ARIYA FF : Tere Liye [To be Continued by 'vishav'] - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Please Continue. nicely written u r awesum writer
Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter : A New Beginning

ONLY ONE NAME WAS VOICED BY RIYA, WHEN SHE CAME INTO CONSCIOUSNESS...ARJUN, THE LAST THING SHE HEARD WAS ARJUN SCREAMING HER NAME AND THEN NOTHING...
ON SEEING HER WHOLE FAMILY, RIYA WAS NOW SURE THAT ARJUN KNOWS THE TRUTH NOW, THE WHOLE TRUTH...BUT WHERE HE WAS?
IS HE ANGRY?...

Arjun's mom: kaisi hai meri bachi, kya zaroorat this, us nalayak ke liye yeh sab karne ki?

Riya: mom, u know na...i love him...i mean he his my life, abhi toh main theek hoon lekin agar unhe kuch ho jaata...

Arjun's father: don't u dare say that...kuch nahi hota tumhe.

Riya's father: yes beta, jo beet gaya, woh ateet hai and what matters the most now, is your present...don't stress yourself by thinking what could have happened.

Rathore's mother: beta, u take rest. we will come again to see u.

Shree And Chottu: haan abhi abhi to theek hui ho, thoda rest karlo.

Rathore: itni aasaani se chodne waala nahi hoon main tumhe riya!

Riya: sir...

Rathore: ab bhi sir bulaogi mujhe, seriously u r a messy sissy!

Riya ( faking anger ): don't don't call me that, i hate that.

Rathore: so what, i will call u that...

Riya: but RB...

Rathore: oohhh...not again. i hate this RB...

THE ELDERS WERE GIGGLING AT THIS...

Shree and chottu: what exactly is this RB and Sissy?

Rathore: jitni hygienic yeh tumhaari best friend, abhi banti hain na. she was not like this before, she was all clumsy and messy. that's why i used to call her my messy sissy...

Riya: not again...now i will tell why i call u RB and what does it stands for!

Rathore: don't u dare riya...

Riya: i will, as u did! so guys...u guys know that bhai has a short temper, right. so he used to be red with anger most of the time and u know what when he was a kid his front two teeth were like a bunny. so he became my RB, my RED BUNNY...

NOW EVERYBODY BURST INTO FITS OF LAUGHTER EXCEPT RATHORE WHO WAS HIGHLY EMBARRASSED...

Shree: rathore sir...red bunny...( again broke into laughter )

Rathore: shree...( glaring )

SHREE WAS SCARED FOR A SECOND BUT RIYA'S WORDS HELPED HIM OUT...

Riya: she he is all red again but i really miss that bunny teeth...

AND AGAIN THE ROOM ECHOED WITH SOUNDS OF LAUGHTER.

Rathore: badmaash, ek baar theek ho ja, phir bataonga ki main kaun hoon?

EVERYBODY ONE BY ONE HUGGED RIYA AND WENT OUT, THE LAST ONE WAS OUR RED B...NANANA...RATHORE!

Rathore ( kissing her forehead ): phele bata nahi sakti thi!

Riya: i am sorry bhai, but u know na...

Rathore: jaanta hoon, bachpan se pagal jo hai tu, arjun ke liye kuch bhi karegi...pagal.

Riya: bhai, arjun kahan hai? woh mujhse milne bhi nahi aaya...kahin woh mujhse naaraaz..

Rathore:ssshhh...don't stress yourself...main abhi jaakar usse yahan bhejta hoon, ok.

Riya: ( just nodded in positive )

RATHORE WENT OUT AND LOOKED AROUND THE WHOLE HOSPITAL AND AT LAST FOUND ARJUN IN THE HOSPITAL MANDIR...
HE PLACED HIS HAND ON ARJUN'S SHOULDER...

Rathore: jab hosh mein nahi thi, tab toh hamesha uske saath tha, ab jab usse hosh aa gaya hai toh tu usse ek baar uski taraf dekh bhi nahi raha!

Arjun ( in tears ): kaise face karun main usse. itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi...

Rathore: jao arjun, ek baar mil aao usse. woh tumhe bula rahi hai, uski baat nahi maanoge.

Arjun: but sam...

Rathore: jao...

ARJUN KNEW THAT THERE IS NO WAY TO ESCAPE NOW SO HE WENT TO MEET RIYA...

INSIDE THE ROOM...

ARJUN STOOD IN A CORNER OF THE ROOM, WITHOUT MAKING A SINGLE SOUND AND NOT MEETING HER EYES...

Riya: arjun, naaraaz ho mujhse?

ARJUN NODDED IN NEGATIVE...

Riya: agar naaraaz nahi ho, to yahaan mere paas aao.

ARJUN SLOWLY WENT IN FRONT OF HER, JUST LIKE A OBEDIENT CHILD...

Riya ( thinking ): lagta hai, he is feeling guilty, but i can't see him like this...i have to do something...

Riya: arjun, yahaan mere paas aakar baitoh.

