Taarey os:my santa...updated on pg 5 28 dec

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

NAHIII!!!!!

Phirse suspense???? Kya dipu dii aap bhi na.. Chalo koi ni.. Thanks for writing this.. I soo wanted to read one on christmas.. Love you.. and please pm me when u update!!!!

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Guys here is the next part...
ok I m ready for rotten eggs and tomatoes...first read and then decide to give me eggs or hugs??your choice...

Taani take the chit and read it...

"come to rehersal hall"

Taani thinks..."who is this?kahi rey...taani what r u thinking...vo to hamesha hi tere sath ladai karte he...vo tujhe kyu bulayenge...any ways...chalke dekh to sahi..."

And she goes to rehersal hall...

On her way to the rehersal hall.she met with a santa...

Santa-hello my dear child taani...

Ta-hello santa...

Santa-what is your wish today...???

Ta-my wish...i want all the people happy whom I love...

Santa-ok...and whom u love..??

Ta-i love my bhai-bhabhi my family my friends and r...

Santa-and...dont hide my child...tell me...i will pray for u also...

Ta-and...nothing...u just pray for happiness of the persons whom I love...

Santa-ok my child...and santa stand beside her and tell in her ears...close your eyes...and he put his hand on her eyes...she felt the touch...she felt jese is touch ko vo barso se janti hai...

Santa tell in her ears-u will get all happiness today...and he take his hand...taani slowly open her eyes but she couldnt find any santa there...

Taani-are...abhi to santa yahi par the...kaha chale gaye??esa kyu lag raha tha ki me unhe janti hu...

She shook her head and said-ab kuch mat soch...RH me ja...

Here the santa is behind the door of a room...he is no other but he is...REY...

He come out side and take out the fakr santa beard...and take out the santa ckause clothes...and said-i m coming taani...happiness is just 10 minits away from u...

Here taani reach the rehersal hall and what she saw...

She saw the rehersal hall is decorated with heart shape white and red balloons...

Taani see the hall and thinks ...wow...kitna achha lag raha hai ye hall...

And she see a red rose with a note in the center of the hall...she goes and take the rose and and read the note...

Thanks for coming...

As she read this a smile appear on her face and suddenly rose pettals fall on her...her smile become wider with the rose pettals falling on her...she like it so much...

But suddenly someone come and tied a silk cloth piece on her eyes...

She is about to take the cloth away but he hold her hand and told in her ears..."just feel my love"...and she recognize the voice...he is rey...but for him...she doesnt take away the cloth...

Rey intertwin his fingers with her and go closer...she can feel his breath...
He come closer and kiss her on her cheek...this made taani shiever...she tighten her grip on rey's hand...

With this action of taani...rey smiled and move his hand on her waist...he hold her waist tight and pull her closer and kiss her forhead...with this taani cluth his shirt with both her hands...now rey pin her to the mirror and block her between his hands...

Taani-i know rey its u...your one touch is enough for me to feel that its you...

This sentence just touch rey's heart and his eyes become wet...he slowly take the cloth away from her eyes...but taani didnt open her eyes...

Rey cup her face and kiss on her eyes...and then on her cheeks and forhead and then on her neck and shoulder...he just cant stop himself...he constantly kissing her...

Now he come near her ears and stop...in the same situation...her right cheek is in touch of taani's right cheek...he still in the same situation...and he feel a tear on his cheek...but its not from his eyes its from taani's eyes...

Seeing this rey cup her face and wipe her tears with his thumb and said-no taani...dont cry...now I dont want tears in your eyes ...its hurt me...plz taani ...i dont see u in tears becoz I love u...i love u so much taani...i cant tell u how much I love u taani...

Taani?s eyes are still close...

Rey-taani open your eyes...

Ta-nahi rey...agar ye sapna hua aur meri aankh khoolne se tut gaya to me bardasht nahi kar paungi...

Rey-ye saona nahi hai taani...ye sach hai... .

Taani slowly open her eyes and see rey...he is there in real...its not a dream...taani see in rey's eyes and she also aee tears in his eyes...

Ta-abhi to aap mujhe rone k liye mana kar rahe the...ab aap kyu ro rahe hai?

Rey-nahi vo me...ro nahi raha tha...me...and he just giong to wipe his tears when taani stop him and say...

Ta-no rey...aap ye nahi kar sakte...

Rey-kyu?kya hua?

Ta-ab ye haq sirf mera hai...sirf mera...

And she goes closer...rey close his eyes...and taani kiss his tears and and tears absorbed by taani's lips...

