ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
yippieee i feel like dancing.

thanks dr.

eagerly waiting.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur work is just fabulous!!!
i couldnt stop myself from readin all parts in one go...
gosh...humesha bechari riya ko hi compromise kyu karna hota hai...
that part was awsum wen d phone was on speaker n shree said all that abt arjun!!
finally arjun is gonna accept her...
😆😆]plzz ppllzzz...pllzz..pm me also!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting eagerly to read more
love this ff
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART—18

Recap:

Just then riya moved a little bit.she also open her eyes slowly.

Riya: Ar…arjun……s[before she could say sir arjun start to talk]

Arjun:yes riya,I m here.

Arjun hug her more tightly& kiss her on forehead.

Riya gives a weak still sweet smile & closed her eyes on arjun chest,peacefully.

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Rathore:we should go home… everybody r damn worried for u,arjun.

Arjun:yes..riya needs rest. & we also have to call a doctor.

Rathore[with smile]:I don't think so,she got what she need most… anyway let's go.

They reached to the car.rathore sit on the driving seat& arjun along with holding riya carefully sit on the back seat.riya still too weak& closing her eyes.but she holding arjun very tightly.& don't want to leave him.

On the way to home, arjun called Dr.Anvesha who was returning home after a night shift.after hearing riya's condition,she said to arjun that she will be on their home in 10 minute.

They reached home.riya's parents & ganguly family get worried to see arjun carrying riya.

Riya's mom: what happen to riya??

Riya r u ok beta?

Arjun: she is ok aunty,don't worry.

Then arjun come to their bedroom & try to place riya on bed.

[Everyone also there.just then Shree,Chotu& also Dr.Anvesha come there.]

But riya holding arjun more tightly & silently crying.she is still on half unconscious state.

Dr.anvesha come forward.

Anvesha:What the hell!!why she is looking so scared??

Then she check on her.

Anvesha:she is too weak.seems she was on Food strike!!! Jiju, what is that??u didn't take care of our Riya…

Riya's mom: it's not like that,Anvesha.[with a smile]he is a very caring husband.

Anvesha:oh!aunty…u don't hav to take jiju's side. I know well…& her BP is too low.& she looks very tensed.[looking at arjun]jiju,I know u people do risky work,but that doesn't mean that u can't take care of urself.. too much tension is not good for her health.ok?

Arjun:hmm..

Anvesha:she needs rest.

Rathore:don't worry.riya will be not allowed ETF office until she is perfectly fit.

Anvesha:ok.here's her prescription.

Rathore take it. & leave the room to get it. Dr.anvesha also leave.riya still holding arjun.

Shree look at ganguly uncle who was about to leave the room also indicate him(shree)to leave the room.shree get it.

Shree:ok,then.riya should take rest…& we should also leave.

Chotu:what??how can we leave ri at this condition??

Shree(in low voice):why don't u get anything at time,yar!!!always hav to give u details!!Arjun sir is here..so…

Ganguly uncle:Chotu… let's hav a cup of tea. Boudi{indicating riya's mom},Chai milega kya?

Riya's mom:of course!

Then everybody leaves the room.. only arjun & riya remain.

Arjun still holding riya.riya's mom come with a glass of milk for riya.arjun called riya for drink it.she open her tear full eyes.& seeing that arjun start to feel guilty. For whatever he did to this lovely girl…

Riya's mom & arjun help riya to drink it.then he placed her to the bed.& seat beside her until she fall asleep.

After that,arjun come to the hall where everyone having tea.rathore gives riya's medicine to arjun.he takes it.just then riya's father ask arjun..

Riya's father:where hav u been,arjun??we all got scared.

Arjun: oh.. actually uncle…

Rathore:uncle he was in some confidential work..so can't inform us.

Arjun look at rathore for the lie.rathore look other side.

Riya's father:but,still.u should inform one.at least rathore or riya.

Rathore:he'll do it from the next time. Or I'll punish him for vanishing without notice.

All leave for their home.Rathore also start to leave.just then arjun come to him.

Arjun: why u lie to them??

Rathore:what??when did I lie to them??i didn't tell a lie to them arjun.

I don't think so that I should tell them,their son-in-law run away from home for fall in love with his wife!!

Arjun:it's not true..

