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PART TWENTY THREE

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Khushi,,

When la and ansh were entered the house, it was already open and khushi came out form the house as she heard ansh's sobs,,

La: Khush when did you came???

Khushi: I returned a few minuets ago la,, and you kept the keys here so I came in,, and what happened to ansh why is he crying,,

La: Nothing khush you just handle him,, I will come after freshening,,

Khushi: Ok,,

**

Khushi: Bacha what happened?? Why are you crying??

kiddo: Mamma he,, ba unl,,

Khushi: Who bad uncle bacha??

kiddo: He sot kiddo,,

Khushi: What,, who shout at my kiddo???

kiddo: He,,

Khushi: Ok now you don't cry mamma will handle the person who make my bacha cry,, ok,,

kiddo: Mamma he sot you,,

Khushi: No baby he won't harm mamma ok,,

Khushi patted ansh's head and make him sleep,, and put him on the cot and then came to la's room,, la was really shocked after today's incidence,,

How arnav yelled ansh for touching his laptop,, and by making ansh angry he just break the cell and laptop,, but didn't had much damage also,,

Her trance was broke by khushi,,

Khushi: La,, are you ok??

La: Yeah khush come in,,

Khushi: La tell me where were you two?? And what happened to ansh why was eh crying??

La: Khush don't worry I am fine,, and how is kiddo??

Khushi: He is fine now,, and I made him sleep,,

La: That's ok, we two were gone to RM,,

Khushi: What?? RM,, means arnav sir's house,,

La: Yes,, and there ASR got angry on ansh and he yelled at him,, so was he crying,,

Khushi: What,, sir yelled at my baby,,

La: Yes khush,, and I never seen him like that and,,

Khushi: La why you took ansh there,,

La: Khush you know na Mr.jain , he and his team were at RM and they were going to leave today also, so they called us but you didn't go so I am gone to meet them,, as ansh will be alone here I took him with me,,

Khushi: But la in RM,, I,, I didn't liked that,, you could have left him at day acre,,

La: Khush we cant trust them at once,, and there at RM,, everyone was nice akash sir, his wife daadi ji,, akash sir's maa and papa were there,, daadi and payal akash sir's wife were took good acre of kiddo, and he was really attached to akash sir,,

Khushi: That's ok la but arnav sir,,

La: Ok listen,,

Then la explained everything happened in RM,,

Hearing this khushi really shocked arnav ji yelled at her baby,, but for why for touching his things,, yes he would yell for that,, he never liked when she also touched his things,,

But ansh is a small kid how can he yell at him,, ansh is his own blood,, and today he didn't know about that,, but what if he knew and even after that he will do the same thing,,

He never liked kids,, but eh rally liked ansh, anjali di's baby,, yes ansh was his di's son then he will love him,, but about my baby,, will he ever get the love and respect,, never,,

Khushi you once thought after shital got exposed,, that you did a mistake by didn't call him a second time,, but that was good for you and your baby,, and now stay away form him,, and don't let ansh near him,,

But la broke her thoughts,,

La: Khush do you know akash sir before we started working at AR??

Khushi: Why la??

La: No,, he was telling that kiddo's character is more like his dad,, did he know your husband,,

Khushi: La wo I had seen him,, and met him before,,

La: Ok so he know your husband,,

Khushi: Yes,,

La: Khush we have to kiddo's character good not like his dad's,, he is your son only,, and he doesn't need his father's bad characters,,

Khushi: Yes la,, we have to take care of that,,

La: And khush the new deal was signed and on behalf of you I signed it,,

Khushi: That's nice la,,

La: And what about your work khush,,

Khushi: Yeh that also went good everything will be ready in some days,

La: Ok you go and take some rest and be with ansh he will get worry after today's incident,,

Khushi: Ok la ,,

La didn't asked about khushi's husband much as khushi will feel bad and will be sad and how can la make khushi her best friend sad,,

