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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...Loved the update!!!
Felt so bad when khushi was in so much pain and even arnav couldnt do anything about it
and Arnavz past was shocking...so sad he had to go thru this too
how did geet/anjali injure her leg and how is it permanent?
update soon and take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
I really like arnav's concern for khushi..
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it.felt sorry for both arshi.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updt
Felt bad for Khushi and Arnav too.
Arnav hs realized tht khushi ws forced.
Hopefully soon he'll knw the truth.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Arnavs finally softening towards khushi
Finally he's realized that khushi wasn't trying to seduce him first time they met n he also knows she was forced into this
Can't wait for him to find out she's not a prostitute infact she was pleasing her sleezy husband
Wow I wonder what Arnav will do once he finds out about Shyam .gotta feeling all help will break loose
As for maan he's really taking this revenge to New heights only showing his true side once in while poor Geet I hope he doesn't go to far
Hoping their MU gets clear soon too
Looking forward to next update
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb story.. heartbreaking.. brought me nearly to tears.. but loving it.. Arnav is falling for her.. great.. pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CBrocks

Hey ...Loved the update!!!

Felt so bad when khushi was in so much pain and even arnav couldnt do anything about it
and Arnavz past was shocking...so sad he had to go thru this too
how did geet/anjali injure her leg and how is it permanent?
update soon and take care


I've already given small info abt this but I'll given in detail later on yaar with shy am fb
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZakiZ

superb story.. heartbreaking.. brought me nearly to tears.. but loving it.. Arnav is falling for her.. great.. pls update soon


Thank yaar. Welcome to the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just finished reading this story and it was too good that i am hooked to it.
i loved it.
The characters are the flashback and their roles and the way you have merged Man & Geet's story and Arshi in one is something that have blown me away. loved the characters.

What i loved the most in this is that you have addressed so many social evilness and brought them to justice in your own way.
I was following ur stories in Blog and i didn't knew that you were here in IF too. had i know it before, i would have been in this journey form the beginning.

I would like to get PMs from you if you send one.
i have send you a friend request, do accept it if you still send out pms for the update.

Looking forward to this journey with you.
Celina.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Aarti. I had a pm for your other stories n since I ws a bit irregular for a while I thought to check out this one since this is story tht I read.
I read the last part n I also read reg likes n comment. I personally like the story shows the dark side of life.
I am a big Fan of ARSHI and its their story tht had me hooked frm the initial chap bt nt much of them in the last few chaps only the last updt we saw arshi.
I dnt mean to offend or bash its ur story to tell bt since you asked for feedback I m giving my view as to why I m feelin a little disappointed I felt the story is no longer abt Arshi they r in the background too much of Maan n Geet. Its nice to see more characters bt nt at the expense of Arshi.
Pls write abt Arshi.

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