ARHI TS: BETRAYED note on page 1&43

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

wow! it was superb...

so arnav didn't betrayed khushi...

prince is not his baby...

at last khushi knows all truth...

nw they happily married family...

loved the babies pix...n home pixes...

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LilButterfly003

@LilButterfly003

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Wow!
thats really good dear!

i loved all the emotions and scenes presented...ure really good!😃

i hope to read more from you...

Thanks again for this beautiful TS...

take care n Cheers😉

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Mbean

@AmidstTheWords

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

I HAVE ONLY ONE WORD FOR THIS MASTERPIECE

BEAUTIFUL

SPLENDID AND AWESOME

AND ONE LINE THAT DEFINES IT

"TRUE LOVE DOES OVERCOME ALL ODDS"

I WILL BE WAITING EAGERLY FOR MORE OF YOUR WORK

PLEASE DO WRITE MORE ON ARSHI!!!!!!!!!

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

finally i manage to read it beautifully written

u write emotion so nicley 😊

this is so fab ending loved it

if u do something again do pm me will loved to read ur work again

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Dear...it was a lovely update...and btw I'm sorry...you hadn't completed so got a bit upset after the 2nd update and got angry on you...really sorry woh bhi bada wala...will not repeat my mistake next time...
Please forgive me??

P.S. I will pm you about this 2mrw...gtg..jus got home from work and hell tired...having dinner...and then will sleep..

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Awww dat was so lovely... nvr thought dat arnav had to go through so much.. but loved how arnav built an entire house just like d way his khushi wanted... n loved their cute nok jhoks at the end... d way of proposing made me go awww