At night khushi was feeding ansh and he was making her rum after him with the food in her hand,,

Khushi: Bacha come mamma will be angry on you ok,,

Kiddo: No foody mamma,,,,

Khushi: No bacha come have this,,

Kiddo: No,, no,,

Khushi: Don't be ziddi bacha I said come here and have this,, [khushi also told in anger,, as she was really worried and angry on arnav's behavior to ansh]

Kiddo: Wha eh ell,,

Khushi: What??? [Khushi asked in shock]

La: Khush wo he heard it form ASR,, when he yelled at him,,

Khushi: Bacha why are you copying him,, mamma don't like that ok,,

Kiddo: No foody,, wha eh ell,,


Khushi: Bacha ok don't have food but have some milk,, ok,,

Ansh thought for some time and then agreed,,

Kiddo: Ok kiddo milky no foody,, no wha eh ell,,

Khushi: Ok come,,

As she fed ansh his milk her mind was on arnav,, how her son is trying to copy arnav,, in one meeting,, how that can happen,, she became really worried,,

But didn't showed to anyone,, and to ansh not at all, he became worried and will ask many questions then everyone will came to know everything,,

Next day,,

When khushi entered the office she saw arnav the first, and seeing him her anger became high,, she tried to control and she closed her eyes,, her baby's cries and then his what the hell came to her mind,, and giving arnav a angered look she left to her cabin,,

Here arnav also became shocked with her behavior,, khushi never behaved like that,, and that too at him,, but his thoughts were full with ansh and then khushi,, ansh's tear filled eyes and khushi's innocent face was coming in front of him,,

Khushi entered her cabin but disturbed by the knock,, which was akash,,

Akash: Bhabhi,,

Khushi: Akash bhai,, why you came here did you have any work with me??

Akash: No bhabhi,, actually,,

Khushi: Akash bhai,, I already said don't call me bhabhi,, you call me miss K or khushi,,

Akash: Sorry bhabhi wo,, I met ansh and he really gone after bhai,, and his eyes are just like yours,,

Khushi: Thanks for the compliment,, but I have some work,,

Akash: Bhabhi why are you angry on me?? And,,

Khushi: I am not angry on you bhai,, but yesterday how he behaved with ansh wasn't good you know how much he was crying and I really had a tough to calm him,,

Akash: Bhabhi I am saying sorry on behalf of bhai,,

Khushi: Why?? Why you are saying sorry for his mistakes,, when mistake was his hwy others had to seek sorry and had suffer because of him,, akash bhai,, I had really suffered a lot because of him,, so I don't want that to happen again,,

Akash: Bhabhi,,

Khushi: I didn't complete akash bhai,, I don't want my baby to suffer the way I suffered, so please leave us alone in our way please,,

Akash: Bhabhi what are,,

Khushi: I am saying the right thing,, your bhai will anyone to play but for me,, only my baby is left so please akash bhai,, please I am begging to you,, leave us alone,,

Akash: I am sorry bhabhi,, I know bhai done a lot to you but believe me he really changed and wants you back in his life,, and we all too,, but I will respect your decision,,

Saying akash left the cabin,, khushi sat in the chair and cried,,

And after that day khushi made sure ansh doesn't goes to RM or meets any of the raizadas,, and she won in that but sometimes god will do some miracles himself,,

Few days later,,

It was one evening when vasu and ansh were went to mandir,, and after their pooja they were came down to go back their home,,

[ansh much don't like to come in mandir but khushi and la were busy in the new show they didn't reached home yet and vasu had to go for the pooja also,, so she took ansh with her,,]

When they coming down,, they saw an old lady who was fainting in the steps,, and vasu came to her fast with ansh,,

Vasu: Are you ok maa ji??