Now taani cup rey's face and kiss him on his forhead ...her hand is on his cheek...rey hold her hand tightly...then taani kiss his eyes...then his nose...then his cheeks...then...then she stop...and see rey's face...his face is so calm...she can see a peace on his face...

He open his eyes and see taani staring at him...

Rey-taani kya dekh rahi ho??

Ta-bas mere santa ko dekh rahi hu jo abhi abhi mujhe bahar mila tha...

Rey-tumhe kaise pata ki me hi tha vo santa..??

Ta-rey...aapka ek touch hi mujhe ye jan ne ke liye kafi hai ki vo aap the...jab aap ne meri aankho par hath rakha tha tabhi mujhe ehsas ho gaya tha ki wo aap hai...

Hearing this rey lean his forhead on hers...both of them's eyes are closed...

Suddenly taani feel a tight grip on her waist ...she open her eyes and see rey so so so close to her...their nose are touching...rey kiss on her little tiny nose...and take her hands and put them around his neck...

His one hand is on her waist...with other hand he put her hairs behind her ears...and put his lips on hers...he kissed her gentaly...but as taani respond back...he hold her waist with both hands and pull her closer...depend thr kiss more...both of them's body touching each others...both kiss each other with so much love and passion...they broke the kiss when they feel short of breath ...again their heads lean to each others...

Rey-taani...i love u...

Taani hug him tight and said...i love u too my santa ...thank u so much for hearing my wish and make it real...i love u so much...rey also hug her back...both are hugging each other ...lost in each other...

They broke the hug when they hear clappings...they see at the door and find all gang members there... they are looking so happy...

All think...finally rey also get someone...someone with her he could share all his happiness and sadness...now someine is in his life who make him happy...who will happy with his happiness and sad with his,sadness...who try to solve all his problems...who complete rey...and she is TAANI...

all are happy for both...specially swaron are happy...sharon's best friend finally found his life...his love...

Swayam is happy for his sis and for his best friend too...

All cimes in and hug them...swayam hug both and said to rey-now taani is your responsibility rey...plz kabhi uske face par se smile jaane mat dena...

Rey-u dont worry swayam...now taani is my life...my world...she is everything for me...me usse kabhi dukhi nahi rehne dunga...i promise swayam...

Saying this both hug each other and then swayam said-ok chalo...ab jab ye dono sath me hai...dono ko apna christmas gift mil gaya hai to ab hum oarty enjoy kare??

Taarey-ha...bilkul enjoy karenge...

And all goes from there...

Rey hold taani's hand...kiss her on her forhead and go on thr party to enjoy their first party as a couple...

The end...

So guys...tell me how is this??

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

yeah! Me first! Loved it dii!!! Awesome... TR romance was what i loved the most... Loved your idea of decorating the RH with balloons.. Aw, so romantic!! N the confession was superb... Just loved it... Rey in santa's costume was so cute! Loved the ReYam bit too...!! Please dii... Write more on TR!

Edited by ShReya_TaaRey - 12 years ago

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

U made me all blushy blushy dii!!

Loved it to the core.. I am imagining Kunwar as santa now.. * Day dreaming* Hayee.. koi toh rok lo!

Loved the confession.. happy that gang came to know about it.. love you.. thanks for taking the pains of pming me.. But pm me when you write something new on TR!! <3<3

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Riddhima

@...Rhythsy...

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

its amazing👏

love u 4 dis di

thanx 4 d pm

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yashi

@--taareylove---

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

its so so awesome pari and this lines are so heart touching dear

Ta-nahi rey...agar ye sapna hua aur meri aankh khoolne se tut gaya to me bardasht nahi kar paungi...

Rey-ye saona nahi hai taani...ye sach hai..

swayam and rey part was also awesome totally love the every bit and every line of it

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salta

@salta

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

gosh...so wonderful it was...especially RH scenes were just awesome... taarey were depicted so beautifully by u...it's amazing.

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey
yeah! Me first! Loved it dii!!! Awesome... TR romance was what i loved the most... Loved your idea of decorating the RH with balloons.. Aw, so romantic!! N the confession was superb... Just loved it... Rey in santa's costume was so cute! Loved the ReYam bit too...!! Please dii... Write more on TR!

Thank u so much shreya for the lo ely comment...ya I will write more...i cant stop myself from writting stories on taarey...

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey
U made me all blushy blushy dii!!

Loved it to the core.. I am imagining Kunwar as santa now.. * Day dreaming* Hayee.. koi toh rok lo!

Loved the confession.. happy that gang came to know about it.. love you.. thanks for taking the pains of pming me.. But pm me when you write something new on TR!! <3<3

Thank u so much shivangi...its take only 2 mins to pm...its not pain...and ya I will pm u when I will write anything on taarey...