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Afya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Durga

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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it ... do continue soon and also add me to ur pm list .. :)

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Amanda Lim

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Posted: 13 years ago

Another sequel.. Yay..

Interesting start..
Continue soon.. :D

Thanks for the PM.

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Afya,

LOVED it, so glad you are writing again!

I loved how he thought about money for her...I always wondered this on the show...and us a married couple this I hoped was one of the things that they would address on the show!

I love how he finally uses that pool for swimming, such a great way for them to unwind by the pool, only wish she now slowly starts to wear a costume...

Loved how Khushi is still Khushi, she gets a saree but spends only Rs 500 and wants to do embroidery on it, so much like Khushi!

Its a great start looking forward to reading this story...

Just one thing...will you write some translations if you use a lot of hindi...I find it breaks my flow to read hindi in English...this much was fine,but in case you use more the next time!

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--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved d start
Thanx for pm 😊 😊 😊
do continue

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved the update
ARNAV gave her a credit card but she only spent rs500
that's what i like about her
she is so naive & down2earth
and thanks for using the pool
finally he used it for swimming
thanx fo the PM
continue soon

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Divyanshi Vineet Malaviya

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Posted: 13 years ago

I loved it awesome !!! It's beautiful !! Cont soon

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks😊 everyone for your encouraging comments. I am happy you liked it. Will update the next part tomorrow hopefully.

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Afya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Afya,

LOVED it, so glad you are writing again!

I loved how he thought about money for her...I always wondered this on the show...and us a married couple this I hoped was one of the things that they would address on the show!

I love how he finally uses that pool for swimming, such a great way for them to unwind by the pool, only wish she now slowly starts to wear a costume...

Loved how Khushi is still Khushi, she gets a saree but spends only Rs 500 and wants to do embroidery on it, so much like Khushi!

Its a great start looking forward to reading this story...

Just one thing...will you write some translations if you use a lot of hindi...I find it breaks my flow to read hindi in English...this much was fine,but in case you use more the next time!

Thanks Vandana for your kind words. I was beginning to miss the Arhi magic and So, I decided to create it myself.😛

I want to try and keep their characters authentic as in the story, but surely one would think a guy like ASR would use his pool(although they have never shown this in IPKKND), Won't he? I am glad you liked it too.

I use hindi, especially with Khushi's conversations, as that is how she converses. But I get what you mean. I will try not to use more of it, and if I do, I shall translate. Thanks for the excellent feedback. Really appreciate it.