Lady: Haan wo I am not feeling well,,

Vasu: Ok tell me where is your house we will take you there or any hospital,,

Lady: Wo I didn't take my medicines so I am,, it's in my house,,

Vasu: Ok then come I will talk you,,

Lady: My driver is there at parking,, tell him my name,, devyani raizada,,

Vasu: Ok ma ji,,

Then vasu helped daadi to sit the steps the with ansh she went to driver and told him everything and driver and vasu helped daadi to sit in the car,, and vasu and ansh also left with daadi to drop till her house,,

And they reached RM,,

Driver: Ji you wait here I will call someone,,

Vasu: Ok,,

In RM akash arnav were back at form office,, and were having tea,, just then driver came to calling them..

Driver: Arnav bhaiyya akash bhaiyya daadi ji is not well and she fainted in mandir's steps,,

Arnav: What??

Akash: Where is she??

Driver: Wo one lady helped her and we two bought daadi here,, she is in the car,,

Arnav: Ok,, akash you call daadi' doctor,, I will take her inside,,

Akash: Ok bhai,,

Arnav left to daadi and akash called the doctor,, and maami mama and payal were also came to daadi,,

Arnav and mama were helped daadi to come inside,, and others were also with them,, ansh and vasu were looking at daadi with worry,,

After sometime doctor came and checked her and then gave an injection,,

Arnav: Doctor how is he now??

Akash: Is anything for worry??

Doctor: No Mr.raizada nothing to worry,, her BP got increased,, its good that you called me on time,,

Arnav: Ok thank you doctor,,

Doctor: Its ok ASR but keep her health ok,, and gave her medicines on time, and make her avoid tensions,,

Arnav: Ok doctor,,

Then doctor left,, ansh and vasu were at one corner of RM seeing and hearing everything,,

Ansh knew he came in this house before and he played here and when he saw arnav he realized whom he is,,

Kiddo: Naanu maa, daadi ill,

Vasu: Yes anshu daadi ill,,

Kiddo: Dot unl ijnom,,

Vasu: Yes doctor gave injection so that daadi will get well soon,,

Kiddo: Ha,,

Vasu: Yes,, she will be alright soon,,

Just then Akash's attention got ansh,,

Akash: Ansh?? What are you doing here???

Ansh?? Everyone looked at the corner and saw ansh with an old lady,,

Driver: Wo akash bhaiyya, she s the one who helped daadi in mandir,, she also came with us to drop her,,

Akash: Ok,, thank you aunty wo daadi,,

Vasu: Its ok beta maa ji will be fine soon,, don't worry,., [vasu said as she comes forward with ansh]

As soon as ansh saw arnav he turned his head away,

Arnav: [st]Wow what an attitude,,

Akash: You are la's mother,,

Vasu: Yes you know her,,

Akash: Yes she works with us,, in our company,, [and then akash introduced his family to vasu,,]

Vasu: Oh that's good,,

Akash: So ansh little man how are you??

Kiddo: Fen,, [ansh said smiling only at akash]

Payal: So anshu won't talk anyone other than his uncle,,

Kiddo: No,, [ansh said in an angry tone]

Payal: Aunty you please sit, I will make something for you,,

Vasu: No thanks beta,, now maa ji is fine,, so we leaving for our house,,

Akash: But aunty,,

Vasu: Its ok beta,, we will have something later ok,,

Just then daadi opened her eyes,, and ansh saw this,,

Kiddo: Naanu maa shee,,

Everyone looked at daadi,, and she was opening her eyes,, and trying sit,,

Payal helped her to sit,, daadi looked around and saw ansh and vasu,,

Daadi: Ansh beta aap,,

Akash: Yes daadi you know ansh and la's mother helped you,,

Daadi: Oh, so anshu saved daadi,,

Kiddo: Yesh,, [he said proudly and everyone smiled,, even arnav also,,]

Arnav [st]: Yes he saved you from a group of people after fighting with them,,

Everyone looked at arnav's smiling face after so many months he smiled contently,,

