VIRMANSS:LOVE WITH REVENGE(part 6: PAGE 26 )

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HI VIRMANIANS, HAPPY CHRISTMAS
IN THIS X'MAS VACATION I START A NEW STORY ABOUT VIRMAN.ITS MY FIRST STORY. I AM A VIRMAN FAN.


LOVE WITH REVENGE

CHARACTER SKETCH

Manvi Sharma

Beautiful,smart,modern.One of the famous model in India.21 years old.studying Excel college in Chandigard.Careless girl.Party girl.

Ram Sharma-Father of Manvi. Richest businessman in India.Loves his only daughter Manvi very much.But he has no time to spend with her.A workaholic buisinessman.Lives in Mumbai.

Priya Sharma-Mother of Manvi.A famous singer in India.She loves her daughter but busy with her career.Lives in Delhi.


Manvi's parents are seperated , but
not divorced.


Dadaji:Rajveer Sharma- Police commisioner.Loves Manvi. Protect and support her in every time.
.
Dadhi:Amritha Sharma-Judge in court.Very strict.Loves Manvi but never shows.


Manvi live with Dadaji &Dadhiji.She love Dadaji very much.She also like her three friends -sim,anji

Manvi is a little negative in this story(Hope you dont mind)Manvi does not believe in love or marriage.


😊
Virat Vadhera

Handsome.26 years old.A middle class family member. Temporary lecturer in Manvi's college.A matured descent guy.


Swamini-Mother of Virat.Teacher of a higher secondary school.Strict in nature.Loves Virat a lot

Pooja:Virat's childhood friend. Worked as a librarian in Manvi's college.loves Virat as a brother.Traditional
girl 24 years old.



Varma family:Friends of Sharma family.


Adhithya Varma:Chief minister of Maharashtra.Want Manvi to be his only son's wife.


Vivek Varma: Live in London.A big Flirt.Party boy.characterless person.


Singhania family:Enemies of Manvi's family.

(more characters will be added)


PART 1


Virat walk up at 6.00am.Its his first day of college as a lecturer.He want to be a good teacher like his mother.That is his dream from childhood.Now he achieved it.It's a temporary post but soon it may be permanant.After that he have many dreams.Support his mother by financial.Repay the loans which are taken for his studies and home loan...

College jaane se pehle Virat apna Mam ki aashirvaad leliya . Apne bike mein college keliye nikl gaya.

Its 9.00am Manvi abhi bhi gahri neendh mein hai.Its not a big matter ,she walk up at 12.pm in holidays.Because she loves late night parties.Its the firstday after her 2 months vacation.

Dadhaji:Tarun where is Manvi? Is she still on the bed?

Tarun:Yes sir

Dadhaji:What?Her class starts today. Uski dhadhi ko pata chal gayi tho sabere se saza dena shuru kar dengi.Mein khud jakar udatha hu.


(In Manvi's room.The room is very beautiful painted in pink colour.A big photo of Dadhaji with Manvi is placed on the middle of the room.She is sleeping like a kid covered all body by blanket)


Dhadaji tries to walk up her.But nothing is worked.

Dadaji:Bebu(manvi's nick name called by dadhaji)udo aaj college jaana hai na.

Manvi:No, mughe aaj nahi jaana hai.I am so sleepy.

Dadhaji:Tho tik hai. Tumhari Dadhi bhi aaj khar par hai.

Manvi:(Suddenly walk up with a scream)Kya...?

Dadhaji:Ha,Tho tum so jao. Mein jaatha hu.

Manvi:Nahi nahi mein kaise so sakthi hun.Aaj mera class start hone wale hai.Mein abhi tayar hoke athi hun.

Dadhaji:Tho teri neend ka kya karengi?

Manvi: neend se bhi syadha jaan important hai.Ek din Dadhi ke saath akele rahengi tho mein seedha oopar chali jaavungi.

Dadhaji:(smiling)Tho jaldi jaavo its 9.35.Your class starts at 10.00am.

Manvi:I will be ready on 5 minutes.


Manvi apni blue short dress pehenkar ,apne black BMW mein college keliye nikal gayi.She drive the car very fast to enter class at correct time.


Soon you will see the virman meeting.





Manvi drive very fast.In the way ,to save a school child from accident she turn her car and hit Virat's bike.

Virat have no fractures or any wounds.But his bike was totally broken into pieces.He is fuming in anger. He thought this accident caused by car driver's carelessness and over speed.

Manvi opened the car door and steped out.
Virat is familiar with her photos as she is a model.First he lost in her beauty without blinking.

Manvi(shouted):Are you alive?

Virat came back to reality.He felt angry.

Virat: You may the first one in the world who ask this question instead of are you ok?do you want to kill me?

