Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Its awsum, evry part of it made me speechless.

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ramanirani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU 🤗🥳
I LOVED THIS UPDATE 😳
CONTINUE SOON...

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zaira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Loved this update...
Plz cont soon...

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

hey it was superb update dear
Hope in future virat won't hurt her
Thank 4 d pm dear
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update soon

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ash97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Beautifully written, very romantic n thx 4 the PM n long update😊
Happy new year to u n ur family🤗

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-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

OMG!! that was superb!!
I am sorry I couldn't comment over a long time.
ok let me come to the story! ohh mine the frustration, emotions, desire, ahhh actually all kind f feelings that both maanvi and virat were going through were so nicely portrayed! virat's confusion and maanvi's feelings for him! wow that was awesome!! I just loved the whole update and I am loving the way the story is proceeding!
continue soon
and thnx for the pm! 😃

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Happy New Year Buddy..~!

Amazing update...👍🏼~! Lovly emotional ride through out the update...loved Maanvi in this update...she firmly spoke abt her feelings and even decided that they should stay away... but looking in to the reaction of Virat...he loves her.. but i guess he hasnt completly comprehend with his feeling...yes he know he likes her and he reasoned out things in his head...love the way u explained virat's thoughts here..👏

Eventually when he would comprehend his love 100% he wouldn't think of even hurting her...ok now enought on wht i like and think...!

Love the romance as well..:)⭐️

Thnks for the pm!

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keerthana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

i read it before u give me PM.but my mom is in home today i have maths exam tomorrow.so only i am rplying late.it was lovely and the last was romantic.pls continue soon.waiting for mornig romance if u write it.THANKS FOR THE PM.i hope deyconfess love soon😊

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Afshan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

very nice update!
romantic one i hope nw everythng should fall at its place

p.s when v r getting SP update?

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Wow.. Great update Anu.. very romantic😳.. I loved Manvi in this part..specially her attitude.. Loved the way she confessed her feelings and then told him that she wasnt expecting anything in return.. I also liked the way you described Virart's care and concern for Manvi.. But he is still confused about his feelings.. you have portrayed his dilemma beautifully👏.. Though Im happy for Virman and now Virat is ready to give this marriage a chance but I hope his confusion wont create any problem in the future.. Thank you so much for the pm😊.. Take care and Happy new year!!! 🤗

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago

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