for the man who will be her husband, he would also come any moment!…now that the Raizada family is here…it's maybe good that the future husband see and know that they have many friends also…
Nani:-Khushi beteya?
Khushi was lost in her thoughts…and didn't answer…she felt the hand of Payal on her shoulder…and wakes up from her thoughts…
Nani:-come here and sits between me and your Buaji!
Khushi looks at them but she doesn't suspect anything still…
She comes and sits beside them…
Nani holds both her hands…and looks at her all smiling:
-we are lucky…we can't find someone more carrying, someone kinder and more beautiful than you to be our bahu…
Khushi looks at nani…
What?
She didn't understand what she was saying to her at all…or what she meant...
The words she just heard are they for real or no???? She's not sure…
-Chotte is here and wanted to talk to you, also, before we fix the marriage date!
Chotte??? marriage date???????????????
She looks at him with wide eyes…
From the moment he enters…she just looks at him once…
But...He was only looking at her…
He doesn't know why…but maybe she intrigues him…the way she has to behave always spontaneously…
She couldn't believe her ears or her eyes or her senses…
Arnav Singh Raizada…
She couldn't imagine…
No!
No way!
No there is a fault…a huge one!
After seeing them and hearing Nani…
And then seeing him…
She has another confirmation…
They wanted her as their Bahu…
Maybe they have another son…??!!
They wanted her as his wife…
The wife of who????
Choteee??????
They talk many things that she doesn't hear or understand…she was lost finding another option, another meaning to their talks...
They were all smiling…of course but her and him…
she takes another look at him…because he was silent…and they are talking about them, their future…THEIR MARRIAGE!!!!!!
She was wondering how it comes that he's silent and doesn't say anything! Like: no! I hate her! I can't be her husband!...
He's just looking like that…
Means he wants that too…??????????
They want to that the date of their marriage will be fixed…
Nani kissed her forehead and Anjeli looks at her with a happy face…
How sweet they are….she should be happy…
But marrying a monster in such conditions is just so powerful for her…and she can't realize all what was happening for her…
She just can't…
He stands up…
Nani looks at her:
-as I said…chote wishes to talk to you before we fix the date!
Buaji:-you can go and talk in your room!
What?
Anjeli:-don't be shy Khushiji…he is your "would be" husband!
Anjeli smiles to that thought and looks at Shyam who is smiling too that his saly Shab and best friend is getting married….Finally!
Khushi looks shocked but she's trying to act normally…
Nani:-Khushi beteya! Come on! I'm sure you have things to tell to each other…
She stands up like a status…
…And she promised already to her Buaji…Goddd!
She remembers the doctor's words…
She couldn't deny what her Buaji asks for…
She takes a deep breath…
And walks to her room…
Arnav follows her…
Now…both are inside her room…
Alone…he's not totally a strange…but now he is!
Many thoughts were in her head and she couldn't concentrate on one thought…
She couldn't think…or feel anything…
Both stand before each other…
He looks at her…
-Miss Gupta….
*****
Note:
I'm mean?
Am I?
Because I end it here…
What he has to say to her???
What do you think?
Niahahahahahaa…the answer Next update...
Oh! I know that many will "mith" Lily in this update…
But no problem she will be present in next updates…
Hope you like it…and you're enjoying because I'm enjoying this story too much…
I'm reading all your comments full of Love...Thank you from the bottom of my heart
kisses
your crazy-Girl ;)
Edited by the-crazy-girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update. waiting eagerly to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE
I THINK ARNAV GOING TO TELL THE REASON OF THERE MARRIAGE
I MISS LILY SOO MUCH
LOVE IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. I think arnav tell her the actual reason behind his marriage. waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update plzzz update son
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Posted: 12 years ago
@the-crazy-girl: Nyc SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
For my angel:
chap 13:

The Deal



Ar:-Miss Gupta…
-you??!...
He stops and looks at her…in her eyes…
He could see she's shocked and nervous and troubled…
Khushi looks at him…for awhile…she doesn't care…neither he's making her scared nor she was ready to listen to him….she wants to talk so...she continues talking to him…pointing him by her index….
Kh:-you?! and me?????!...you! And…I mean: I…with you…???
Khushi looks at him with questioning eyes…she takes her index away and looks at him…
Kh:-Talk! (she said all troubled, the cheeks red from anger)
He was about to talk but again, angry like her but…she cuts him…
-what do you…think when you think about that?
