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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nice os through sharon point of view

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire
awesome

PLZ UPDATE UR FF HOGE N JUDA HUM PLZZZ😭😉

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Romantic os..
Liked d way u started Shron pov.. Different sharon nt d regular diva
convo b/w Sharon n bhai was nicely penned down..

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice one..

thanks for the pm namrata..

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

NJ tune pms bheja... awwiiiee lub u re!!!!!!!

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awesome os
Arranged+Love marriage
Loved the concept.A girl who share everything with her bro fell in love with her future husband.Swayam felt bad when sharon reject him but then his happiness knew no bound when he get to know that her would be wife his sharon.Swayam bada chalu nikla kiss...:p .He didn't even know her address aww that part was cute.3yrs shaadi n 2saal ki bachi ke baad bhi nahi sudhra lol.Loved it

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Deetha well done yaar, swaron is a magical pair that just sizzles. Delighted to read the OS from sharon's POV. AWESOME UPDATE.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Deetha 🤗 that was a pleasant surprise indeed...Sharon POV rocked and u kept them special thruout the OS...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

thank you soo much guys... i didnt expect this much response from u ppl coz ...maine kabhi swaron pe likha nahi... so i thought koi padega bhi nahi...thanks a lot...ur comments mean a lot to me🤗