AND HE DID THAT TOO...SEEING NO MOVEMENT IN HIM, RIYA HERSELF WENT A LITTLE CLOSE TO HIM AND WRAPPED HER ARMS AROUND HIM...

Riya: arjun, i know what are u feeling, just let it out. dard kam ho jaye ga. u love me right so please hug me back and tell me what is bothering u?

ARJUN SLOWLY SLOWLY SHIFTED CLOSE TO RIYA AND EVENTUALLY WRAPPED HIS ARMS AROUND HER..NOT HURTING HER.

Arjun ( crying ): i am sorry riya, maine tumhe hamesha hurt kia...aur har baar tum mujhe un logon se bachati rahi...and even now u are in this state because of me...i couldn't face u...i am sorry..( he burried his face in her hair and rested his head on her shoulder )

Riya( calming him by caressing his hair ): ssshhh...see i am fine now, and jo ho gaya so ho gaya, now we r together right, don't cry arjun...u know when u cry it, every single drop of your tear make my heart pain.

ARJUN IMMEDIATELY PULLED BACK AND WIPED HIS TEARS...

Arjun: i will not cry again...and will not hurt u ever...never ever...

Riya ( wiping the remaining tears ): that's good, u know mr. arjun suryakant raute, aap rote hue bilkul achhe nahi lagte, aapki toh woh, angry young man waali image hi achi hai. u know u appear to be tough...but inside u r a baby...my baby...just mine...

ARJUN KISSED HER FOREHEAD...AND WAS ABOUT TO GO WHEN...

Riya: please...arjun don't go, let me be close to u for a while, please...

ARJUN ADJUSTED HIMSELF ON THE HOSPITAL BED AND HELD RIYA CLOSE TO HIM, ALMOST HUGGING HER...AND RIYA CLUTCHED HIS COLLAR TIGHTLY, TO ASSURE HERSELF THAT HE IS HERE WITH HER...

PARENTS OF BOTH ARJUN AND RIYA WERE SILENT SPECTATORS TO ALL THIS.

Arjun's father: finally, they are together!

Riya's father: bohot suffer kiya hai dono ne apni apni lives mein, but now its the time for them to be together!

Riya's mother: bhagwaan kare, ab hamare bachon ki life mein koi musibat na aaye, bas yeh dono aise hi saath saath rahen.

Arjun's mother: lets leave, un dono ko is waqt sirf ek doosre ki zaroorat hai.!

ON THE OTHER HAND, MR. RATHORE WAS HAPPY AND FELT PROUD OF HIS SON, HE THOUGHT THAT HE WAS A FOOL, BECAUSE HE TRIED TO STOP HIS SON FROM BECOMING WHAT HE IS TODAY, HE IS AN HONEST OFFICER, A TRUE FRIEND AND A PROTECTIVE BROTHER.

Rathore's father: sameer, hame tumse kuch baat karni hai!

RATHORE WAS ABOUT TO MOVE WHEN SUDDENLY HIS FATHER STOPPED HIM BY HOLDING HIS HAND AND SAID

Rathore's father: jaanta hoon, naaraaz ho mujse, par kya mein itna bura hoon ki tum mujhe maaf bhi na kar sako...

Rathore ( turned to face his father and saw tears in his eyes ): dad...

Rathore's father: i am sorry beta, main kabhi tumhe samajh hi nahi paya. i shouldn't had forced my decisions on u, which were the reason of your leaving home, please beta maaf kardo hume...

RATHORE HUGGED HIS FATHER AND SAID...

Rathore: i am sorry dad, mujhe aise ghar chod kar nahi jaana chahiye tha, but, koi baat nahi, hum apni life ki ek nayi shurvaat karenge.

RATHORE'S DAD NODDED IN AGREEMENT...

THE SUN SHONE BRIGHTLY OUT OF THE BLACK CLOUDS, IT WAS THE TIME FOR A NEW BEGINNING.
Edited by dmegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yippe first one to comment...
Loved it
Cute bhai-behen nok-jhoks
At last every truth is unfolde
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Posted: 12 years ago
truly a new beginning...
is it the end????😭 itni a6i story thi...

keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update as usual :) loved it
awww loved it when rathore called her messy sissy 😃
riya called rathore red bunny... so cute
loved riya and arjun's conversation
update soon

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lvubehna

truly a new beginning...

is it the end????😭 itni a6i story thi...

keep it up


i didn't said that its the end, its just a new beginning, just have a look on the index on first page, still there are more updates to be penned down.
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Posted: 12 years ago
just now completed reading all the parts
loved it a lot
it was amazing
loved each and every part
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
yahooo!!!!.. al is well!!!!😊!!!

rathod & red bunny!!!😆!!!!

loved d bro sis conv!!😆😆😆!!

update soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... i jus love reunions... Rathore Red Bunny🤣
update soon...
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

nice update... i jus love reunions... Rathore Red Bunny🤣

update soon...


i am really happy, that you liked that red bunny!😉😉

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