-excuse me?!
Troubled, she couldn't find her words…
He was angry but cold and indifferent….
She was angry but the blood is boiling inside her and many thoughts are fighting in her brain….just be imagining him being her husband…she looks at him…he goanna be her husband….
Means…
Means…she will cook for him?...she will eat with him?...she will talk with him? Think about her future with him? Sleep with him?...and maybe she will also have to kiss him...what???...her gutter mind was on for awhile…she looks at his lips…and then looks down immediately…like a teenager…she felt shy and she regrets that look…that "not innocent" look…
Kh:-I mean…how did…this…when you thought about this…how? like that?...I mean…like that…this idea…I…Listen! I can't …me, I can't be your wif…(she couldn't complete that word, she whispered it) I don't even think about you as a friend…and now, I have to accept you as my…No…I…No…
Arnav looks at her…he was already angry by all what she said to him within a second…but God! Why? Why he's finding the way she angry that much childish…and…that much…NO! NO! Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada….!!!
He felt that he was enough passionate…he didn't say anything about all that…and here he wanted to talk and she's talking non sense…with those eyes staring at him and then looking down and then back at him, challenging him…
He felt that awkward feeling and then all angry anew, he said:
Ar:-ok! So you're not agreeing about that! Fine! I was here to preciously ask you about your opinion before we fix the date!...ok…then…
He was about to leave the room but she shout…
Kh:-NO!
He turns his head to look at her…
Yes, she intrigues him…that girl…she will drove him crazy…
-No!...wait….mmm…I mean…(she hesitates) about the marriage…it's…I mean…We should discuss that…
-what do you want to discuss?
She looks at him all serious…a thing that he should know now…she should tell him about, she tell that firmly:
Kh:-if I'm going to marry you, you should know that I'm doing this only for the sake of my buaji…
She said that in one go and eyes down, she prays her Devi Maya secretly and then after awhile she looks up to him…to his reaction….if he will go she will not retain him…and about Buaji promise…she could marry any other boy…right?!
Arnav looks at her…he seems to be little surprised about her frankness…he was about to reply when his mobile rings…
He hangs up immediately …
-hi baby!
"Hi baby"?? and he is asking for her hand?
-yes my angel…
"yes my angel"?? and he's now about to fix his marriage with her…???
-No…I'm coming soon…ok ok ok…I will not be late…but just don't get angry against me…ok?...promise?...I love you too…careful! No! no! don't trouble HP! Play the aunty Game…yes, it's fun…yes….ok…my Lily!
Khushi looks at him…he can be sweet…but this can happen only with his angel…Lily…
Khushi smiles a little thinking about her…she misses her…it's been so long…a week without seeing her…she was busy with Buaji and she didn't see her…
Ar:-So…Miss Gupta?...should we fix the date or not?...if no, we will leave, if yes, you should know that we have something in common; I haven't any emotions towards you too!…the marriage is just a sort of a deal…for the two of us…you're doing it for the sake of your Buaji! I'm doing it for my angel…I'm ok to support you helping your Buaji and giving her the best conditions possible to get the best treatment…you support me taking care of Lily!...she wants you…to be…to be…
Kh:-her mum?
Khushi looks shocked at him, first and then she takes her time thinking and looking at him…
She has the confirmation…: she hates that man to the core…
She hates that language too much…
But…
But…
Only that name was enough for her to nod her head positively…
Lily…
She wanted to enter Lily's life…
Yes, she wanted to take this girl in between her arms and teach her to not to be rude like Papaa…but be always an angel…
She looks at him and tends her hand…
-I'm ok!
He looks at her eyes…and then at her hand….he takes his time…
She's confident and fabulous and he doesn't like that too much…
He holds finally her hand to make their "deal" an official one…
Deal…or promise…
When those hands join each other…seems like an electric shock attacks both of them…
Both take his hand off…and gets out of the room…
**
They get out…
And by that "deal" or like that they arrange them to call it…not only their engagement was fixed for the next Saturday of the same week…
But their marriage will take place the same month…
Khushi shivered when she heard that less than three weeks and she will be Mrs. Raizada….
And because Buaji can't stay alone after the marriage of Khushi…both will remove to RM…
Both: Buaji and Khushi….
Kh:-what about Lily?
