Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
brilliant - i love the way Virat is so focused in his and M's career. Nowadays all people want is romance and drama but i like it that you portraying them as very ambitious young people. This is what show should have done.
Writing, flow, dialouge delivery, feelings all of it obviously amazing as ever!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
*res*

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A very caring husband, Virat is, he knows the only way to have peace is to leave for a days.

a very nice story, due continue it.
Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
virman moving out of vadhera mansion.then more drama is on the way.continue soon an d thanks for the PM.CONTINUE SACCHA PYAAR😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Superb Update,.👍🏼! N yes u r right this drama was needed n wow they would live seperate n so much of peace from the family drama...othrwise they still arnt at peace as the confusion still cariies forward..as virat cares allot for her..n he hasnt realized that yet...so when they r alone i guess u would spice up the story..😊..eager for the next update..thanks for the pm!

n waiting for sacha pyar update,,😃!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
yaar...it was just awesome...loved it yaar...cs and pm me next tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Oh I love family drama!!😆 😆 It was much needed.. From a reader's point of view, I really loved this new twist in the tale.. It will be interesting to see how they will cope with this sudden change in their lives.. It is a huge step for both of them.. especially for Manvi.. I love Virat in this SS.. He is ambitious but not selfish.. Though he considers this marrige as an arrangement but so far he never failed to fulfil his duties of a friend/husband.. He always encouraged Manvi to follow her dreams and supported her in front of the whole family.. Poor Manvi.. She is torn between her family and her husband.. Superb update Anu.. Beautifully written as usual 👏.. Im really excited to read the next part.. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Wow!! So much family drama!!
Amazing update!!
Loved the twist!!
Love how the story is progressing!!
Waiting 4 the next update!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
nice. cont soon. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Aww virat and manvi are drifting apart rather than coming close. I doubt sb has to intefere with everything involved arounds virman. Virat and manvi moving out family drama a class.
Tf the pm
Update soon and pm me please
Inayah 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Was damn awesome some of you's might kill me for
Saying this but some might agree I kind of happy
Virman are leaving the house it might give them the
Chance to get to know each other more to fall for each
Other. Finally they will have some space loving the concept
Even more thanks for the explanation of what virman were studying
And yes docter couples are damn hot continue soon and do pm me

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