Manvi(angry):Yes

virat:what ? why?

manvi:Because you have no sense?How could you be so careless on road?

virat:(surprisingly)Hello.It would be my question to you. You were the one who drive on highway with overspeed.You destroy my bike.

Manvi know very much that it was her fault.But she is not the one who admit her mistake.moreover she has the the fear that if media will know about it.They create it as a sensational news.If her family heard about it then they will never allow to drive her as it is not the first accident she create.Its the third one in the month because of her over speed.



manvi:How dare you to talk me like this?
I will pay for it? How much it cost?No I give you a blank check.You can write the amount.And remember dont try to spread this news.

Virat:I dont want your money.I have insurance.
I only expect a sorry from you .admit your mistake and say a sorry.

Manvi:I dont say that its my fault. Still i said its only your fault.And how dare you to expect sorry from me...I am Manvi Sharma. I am telling sorry to a middle class man like you.Are you a day dreamer.Idiot

Virat:How dare you(shouted)

Manvi:Dont shout at me bas***d.

Virat is now out of control.He race his hands to slap her.Suddenly stop.He never harm ladies.
Manvi is hell shocked.

manvi:How dare you.You were try to slap me.Now I will show you who am I?

Virat:I dont want to see you Miss Manvi Sharma.If you have any elders in home go and study some manners from them.It will help you in future.

Manvi:You dont worry about my future.Just keep worry about your own future Mr...

Virat:Virat

Manvi:Mr Virat .In 10 days I will destroy your life.Keep Watching.Your count down starts now.Bye , Meet you soon.

Virat:I never want to meet your ugly face again .But if you really challenged me I also ready to teach you a lesson.

Manvi:We will see

Virat:Yes



(Manvi drove her car to college.Virat call the police and gave her car no. After that he also left to college in an auto.)



😊

Her best friends Anji,Sim call her Mannu.They are childhood friends.Their character is also same as manvi's.they also coming from rich families.





(Manvi's friends Anjitha(anji), simmi(sim) and the boys in the college are waiting for her.Finally she came. She get out from the car with a angry face.She said a 'hi' to all.

boy1 :manvi looks damn hot
boy2: no.she look more hot in red
boy3: no in pink

(Suddenly bell rang.All are went to their classes.Manvi is burning with anger .Her friends are continuesly trying to talk to her while walking.But she is does not hearing anything.)

Anji:Mannu. You look so hot..

sim:Anji, you are not a boy.

Anji:I am not completed. Look at her face.its just like a volcano.its ready to a explosion in any time.

sim:yes.You are right.(they laghed)



(Suddenly she bumped with someone.Its a boy.She raised her hand to slap him but he stop her)


(the manvi is studying is Royal academy and its owned by manvi's grandfather)


The boy is none other than our Virat.

He tightened his grip and her anger rising second by second. Her friends are shocked to see this scene. Nobody have the guts to say anything against Mannu, today someone dare to touch her.Manvi tries to release her hand but he more tightened it.Now its really hurts her.


Manvi:How dare you to touch me?

Virat:I have no interest to touch you.Its you, who try to slap me.I am just stoped you?

Sim:who are you man? leave her hand.You don't know who is she?

Virat:And you all don't know who I am?

Manvi:Who are you?

Virat:I am the new lecturer of this college.
( they all are shocked because he is so young.They thought that he is a new student.)

Anji:And you are hurting the owner of the college.


(now Virat is shocked.He know she is a model .But it is a new information for him .He let her hand go.He try to control his anger because he didnt want to loss his dream job)


Manvi: Are you scared? Dont worry I am not going to dismiss you now? It may be so fast. So wait for some more days. I will teach you the each and every chapters of mannersSir(stressed) Remember it.10 days. Bye...


(manvi walked towards her classroom.Her friends followed her And asking questions like "how you know him? what challenge?etc...Manvi told them the flashback)


sim: He is your enemy ?Then why are you just dismiss him from his job?

sanju: yes.Mannu... He was insult you.And you allow him to work happily in your own college?

Manvi: Exactly.He will work in our college.Infront of our sight

anji: You want to see him.Why?

Sim: (dreamly)Because he is handsome.Right Mannu.

Manvi:(shouting)Handsome my foot.What are you talking girls? you find him handsome.it is so funny.It is just one part of my plan.

Sim:What is your plan Mannu?

Manvi: Give a punishment to mess up with Manvi Sharma. I am not going to leave him by giving a dismissal order.I want to make his life hell

anji:Then you marry him.I am sure who will marry you his life become hell.

Manvi:What? I will kill you Anji...

Anji(running):I am joking dear .Dont take it seriously.



