||SwaRon SS: Daru Desi|| - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Lovely chapter ...
Swaron first meet was cute!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipeee demand completed,🥳 now we want a bada wala update, please update as soon as possible...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesume start.though it was very short update but loved it.loved swarons first meeting❤️. Pls update next part soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2~Taking A New Step

Finally, due to the lack of oxygen they had to forcefully break apart'till now Sharon was in her complete senses'she was shocked'devasted'she felt threatened'but somewhere in her heart she felt relived'happy'passionate'she was totally confused'her thoughts werebroken when a concerned voice asked "Did I hurt U'. ???"even his voice trailed away at the end...somehow she managed to look up'only to find him looking down'she raised her palm to his chin and made him look up and said"U didn't'"with a meek smile pasted on her perfect pink lips'these words brought a slight smile'meek and cute one'on his face'

Sharon asked him to cool down and sit in the room'she went to the washroom and looked at her self in the mirror'she cud see the moments of last night flashing in the mirror in front of her'she was afraid'she was not scared of him'she was scared of facing her parents'she wanted to marry him and live with him for the rest of his life'but wat about her parents approval'wat wud she tell dem'that she liked'.?...wait a min. wats his name??? Oh Gosh! She was awestruck'she didn't know his name???she splashed water on her face'closed her eyes and unlocked the door'she opened the door to find him sitting on the bed'one leg hanging down and one folded'he was surfing the T.V channels'he noticed her coming and switched off the T.V and flashed her a smile'full of concern'she moved near him and sat next to him'he enveloped her in a hug as she placed her head on his chest'he whispered in her ears'."Will U marry me' ?"'she nodded a yes and said" I love U'and U love me but dear can I know ur name?"'He hit his head with his palm and said"shit'Oh god'my name is Swayam Shekhawat'wats urs ?"'.she loved his name and told him her name'she was just relaxing on his chest when something hit their minds'.they shouted to each other"U?"'Sharon said'"Ur Mira aunty & Sagar uncles son Swayam?"'he nodded a yes flashing a eye to eye cute smile'."And ur Gautam uncle and Amrita auntys daughter..if I'm not wrong sweetiepie?"'she loved her new name "sweetiepie" and flashed a big smile nodding a yes.

After and hour or so both the love birds drove to there houses to tell there parents about them'first they assembled both his and her parents at Swayam's farm house and declared there relationship to them..

Mira,Amrita,Gautam & Sagar where extremely happy'they decided to get them married soon'Swayam and Sharon both where very happy when suddenly Sharon's phone rang'she saw the caller ID'her face went pale'all were busy deciding on the marriage'but Swayam had his eyes only on Sharon'he noticed her frowned face and began worrying'.he went to her and pulled her to the side and asked her cupping her face"Is everything k sweetiepie ?" she nodded a yes and said that she was tired'he told her to go and rest but still he cud read her mind there was something which was disturbing her'disturbing her a lot'he decided to ask her about this tomorrow as it was already 9:00 pm and she may need rest.

~eND Of PaRt tWO~

Wooh! This part was quite challenging for me to write'so how was it good bad or simply boring?

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Karen(Maria)

Edited by Karen_sharon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

NOTE

Being a SS (Short Story) the chapters will be relatively small.

||Sorry in Advance||

Hope to get the same love and respect from all of U.

Karen (Maria)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Well I liked the update. Great they are getting married..
Aww sweetiepie!! :D
Nicely written...looking forward to the next update..
Sorry for not commenting on the previous one..It was nicely put too!
Update soon..Thanks for the PM 😊
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice update...
loved it...
ss were cute...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome update 😊
Swaron are in love n getting married
wondering what is making Sharon worried
Hoping Swayam would solve her worries
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesume update.swaron getting married.i m so happy but wonder what happen with sharon.i hope koi serious baat na ho.pls update next part soon😊
Edited by truptiswaron - 12 years ago

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