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Posted: 12 years ago
Bang on update Nisha.. 👏 👏 👏 ...really loved every bit of it.. ⭐️ ...really really superb-~...virman hug..awwn..it was damn adorable 😳...virat blackmailed manvi..really a sweet..both noe each other so well.. ..the way manvi patch up with her mom...simply fantastic... 😳 ..manvi mom reaction was hilarious..n the kiss...😆...i could imagine the whole scenery in front of my eyes...everything was beautifully written Nisha.. ⭐️ ...apology secession was fab n sweet.. 😃 ...as i said before this manvi character is awesome..i really loved it...so virat is invited for the dinner... 😉 ...i guess he is gonna make her mom convinced for the hawai trip...n the song was awesome too...really looking forward for next update..will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm... 😊 ..all the best for ur exams... 👍🏼 ...take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update dear 😛 too cute! loved da manvi n her mom hug scene...ws too lovable 😃 waitin to see hw virat fits in with manvi and her family at dinner 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww i reallyyy luv d moment
wen virat said he want a hug<3
nd omgg i was also shocked wen
hitler hugged manvi..awwsum...update
plzzz update asap nd plz update dat break my heart...
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-9 & 10

Poor Maanvi.. her mom is jst unbelievable, how can she b so rude to her own child😡

I liked Janvi's concern towards Maanvi.

Maanvi is jst like an open book, ny1 can read it, nothing secret, nothing 2 confide bt to read her one has to understand her nd I loved Virat for this, he is so understanding & caring😳 nd in this short span of time he knows Maanvi inside out, he understand every thing abt her or I mst say he cares to understand every thing. That was vry sweet of him 2 share his problem 2 make her open up, to make her comfortable.

Nish, you wrote every thng so beautifully that I was able to imagine each nd every scenes in front of my eyes👏🤗

Thnx a lot for the pm...plzzz pm me d nxt part tooo...😊

Edited by marley - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww maanvi's mother.ok ive taken a u turn i love her😉 ofcourse no mother can hate her own child.loved their awkward yer super adorable convo😊hmm so mr.casanova has been invited to da dinner.looking forward to c how he is gonna convince her mom for da hawii trip!! HAWAII oo da name itself is sexy.wats gonna happen in da trip😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay finally updated!!! Woohoo!!! Love the reuniOn of manvi n her mom... Huggs n kisses :O hahah thank god he didn't react... All thanks to virat of course :p I love misty she is adorable.. If u can find a boy for her too :p... "Think of the devil and the devil appears" hah I like that part... It's good that virat gonna interact with her family ... Excited for next part n the family dinner :p thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome as always start with Virman Hug😊 the way he asked for hug that was so cute ... After some emotional updates finally manvi and her mom patch up ..Cant wait wait for the dinner update soon ... Tnx for the PM dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for the PM

aweee it was so cute, he wants a hug and he foughtt for it tooo..
virat ne tho ladki se pehle mom ko pata liya 😉

and she dosen't read his mind, but he reads her mom's mind 🤣
Edited by sriman88893 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry 4 d late cmt... My university xms r goin on... Xms wil finish in may... Bt I'll try 2 read n cmt in btw my studies... Now cmin 2 9th chap... It's too rude of manvi's mom's behaviour even if datz due 2 her mistakes too... I really hate her 4 insulting manvi by her harsh words... A mother shuld nt tel dat words 2 her child... I am suspectng whether manvi z adopted... I noe itz not... N virat z truly understanding... The dlgs by him aftr reading her mind was juz osum... N tks 4 d pm... Plz pm me 11th chp too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay, the update was as amazing ever, as great as ever, & as lovely as ever(so much use of "as ever na" i know i know😛)

The update started with awesome hug!!!! First the way manvi was behaving when virat asked for a hug, was so funny...hahahhaha...it was looking like she was trapped in something...lol...😆
Then finally she gave in when virat blackmailed her!!!! I already knew it that manvi would like it!!!

Next... convo between mother-daughter duo was like aaawww...& i first time realized that they can actually talk like normal human beings do, i mean you know calmly & all😛
And then when she wiped her face...i found it so funny & i was shaking my head with expressions on my face "this-gal-can-never-change"😛...oh yes i forgot to mention...when manvi was apologizing, i mean when trying to, at that time also she didn't kept her attitude aside & said sorry directly, on the contrary she was actually asking her mother to apologize for saying those words!!!!! Boy! This gal...ufff!!!!
Then after that again virman convo was great!!! They just have to tease each other everytime!!!
When virat said "what mom??"...hahahaha...he just couldn't get what was happening😆
Just waiting for the upcoming part, when virat will be coming for dinner!!!😃

Okay, i wanna confess something, whenever i read your updates,it always manage to bring a smile on my face...see this one 😊 & sometimes this big one also😃!!!!

In your update, even if there is serious convo going on or a straight convo going on, reading the character's pov i mean what the person is thinking at that time...these thoughts bring smile on my face!!!
I mean you always manages to put right things at the right place, right expressions at the right place!!! Your humor & intelligence astonish me, always!!!!!

I just love your updates man!!!! No one can beat!!! Hands down!!!!

Please please do update soon!!!! Waiting like anything😊


P.S. My name is Nandita, not nanditam!!! Actually "m" is for my surname...Nandita Mehta!!!!😛 I know everybody gets confused...but i had to insert it because simple my name was not available😛!!!!

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