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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

nice part ..
what happened next I cann't wait.


Thankss ,,dr i will try to update may be today or tomarrow
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

dont tell me... Arjun Chauhaan??? i don't believe it... interesting story... waiting 4 more!!😉

Thanks dr but just wait
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yas23

amazing update
waiting 4 mre continue soon

Thanks dr i wil try
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks fr for liking n commenting..i start next part with poem..hop u like next part--

PART-5
"teri jhalak phir se"


SCENCE-One boy is standing near the windown the room is totaly dark..thinking some memory...
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Chand sasen jo mere dil main dhadak rahi...
vo bus tumhara he naam le rahi...
nahi janta main ke..
kon ho tum..
kahan ho...
phir kyun mera dil tumse milane ko es kader..
betab ho raha..
kyun lagta hai ehsa kahin koe to hai..
jo aaj bhi mere intjar main hai...
kyun tumhare us intjar per..
yakin kerne ko man ker raha..
kyun tumhare us pyar per yakin kerne ko man ker raha...
kon ho tum..
kahan ho..
kyun tumhari dhakane mere dil main sunaye padti hai..
kyun tumhari avaj mere kanon main gunjati hai...
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kyun ehsa lag raha..sadiyon se janta huin huin..
jab tum first time sudenly mujhase takraye..
kyun kyun...akhir kyun tumhen dekh ker ehsa laga..
jaise pehale bhi kahin mila huin..
whyyy why..kuch samajh nahi aa raha..
jab tum achanak se meri car ke samne aye..to kyun ek pal ke liye meri sasen tham gaye..main to ose janta tak nahi..phir kyun us ladki ko
us halat(condition) main dekher mujhe takleef ho rahi the..why why... ??
mujhe yahan ana he nahi chahiye tha..ek ajeeb se ghutan hai yahan..jaise koe to hai jo mera intajar ker raha..akhir kon..?
kyun vo ladki mujhe etani apni se lag rahi the..
ye tum kya sonch rahe ho leav it..tum jante tak nahi use..kon hai, kahan se aye the,kya naam tha..to phir kyun uske bare main etna sonch rahe ho...
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are u r here..or main kab se pure gher main dhund rahi ho..or ye kamre main etna andhera kyun ker rakha hai..
mrs chauhan comes inside his room..
boy-mom u kno mujhe andhere main rehana pasand hai..
mrs Ch-i kno my dr son but tum bhul rahe ho main. tumhari mom huin..
i wanna to ask u ..tum yahan and


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Posted: 12 years ago

andhere main kya sonch rahe ho..
Boy-kuch khas nahi mom bus ehse he,
Mom-ehse he..ya phir kise ladki ke bare main sonch rahe ho..
Boy-mom..!!!..aap janti hai ke mujhe ladkiyon se nafrat hai..
Mom-ok ok ab angree look dena band karo..
tumhen pata hai na aaj gher main ek party hai..so ye angry look dena band karo..
Boy-mom u kno na mujhe akelerehna psand hai..party main jana mujhe pasand nahi..ek ajjeb se ghutan hoti hai..
mom-my dr son tum bhul rahe ho party hamare gher hai..or ager tum he nahi hoge to sare log kya sonchenge..yahi ke chauhan family ke apne baide se banti nahi..kya tum yahi chahte ho ke log tumhare papa or mere bare main yahi sonche..
Boy-mom ab mene ehsa kab kaha..u both r the best mom n dad of the world
mom-thats meens tum aa rahe ho..
Boy-fine now happy..but one condition jab mera mam hoga main tab aaonga..
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on the other side-in riya's house-
SCENCE-rathor goes Riya's house for picking her for the party.
sameer-aunti vo riya kaha hai.
Riya's mom-sameer baita vo apne room main hai..but i dont think ke vo party main...before her mom comlete her santance.
riya comes out her room..shewearing purpol gown..open hair that tuches to her waist.
one diamond breslete.
she looks mor gorgious.
app dono es tarah se kya dekh rahe hai..party main. nahi chalna sameer..sameer nodded in yes both say bye to mrs mukharji n left for the party.
What happend few minute before.
riya took arjun pic n talk his pic..pata nahi arjun aaj kuch badla badla sa hai.
tum pas nahi mere ..phir bhi kuch apna apna sa hai.
kyun tumhen es kader chahate hai.
ke tumhare na hone per bhi tumhara ahsas her pal hota hai.
har taraf bus tum he tum najer ate ho.
kyun tumhari yaden akser mujhe rola jati hai.
kyun aaj dil keh raha hai.
tum phir loat ker aoge.
pata nahi kyun ehsa lag raha hai es


