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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10 was emotional ..i said it many times but love the way you write..
love the way virat always reads her mind...i wish i could get a partner like that...
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a very cute update... <3 only best frnds can be like that lol asking and black mailing for a hug 😉 though aftr so much convincing bt Manvi did listen to virat 😊 loved the mother-daughter scene.. So sweet... Jeez if this Manvi was real i wud hav loved to meet her and teach her to be expressive lol... She needs to tell ppl what they mean to her, they are not gona do mind reading, they are normal humans 😛 . And i also loved how janvi covered up. I've a good experience der sisters are awesome ^_^ and Manvi's mom is very impressed by virat huh 🤣 loved how many was convincing her mom that virat has nothing to do wid her gtng her senses back. Typical her. I enjoyed a lot reading this part.. Waiting for the dinner at Manvi's place 😃 thank u for the pm. God bless you Nisha u make so many of us happy <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
u know more than awesome i loved it sooo much especially virman teasing and blackmailing session i donot have words to explain it is more than superb. and please do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww VirMan Hug😳 That Puppy dog face thing is so me😆

Loved Hitler's & Mannu's Convo !!! *It is usually mom screaming at me and me zoning out or screaming back* Again so me😆 In short,I cud relate to the whole convo right till the hug thing 😉
God she even talks like Virat! Eeeks I was right !!! Viru is so gonna get along with Mommy dear !!!

Can't wait for the next update !!! Hitler - Viraat Meeting 😃

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Asusual superb update. .the virman hug was lovely n virat knws her well that he could tell that she was happy after d hug. .loved mother daughter patch up. .so i think virat wil surely sort out difrnces btwn manvi n her mom dats gr8. .thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
ommggg sooo biggg wala sorry nishaaa i missed it for sooo long read three update together and tehy were awsomeee seriously the sakespr part was hilariousss and lol worst pick up line 🤣 and its soo lovely tht virat understands the real manvi not the manvi world knows and the best thing was their convo 3am in the morning hahaha ok ive read till part 8 and in ur buddy list alreadyy soo plzzz if u can thn pm me part 9 and 10 cant find them here :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayee the hug in the beginning was so cute nd I loved the sweet blackmail by Virat to get a hug😳

Then the daughter- mother convo was like both of them love each other but fails to express which leads to misunderstandings bt sometym these misunderstandings r gud, atleast we can get some beautiful nd long Virman updates like d previous ones😉😆

The part where Maanvi calls up Virat brought a big smile on my face😃
I jst loved there convo.
So, altogether a wonderful update.👏

Nisha, I hav said b4 that you r a fantastic writer nd the best thing is the timing, you know when, what nd how things r to be presented, applauds👏 nd hugss🤗 2 u for this.


Thnx 4 d pm...nd do pm me nxt tym when u updt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i m great fan of ur story plz pm 9 10 11 parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
another fabulous update frm u!!!👏👏👏
ha ha manvididnt allow virat 2 hug her😆
aww virat gets melted wid a puppy dog face😳
ha ha nw toh virat blackmailing her fr a hug😉
omg da hug was so awesome!!!
da way u descreibed it.. superb!!
so manvi loved da hug😛 she'll never accept it..
i jst luv virman's cute f8s..
aww da mother-daughter convo was so cute..
finally her mom is nt angry wid her nd she likes virat as her frnd😃
yippe virman dinner😉 excited fr dat...😆
cont soon dear nd thnx fr da pm
im so so sry fr giving reply dis late...
ill try 2 comment early frm next tym..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww the scene between Manvi and her mum was so sweet and emotional. Im glad you put a small insight into what her mum was thinking although Manvi's reaction to the hug was quite funny, and Virat wanting a hug from Manvi was cutee too hehe and how he tried to convince her made me laugh. Really want to know how the dinner goes!! Can't wait for the next update!!!

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