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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

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Beautiful chapter. And I still can't get over how reading this story just automatically manages to transport me into your fairyland... where anything and everything is possible. And it just gets better with every update. :)

Loved the heart- felt conversation between La and Khushi. La is indeed a beautiful and sweet soul. Though Arnav may never know the extent of her real feelings , she doesn't feel bitter towards Khushi and instead accepted Khushi and Arnav's love with grace. And her explanation shows why Arnav had been so reluctant to ask her for help in the first place.

Why oh why are their kisses interrupted???😆

Awww...glass shoes!!!!😳 Cinderella all the way! I love the way you inculcate the various fairy tales into your story and weave them all together flawlessly...and leave me all dreamy at the end of it. :)

He wants her to sleep in her arms...like always. Awww...

I will wait and see what exactly the prophecy reveals.

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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Samiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

They'll still sleep together!!!

In a kingdom full of people :O

Wouldn't that create a scandal😉

Oh so khushi will finally meet anjali

I seriously loved La :D

I couldn't write like this even if my life depended on it

great going dear

loved it

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Such a lovely story you are writing..Dee and V? Are these who I think they are?? 😊..Lavanya is a revelation. I loved the personality that you gave her and It is true what Arnav said about not ever knowing if her love was true ..well written logic :)...
and ladies and gentleman...the glass slippers!!! now the journey to this fairyland is complete...😃

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

very nice update...
waiting for the prophecy...
as its a fairytale...
i hope to have a happily ever after!!!!

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

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I don't think there was any damage to control in the first place Saiyyu, but still, I enjoyed this chapter.

I always like stories that are sensitive and kind towards Lavanya, and you did not disappoint me one bit. Her unrequited love, her hurt, her anguish and her goodness - you brought it out beautifully. It was heartbreaking when she said Arnav forgets the human side of hers, she must feel so bad! That poor darling. Please give her a happy ending for herself, Saiyyu ?

Almost kiss! Haha, those two servants are like the Prakash brothers of the magical land, always interrupting kisses :D And Khushi is Rapunzel-cum-Cindrealla ? Badhiya hai !

I am very excited about the next update. I really want to meet Anjali :)

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preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

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comments on pg 92

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Arathy-V

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

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Lavanya- Khushi conversation was quite necessary. It shed light on who Arnav actually is. Lavanya seems good. I thought lavanya might find it difficult to get along with khushi and vice versa. Glad they are friends now. Arnav- Khushi patch up was sweet and then the almost kiss made be super attentive Alas the servants interupted. They are gonna sleep together?? awww cute..can they get any more cute??

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..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

sorry...actually i post this one in night but i red the chapter in mrng so i commented in new post that is in pg 80...sorry i forget this post...

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smarty94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

ANDDD I MADE TO THE SECOND PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *WOhOoO* *air fist!!!!!*🤗

res.

*EDIT*

sorry to update so late.. have papers back to back woh bhi extremely useless *rolls eyes*, but that's not the point, sorry *holds ear*

getting back to the update, meri suee (needle) sirf ek cheez pe atki hai, WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS PROPHECY??? *tries to pull hair* KIA KIA KIA *dhish*dhish*dhish* *dramatically VERY😉*

LAVANYA won't talk about it, he won't tell, you won't give a hint! yahan koi sahi ramanchi ho rahi hai😆

and the end just had me awe-ing at him😊 treated being like royalty all the time, does get boring🤔 and he is no less😊 and one scene made me sad, the part where LAVANYA confesses her love for ASR and also the part that he'll never reciprocate it 'cause he loves KHUSHI far too much (mujhe ni pata yahan konsa smiley duun, smiling wala ya dukhi wala)😕

take care and update soOn😊

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#470

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wooohooo...an update! you call it damage control... but i cant see any damage being done in the last one 😊. i loved both the updates...infact i think this one was needed for khushi and lavanya to bond i guess!

a missed kiss? well... make them kiss before he takes her to meet his twin please?! pretty please? you know you want to...right?😃

thanks for the PM

Edited by lakharnshi88 - 12 years ago