Virat went to the staff room and introduce himself. He is very friendly.Everyone started to like him from the first day, staffs and students except our Red chillies (its their Gang name:Manvi,anji,sim)





In the evening Manvi reached her house.
Her dadhi and dadaji were waiting for her.



Dadaji :Manvi we want to ask you something?

Manvi :Not now dadhu I am going to Anji's B'day party.We will talk tomarrow.

Dadhi :We are not asking you any request.Its our order.You have to obey us.

Manvi :Oh.comon dadhi its not your court and I am not a criminal for giving me orders.Am I?

Dadhaji :(angrily)Yes . You are.

Manvi :What?

Dhadhi :(fuming with anger)You are a criminal.

Manvi :
you both are playing a prank on me. Am I right? I must say You both are amusing actors. Look at your faces.(laughing)

Dhadhaji :Shut up Manvi.

Now Manvi scared with her dhadhaji's high voice.


Manvi :What happend ? Why are you both behaving like this?

Dhadhi :Do you want to know its answer? Then tell me what happened in the morning?

Manvi :What?

Dadhaji : did you make a accident in the MG road?

Manvi :(thinking)OMG.They are talking about that idiot , Virat's incident.

Dadhiji :We are asking you something.Answer me.Yes or No.

Manvi: um...Yes.But its not my fault.

Dadhiji: Dont act innocent Manvi. You know the victim of accident file a against you.

Manvi: But he is Ok. Use kuch nahi hua tha. Bas uska bike ko kuch damage hua.Bas ithni se bath keliye aap log much par chilla rahi hu.(She start to crying.But not truely. Just for escape from Grandparents quarrel 😭 "DRAMAQUEEN"😭)

Dhadhaji: Ro math Manvi. Its Ok. Waise bhi wo case babas leliya hai.

Manvi: (in mind)Bechara. Dar gaya honga mughse(😊)

Dadhaji: Tum janthi hu wo kon hai.Tumhari college ki nayi lecturer hai. tum uska student hone ki vachah se apne case babas leliya. wo nahi chahtha tum police station par pahunche.

Dhadhiji : Acha hua. Nahi tho hamari reputation kharab ho jathi. Ladka bahuth acha hai. Hamein use kuch tho dena chahiye.

Dhadhaji : Meine use pehle hi gift de chuki hu.

Manvi :😕Gift. Kaisa gift?

Dhadhaji :Uske liye ek nayi bike. Par usne mana kiya.Isliye maine tumhari Nanaji se kehkar uska temporary lecturer post permanent kar dia.

Manvi :Kya?😲

Dadhiji :Ye bahuth acha kiya aapne.


In Virats house.He is very happy😊 because he got his dream job permanently. Now he thanked Manvi in his mind.





Manvi is very upset.So she decided to stay in house and not attend Anji's birthday party.
Anji calls Manvi

Anji: Mannu...Where are you?

Manvi:Mein khar par hu.
Anji:What?

Manvi:I cant attend your birthday party.I will talk you later.Happy Birthday and Enjoy the party.

Anji:Kya hua Mannu.Tum bahuth upset lag rahi.
Hum waha aa jau.

Manvi:No dear. Tum party enjoy karo.

Anji:Teri bina hum enjoy kaisa kar pauogi.

Manvi:Ok.Fine.Dont ruin your Birthday. I am coming. Now happy.After fifteen minutes I will be there.



In party, Manvi is not enjoying the party. She know that nobody can change her Dhadhaji's decision. If she ask him to dismiss Virat from his job, he never agree with her as he started liking Virat's behavior.Now she is planing do something to proved him wrong and make Virat a characterless man infront of dadhaji. She decided to make it possible in ten days according to her revenge. And her friends also agree with her.




INDEX

PART 1: PAGE 1
PART 2:PAGE 8
PART 3:PAGE 10
PART 4:PAGE15
PART 5:PAGE 20












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start it soon waiting for it.😊
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welcome dear and yeah would definitely like to read it .
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welcome yaar and continue soon😊
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OMG!! Part 1 was Amazing Totally different Story... Loved Manvi's character...continue soon...please pm me when you update 😊
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nice concept
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Nice concept...But its not clear maanvi negative...u meant that her character would have grey shades..or a sad person who takes happiness also negativly...:)
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loved it
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the titel sounds excited and the first part was nice, would love to read it but please write in english, and pm me please when you continue
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dear... that was so cool... i m loving it:)😊
manvi's charater will have grey shades... oh wow...its something different... i would love to read more:)😊
dear... u made a mistake in writing the word guy... instead u wrote gay.😲.. that word is in virat's character discription... please change it... it makes him GAY!!!!!😆
thanks 4 pm dear:):):)🤗

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