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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Nice update...
Poor Ryan...Flt bad 4 him...
Nd i thnk Jenna lovs him...
She s not ready 2 accpt it...
Cntinue soon

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Jenna's feelings are well portrayed her dream and the conversation.Abbie is right sheis trying to confess herself.She can't enjoy Eric's pranks and teasing while Ryan's she can even she was stealing glance with Eric. Technically she missed Ryan when Eric is there but When Ryan is there she didn't miss Eric.

Second thing she was going to tell the exact truth to Eric when he asked about late arrive and she didn't have courage to ask were about of Ryan too.Means she is hiding something.When we are hiding something when we actually have something to hide???

There guilt ofcourse but guilt for say yes to Eric or say no to Ryan...

Wait after class Jenna going to call Ryan or not .Or she try to control?? we will wait for your update.Thanks for pm

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farha

@farha5556

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow nice,jenna is really on a roller coaster.loved it.feeling bad for ryan.hope this confusion goes away soon.

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Res...will edit ASAP😊

edited

*****

Well that was short. But you described her confusion very well.

I liked the update as a whole. And i really adore the way you write.

I totally love Abbie.

Expecting a faster update😊

Edited by kiddy-kavya - 12 years ago

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Milsha

@Dandelion.

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Aww it was fab.. millie likey 😆

It' guilt cox she was too fast in deciding who she loves. Of course it isn't Eric. n now its the beginning of regretting it :/

Edited by BarunliciousGal - 12 years ago

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

its really a good one.

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abysana

@abysana

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Nice updt..

Writtn beautifully...

Pls mk the nxt one
little lng..
Do cntnue sn...

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

The story plot is good... Good that you mentioned this is not based on any show character, that way it is easy to mould the characters the way you want, the readers wont be biased just because their favorite character in the show is being turned into something else here- You will have the readers move along with the story that you want to say!

Edited by abavi - 12 years ago