They all look at her…
Nani:-what about her?
Kh:-I mean…we should inform her that I'm goanna enter her life…I'm goanna be with her…
Arnav looks at her…
Damn it!
Why she should be that much…fabulous????!...fabulous in thinking about that…
Lily doesn't know about that story about him marrying Khushi…
Yes, she wanted Khushi to be her mum…
But… she want to her Papaa to be married again???
Khushi thought about it …what if she hates her…knowing that?
Many kids don't want to their parents to get another life…
Lily will not be informed about the deal…
No one from the family knows about what they spoke in the room or their ideas…
Lily…
Kh:-I want to inform her myself!
She said looking at Arnav…
About Khushi-Lily stuffs…Arnav doesn't plan to make any objection…
He saw in her file and in her gestures for those days…that she knows something about kids…more than him…much more…
******
RM:
Lily's room:
Lily was playing when she felt two hands coming and hiding her eyes…she can't see who is there…she wanted to know who is hiding her eyes, don't letting her see….
Lily:-who?
With her soft hands she touched the fingers don't letting her to see…
Lily:-not paa?! Not HP!...than who?
The voice:-guess?
And then the hands get off the delicate face…
Lily immediately turns…
All happy…
All surprised…
All excited…
Li:-Mith!!!
It was Khushi who comes especially for her…that same day…she comes along with Raizada Family, letting Buaji with Payal…only to talk with that angel…and to be honest…because she missed her too much…
Kh:-my baby!
Lily cupped Khushi's face in between her tiny hands…and she looks at her…and then she hugged her tight…tighter…Khushi could feel her little heart beating too much…from happiness…
Lily was playing on the carpet in the floor…and now Khushi was on the floor…and Lily was standing and looking at Khushi like that…
She missed her Miss…her father explains to her that Miss is absent because her Buaji is sick but still…she missed her…and that too too much!
And then she has the idea to ask…:
Lily:-your buaji…fine?
Her look and her voice and her innocence and the way she asked her about her Buaji makes Khushi all vulnerable…two tears come out of her eyes…
Kh:-she's fine for now…you missed me?
The little angel hugs her so tight again…Khushi smiles at that power Lily puts to hug her every time…
Lily:-me…I love you…
Kh:-and me…I love you more!
Lily smiles satisfied about her Miss's answer…she's happy now…
She pecks her two cheeks and Khushi does the same, pressing more…
Little Lily presents her toys and dolls to Khushi…
Khushi played a little and then she takes Lily on her lap…
-you want me to be always with you?
Lily nodded positively…
-so you want me to stay with you? (Lily nodded)…what if I will be living here with you…
-you?...you can?
Khushi smiles and nodded…
Lily smiles and excited, she gets up…
-will you?
-you know for that…I should mmm…marry your…marry your papaa…means me and your papaa should be married to that I can stay here…
Lily looks at khushi all thinking about all that in her little head…
-want you marry him, please…and thtay (stay) with me?...Paa is good…he's good…and nithe (nice)…he has many books…he can tell us both many many thtories (stories)…he knows all flowers names and he…
Lily takes a deep breath as she talked too much, putting all her energy and looks at Khushi with her cute, innocent beautiful big eyes…waiting like a little cat…for khushi to talk… to say something …
But Khushi was fascinated how that little baby gets it and how she talks praising her papaa and how she's convincing her to stay and to marry him…
She smiles to her…
Lily serious face transformed to a happy face…
She holds Khushi's neck…
-I will marry your papaa…
Lily smiles…
Her noise touching Khushi's noise…
They have that embrace that only mums and daughters know about it…
-you're my mum now?
Khushi nodded…without breaking that tight embrace…
Both need each other…
Arnav was present during that entire private discussion…
He wasn't seeing one angel…
But two…
Khushi was a gift from God…
An angel…sent from an unknown place…
To make his own angel happy…
He felt safe…
He felt good…
He was ready to make Khushi stay with them from this evening…
Precap: The Marriage…
Waiting for your lovely comments…
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thanks dear 😉
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Originally posted by: ceciliadam

I READ 11 CHAP IN ONE GO
ITS SO DIFFERENT AWESOME AND WONDERFUL
I LOVE IT SOO SOO SOO MUCH
PLS DON'T STOP POSTING



thank you so much
and no dear
for you and for my readers here in IF I won't stop posting here 😉
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