SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

just wow...it a big wow...wat a description on manvi part i love it yaar...and i am sure that manvi is paired with virat for some project work...isn't it???...now waiting for virat pov...pls do send me pm next tym and update soon

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Wow!! Loved it!!
The school scenario was funny!!
Superb update, amazing writing!!
Loved how you described everything about manvi's friends & ex boyfriends!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!

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littlesmile

@littlesmile

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

hi nisha 😊 .just read both d patrts of ur SS.great beginning.i m loving maanvis character she reminds of a heroine in one novel i read lol.nd her description to her family is soo honest nd realistic.i dont have a sister but d small little fights between dese two r funny nd cute.nd den my viru boy's description lol she oficially hates him.two parts were really interesting nd exciting.plss add me to ur PM list .i promise dat i will comment regularly plsss do add me 😃

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Omg this was dam good i m in love with maanvi's character she is just mindblowing and play boy viraat it vl be interesting to read how They vl fall for eachother
Ps-i won't be able to comment everytime since i have my practice priliminary xams after 2 days then and after that xams i have priliminary xams in same month then main xams in feb i have to prepare alot as i didn't study whole year i hope u won't remove my name from list

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Mind blowing update...loved it to the core...manvi hatred to virat...interesting...how will these two guys fall in love...omg...i m so excited...wat will happen next...manvi is totally different...bindaas..loved her..,will be waiting for next update...thank u so much for the pm... 😊

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

lovely descriptns dear...i totally adore headstrong girls :) hey a quick question where is the story based? i mean frm da names it shows sumwhere abroad bt plz do mention it sumwhere in da nxt part 😊

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arohi16

@arohi16

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

maanvi's dating history 🤣🤣

vadhera as Mr. cassanova...i like it 👍🏼

wondering what will happen next...what was there on the notice board?? 😕

now you have to update it soon because i assume you have planned a very interesting story ahead!!

thanks for the pm

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

You are brilliant Nisha.. How do you manage to write stuff like this!!! I loved it.. It was completely hilarious.. I loved the way you described Manvi's pov.. She actually called her ex-boyfriends douche bags 🤣🤣.. Her dating history is surely a treat to read.. Her friends are lil weird 😆 .. loved the way you portrayed them.. Virat sounds great... Casanova, flirt, rude, arrogant.. He seems to be a complete charmer 😳.. Loved his entry.. The song is nice.. little different though.. But why did you stop there?? Now Im really curious.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Hmmm ahhh sighs
What shall I say I will just say nisha mein toh treo fan
Bangayee seriously how do you do it. It was so damn
Orignal when school girls always have a crush on the
Hottest guy there damn it was all there Lol at manvi
Guess she thinks she is the only sane one until aur falls
For him wonder what was on the noticeboard that shocked
Everyone very bad place to stop please update it soon and
Do pm