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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scarlet2012

ho so Akash already knows abt Khushi's whereabouts but he is not willing to disclose it to Payal. Will Arshi meet at Mama's kitchen????


Yes he is not disclosing it to Payal yet. He is the male version of the female sacrificial lambs we see on tv 😆 trying hard to do the right thing ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

Too many hits and misses. Sounded to me like an edge of the set romantic thriller.


Lesson learned too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

loved it

will they met
Raul is a cute guy
but if ASR sees him flirting with his khushi he wnt be cute for much long


Raul is not very predictable, he may just surprise you!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meem17

Omg...they are minutes away from meeting
Cant wait ...
Such a cliff hanger..
Thank u for this gripping update..
Loving ure arshi more with each update. .
Payash is also very intriguing here...


Thank you Meem :)
Next update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: segad

what a cruel family arnav has! he is suffering and the very people for whom he gave up his childhood and slogged like hell can't see it or do anything to alleviate it. anjali acts like a self appointed pontiff, blind to her faults and to those of her "husband" but intent on trying to teach arnav life lessons.

akash can't deal with the mess in his own life and wants to help khushi.

selfish blind mice, all the raizadas.



At bold, was there ever any doubt on that?
Life would be so much easier for them, if they all lived their own and let the other deal with his own problems. sigh
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soppy

Oh yes!..yes!!...are they finally going to meet in the next chapter!
Sooo exited !
Update soon!!


Yes indeed ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yashal_khan

it was awsumm they both are very close

hope they meet in next chap 😊
arnav state make me cry yar he is already paid to much wht he did with his khushiii ...but loving redaing which we never got in show😊
continue soon
thanks for updating n pm
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Thank you YK :)
Glad to know you are enjoying the read so far. Next update will be soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi21

Sigh.


I know what Arnav did was beyond wrong..but now I wish his pain would end...it hurts you know. A lot.

People say that the one who wrongs is usually more hurt than the one who is wronged...because guilt is one such thing which weighs more than tons and tons of things.

I know he shouldn't be off the hook yet...but the two can at least meet...right?

I am loving this...

oh how I wanted Arnav's redemption...but never got

nevertheless..I am loving this one..and I hope they'll get back together soon :)



Eagerfor next update..update soon! :)


I see you want an end to his suffering. I agree, they can meet...and besides I miss them together too :)

Lets see what happens next.
Thanks A.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .caprice.

The song in question is beautiful, and I am not ashamed to admit that I have watched Jab We Met as four times as many as the years in my age, despite having long declared that I'm not remotely fond of chick flicks.


Well, this was enjoyable to read. Akash and Khushi -- their conversation in particular -- makes me wonder how beautiful this jijaji-saali relationship would have been, under normal circumstances. The last bit was funny. :-)

-Sangfroid


I like that song too. I figured this is the sort of song that plays in the radio often. And it made sense...

I would have liked to see Akash-Khushi bond in the show too, something that was never explored sadly.

Thanks C.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soaringskies

Res 😳

Someone has updated LB 😲😆
~EDITED~
Aria, you are an awesome writer, have a super- awesome storyline in hand and then you take ages to update..**sigh I understand the fact that everyone has a life outside and asli duniya is more important than this..but as a reader i get frustated for not getting that connect with story back!🤔 and especially when it's one of my favourite stories.!
okayy firstly, that is my favourite song, an apt choice for the update Awwie the para where arnav remembers khushi with longing and then it suddenly turns into guilt..beautifully written👍🏼
khushi's reaction was urmm only arnav can get her to react like that (even unconciously) and raulji's teasing + "ji" thing was hilarious..😆
i even loved the phone convo of akash and khushi.
In short. i loved, loved the update completely😃 Update soonish😛


Yeah, asli duniya is a zaalim place. Otherwise I'd give you an update every other day!😛 😆 sigh!
Always a pleasure to read your comments...funny too. Soonish? Like before you expect - how does that sound?

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