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Posted: 12 years ago
party main kuch to hone vala hai..pata nahi mujhe ehsa kyon lag raha hai ke mujhe es parti main jana chahiye..
finaly she decided to go in party..
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present time-
riya n sameer comes out her house..
riya is scilent may be thinking somthing in mind..
Sameer spock -
Sa-riya..
Ri-humm
Sa-tum thik to ho na..i meen ager party main nahi jana..to
(acctualy sameer ask her this bez after arjun's death riya doent attaind such type of party)
Ri- i m fine sameer..n i hv no problem to go in party..
Sa-vaise u looks so beautiful in. this drees..or ye color bhi tum per sot kerta hai..
Ri-riya litle smile n say..ye color arjun ka fav hai..
Sameer doesnt expect that ans..so he changed the topic..
vaise tumne ye nahi bataya ke main es dress main kaisa lag raha huin..
sameer wear's a black sout he looks more handsome..
(but if sam ask the same q ..to other girl..to vo girl sach main sam ko dekh ker faint ho jati..but riya..use khud nahi pata uske dil main. kya hai)
she looks sameer dress n lilte smile ..without saying anyword sit in the car..
sameer drive the car n after few minute they reach chauhan's mansion..
sameer open riya's side door n forward his hand to come out..but she refuse sameer feel litle disspoint but he ignored..
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the party is full on..
the house looks so beautiful..
the house decorated with flower's n light..it was theam based party..every couple n person in this party wear one mask..
inside the house..mr &mrs
chauhan wellcome the geust..
sameer enter the house n riya follow him..
sameer-r u mr chauhan hellow i m mr sameer rathor n she is my fencee riya mukharji(mention toward riya)
Mr chauhan-plz to meet u mr sameer..yes i m keshav
chauhan n she is my lvly wife mrs vandna chauhan..
Sa-i kno about ur wife..n extrimly sorry mam for my last behavior.
Mrs ch-ohh its ok mr



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Posted: 12 years ago

sameer or life main ehsi choti chuti baatein hoti rehati hai..plz come inside n enjoy the party..
both come inside..the interior decoration is supub..
Sa-parti ke arangment to kaphi achhi ker rakhi hai,.per enka son kahi najer nahi aa raha..
Ri-humm..
they took the mask n wear it..
waiters took wine glasses n soft drink n moves here n there n served drink to everyone..
MR N MRS CHAUHAN STAND IN THE MIDDLE..
mr kesav chauhan-
took one sampian glass
ladies n gentalman..thank u very much jo aap sab hamari party main aye..or es party main roshan bana diya,..hop u all enjoy the party..i want to introduse my family -
hi i m keshav chauhan(India to biusnessman n nice hearted man no ego of his richness) n she is my most beautiful my lv my wife vandna chauhan..(doctorn lvling hearted..etna to app sak ko pata chal he gaya hoga..) ..
now i wanna to introduse my handsome n samart son..
duniya ke her ladki uske piche bhagi hai..
all laughing by hearing this..
ohh comone dad aap phir se shuro ho gaye..
a most handsome man walk down the stairs..wearing black shot n mask to..so no one clearly see his face..
MRS CH- my dr son marsk to hatao verna logo ko kaise pata chalega..
mom apke liye etna he kaphi hai ke main es parti main aya..ye aap badon ke party kitani bor hoti hai..slowly wishper in his mom ears..his mom hit his shoulder.
tum kabhi nahi sudharoge..yahi sari baaten apne dad ke samne bolna.
mr ch-meet my son..arjun abhinav chauhan.
riya pov when arjun enters the party.
kyun ehsa lag raha hai..tum mere bahut pas ho..kyun es hava main tumhara ahsas hai..kyun ehsa lag raha hai tum esi parti main ho.
kyun mera dil ye keh raha hai tum loat ker vapis aoge,
when arjun moves near to her n goes to his parents.
she feel very strong feeling of his presence..
T.B.C.
PRECAPE-PARTY CONTI



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Posted: 12 years ago
intersting updates
part time in precap
intersting continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!!
loved it...!!!
poems were beautiful...!!!
finally arjun ki entry ho gai..!!!
arjun thinking about riya...!!! wow..!!!
riya also feeling his presence...!!!!
awww feeling bad for rathore...!!! hope uske lie bhi koi jaldi hi aayegi..!!!😉
cant wait fr ariya to meet..!!!
continue soon..!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
so many mystries... nice chapter... updae soon...

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