That's when ansh's eyes caught the cell of again arnav's,,

Kiddo: Moile,,

Arnav: Not again,,

Everyone looked at arnav then at ansh,,

Before ansh could caught hold on the mobile arnav get it,,

Arnav: Kid it's not your uncle's its mine ok,,

Ansh looked at arnav and then pouted his lips,, and turned away,,


Arnav and the others smiled at his innocence,, Daadi was sitting now,,

Vasu: How are you feeling now maa ji,,

Daadi: I am fine but a little weak,,

Vasu: Ok maa ji take rest more,,

Daadi: Yes bitiya,,

Kiddo: Naanu maa daadi dald oh la ha hai,, [is daadi feeling pain??]

Daadi: Yes anshu a little,,

Kiddo: Whele daadi??

Daadi: Here,, [daadi pointed her head for fun]

But ansh with difficulty climbed at the sofa and kissed daadi's head,,

Everyone surprised his action,, he is so cute and nice,,

Kiddo: Ab dald ho??

Daadi: No beta now no pain,, anshu take all the pain away,,

Kiddo: Kiddo goo bo,,

Daadi: Yes kiddo good good boy,,

Ansh smiled and tried to climb down,, then he was about fell down,,, arnav shouted,,


Arnav: Be careful,,

And then he caught hold on him,, and ansh was in his father's arms,,

Ansh and arnav looked at each other,, ansh then started to sob,, arnav patted his back,, and at instance he stopped,, and again looked at arnav,, even others were surprised arnav's actions,, he was rude to ansh before but now he is taking care of him,, and saving him,

Kiddo: [st] Oh he is not that much bad,, then ansh smiled at arnav even arnav also smiled,,

Then vasu took him in her arms,,

Vasu: Anshu are you ok???

Kiddo: Yesh naanu maa shee kiddo fen,,

He smiled showing his total teeth he have,,,,


Vasu: You made me worried,, what if something happened your mamma and maasi were,,

Kiddo: Kiddo fen,, no woy,,

Vasu: Ok, ok,, maa ji so we are leaving, will meet you again,,

Kiddo: Ok,,

Akash: Ok aunty, take care,, bye ansh,,

Kiddo: Bai,, bai unle thanu,, [pointing arnav,,]

Arnav: What the??

Kiddo: Wha eh ell,,, [ansh copied arnav again]


Again everyone smiled,,

Akash: Bhai he said thank you to you for saving him,,

Arnav: Oh,, it's ok,, kid,, take care,, [he said and smiled,,]

Kiddo: Ok ,,

Then they left,, after they arnav became satisfied as he got angry on that baby few days ago but now he saved him,, and eh don't have to say a sorry also,, and the satisfaction saving someone whom is close to him,, this feeling is so good,, arnav again smiled with the thought of ansh,,

When vasu and ansh were going back,, they saw buaji coming inside RM,, vasu smiled at buaji,, but buaji looked at them with suspicious eyes,, and then looked at ansh intently,, and ansh didn't liked the look and he also gave a jr. ASR look,,

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PS: So guys now arnav started to be nice with ansh,, and buaji back on the story,, so gave comments if you want the next update today itself,,


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...😊Loved it...😃Kiddo is a charmer👏Thanks for the PM ... ⭐️
Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊awesome update...waiting when ASR comes to know about Ansh...can't beleive I'm on 1st page...
Edited by anarshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏Awesome update👏
👏SUPER HIT STORY👏
thank you for pm me and for writing amazing story🤗
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I'M WAITIN WEN ASR WILL KNW ANSH IS HIS SON
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice second encounter bw father and son
ab khushi aur arnav ka patch up kab ho ga
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will ansh play a part in this patch-up
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Posted: 12 years ago
supperb.. waitin for arnav to knw d truth abt ansh...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update glad he did not get anry at the baby again and bauji watching the baby like he came to take something from her don't like her awesome update thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Loved d update
Thanx for pm
its a blockbuster
Pls update soon

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