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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

what a change in geet but i understand ...loved the dadi atleast someone who understand her POV

Maan you have to do lots efforts to bring old innocent geet back

Loved the update

Ohhh i am greedy one more update ...please

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

wow.. super update.. You know I have not been in favor of Geet keeping her pregnancy from Maan, and i still do not approve of it..

But this chapter wasn't about that.. it was about the conflict she feels within.. and you brought it out really really well. I mean it was a persistent ache, that grew and twisted and grew in my chest.. as it must have in Maan's.. I could almost feel their hearts bent out of shape from wanting to end all distance from between them.

in this part, I could Geet's frustration so well. That she loves him, needs him but cannot get over the hurt that he left her alone for 2 years.. oh their dynamic has changed and how!

.. from dying in anticipation of having her in his arms, to now a gut wrenching realization that from UK to Delhi is not all the distance he has to cover.. it must have come slowly over him, a panic, and anguish from confusion and her coldness, that would only deepen with the night..

.. the tone was heavy, and tense, .. works for this part of te story.. eager for the next part:)

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Geet ki innocence ko save krte krte,maan lost geet's normal self too.

She behavd so formally n to d point.

Bt maan too changed.In a way he seemed to behave immturely as if trying be like his geet bt...

Conti soon

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Wonderful update.

The forced isolation took its toll on Geet. Thank God that Daadi realized that the men in her life were trying to run it for her and did not stop her from going.

I have a vision of Maan caring for the baby for a long time while she goes to college😆

Thanks for updating.

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Oh I am dreading his guilt

Separation has made different
This inner turmoil of hers is so true
Yes she is angry but she longed for him too
Beautifully shown

Still waiting for t precap

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

I was so angry at u for not updating t precap
But then read t pt again
Trust me again & again
2 nd time read I was angrier
& then when read it now I realized this pt was much required to show her distancing
Or say her rutna
Because next bit when he would be with their little angel
He would be do broken that she won't be able to show her anger then
Even though nothing would have changed she would be still hurt deep with in but then she would have yo put that brave face so that she could bridge his guilt & father hood
Umm bravo
Excellent update
Hats off

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Loved the update but still can't wait for Maan to know that he is a father now!!!! Please do that soon n thanks for making it up for yesterday's update but there is one thing that I am confused about is why did Maan's family ever even in a fit of rage tell him that Geet was pregnant??

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

update maneet meeting geet hesitation maan wanted her as before but geet waiting for maan to knew about new member

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

chalo maan n geet met...but wht will maan do to bring old geet back...n wht will b his reaction aftr knwing d truth...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...