Rathore:really??then why u just vanished?i know u were upset after seeing her cut……even scared to face her& admit that u r in love with her.that's why u run away..isn't it??

Arjun didn't say anything.just standing there in a deep thought.rathore start the car& leave.

About two hours later…

Arjun finished his bath.he start to dry his hair with towel & come to the room.riya is still sleeping.he placed towel on his shoulder&seat beside riya.he cares her hair& start to smile after seeing riya's beautiful face.he bow down his head & kissed riya's forehead. & says..

Arjun: sorry riya… I m really very sorry for everything..

Water drops from his wet hair's which fall on riya's face.riya moves a little bit for that.arjun stand up & get a chair there to seat beside the bed.he was just watching his beautifull wife..

When riya wake up..she 1st see his face infront of her.he was sitting next to her on a chair..in a brown colour shirt with a towel on shoulder.

Arjun:hey.. feeling better??

Riya:yes sir…[then anxiously ] r u ok sir?? Why did u go???why u didn't inform us??u know how much I got scared…u r just..

Arjun go to her to calm her down.he cupped her face on his hand & start to talk

Arjun:riya..riya..look at me.i m here,ok?so u don't hav to take any stress.u can talk quietly.alright.

But riya start to cry which makes arjun very angry.

Arjun;stop crying like a baby!!why r u crying now??!!

Then he realize that his voice was little bit rude.&when he see that he is cupping riya's face on his hand,he just remove them hesitantly.

Riya:I don't know..but why r u shouting at me??!

Arjun: because I don't like tears...(in low voice)on ur eyes.

Riya:why sir??

Arjun can't answer her.just look at her for sometimes then start to leave the room.

In the door,he turned back to riya & say..

Arjun:get up & freshen up.u hav to take ur dinner on time.then medicine…so hurry up.

Arjun leaves the room & riya look at the door very confusedly.

[to be continue]

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Hello everyone!!after a long time I wrote it..if there are any mistake made by me,please ignore it.& I m so sorry for that. I tried to do it at least ok….but couldn't.SORRY!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
everyone was really so worried for riya
awww poor riya was silently crying
chotu bhi ni takes forever t understand something 😆
arjun feeling guilty
rathore lied to riya's father about where arjun was
arjun said sorry to riya :)
last part was really nice
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay...
Finally,u updated this...
Gosh...
I missed this story a lot...
Wah...
Loved Rathod bhai for making Arjun confess abt his feelings for Riya...
Aww...
Riya bohut pyaar karti hai Arjun se...
Just loved this update...
Please,make sure,u try to update this story,as regualarly as possible,coz,iske bina hum reh nahi sakte.
Ariya moments were top class...
Missed them a lot.
The care which both of them had for each other was truly beautiful...
Loved it.
Thanks for updating it.
Cheers.
:D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima15

great update :) loved it

everyone was really so worried for riya
awww poor riya was silently crying
chotu bhi ni takes forever t understand something 😆
arjun feeling guilty
rathore lied to riya's father about where arjun was
arjun said sorry to riya :)
last part was really nice
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon


thank you so much for loving it..& for ur sweet comment as always!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah, after a long time girl!

But, very nice update.

Chotu is too slow yaar...! Aare Shree,, ye Chotu ka dimaag ki motherbord change kar de yaar!!

Haa...haa...haa...!

Aww...Rathod is sooo good yaar! Arjun ko bacha liya!

Hmm...Aejun can't see tears...on Riya's eyes! That was sooo cute!

Continu soon. And next time, looonnnggg wal update chahiye.

Samjhi...ya...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Yay...
Finally,u updated this...
Gosh...
I missed this story a lot...
Wah...
Loved Rathod bhai for making Arjun confess abt his feelings for Riya...
Aww...
Riya bohut pyaar karti hai Arjun se...
Just loved this update...
Please,make sure,u try to update this story,as regualarly as possible,coz,iske bina hum reh nahi sakte.
Ariya moments were top class...
Missed them a lot.
The care which both of them had for each other was truly beautiful...
Loved it.
Thanks for updating it.
Cheers.
:D


Thank you so much for liking it.
& i'll try my level best to post the next part soon... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
It iZ amazing..
Thnku..
N continue soon

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