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Posted: 12 years ago

#1041

Ohmygawd, what a thrilling chapter!

That was so action packed and enthralling! Beautifully written Tina :)

Do continue soon!

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Lillyalam001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1042

wow its wonderful, throughout the update ma heartbeat was realy fast... i was shockd whn i readd abt the detective... u axfabulous dear hv no words to express ma feelings towarss dis update... n most of all last part was amazing baautifuly writtn

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rrd29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1043

oh..gosh..what a roller coaster...
Phew... finally...Arshi are together and we can heave a sigh of relief..
Please some Arshi romance now... after all the troubles that they have been though

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multifaceted

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1044

Whoa am absolutely speechless...that was one mind blowing update

Amazing thriller and could visualize everything...

Cant wait to read the next part

Thanks for the PM

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1045

what a chapter!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏an absolute rollercoaster!!my heart is actually pounding...

and the way u wrote it..u paint pictures with ur words..seriously..the descriptions are so vivid!!

the detectives???????OMG!! those traitors! how dare they?😡 have they been working on arnav's side or were they working for roy from first only? they are genuinely detectives by profession..lured into betraying arnav because of money..right? oh god, not a single person trusted..

i am feeling terrible about aman u know...especially because i initially thought that he was against arhi when i first read that he was with roy...i hope...hope that he isn't dead...hope they aren't too late..😭

and the khushi-roy/alice...arhi-dia-roy-alice scenes are undoubtedly takes the spotlight of this update👏..terryfying thrilling...adrenaline-pumping.⭐️.and a remarkable display of brains by khushi in the certain face of death.👏.u left me stumped!! what khushi must have been going through!i shudder to think what khushi would have done if the wall wasn't made of glass...i was just wondering..would she have driven the car over alice/roy? 😕

and that lake part..i had my heart in my mouth when the car plunged into the lake..and then royal in the lake with her..with blood all over..trying to submerge her...if arnav hadn't come in time..i am having goosebumps while thinking.😲.

and that last part..the fight of the multiple pesonality..it is such an intriguing thing to read about..and dangerous here when u have it out of control..the only other story i've read with MPD Is TELL ME YOUR DREAMS by Shidney Sheldon..and Shameless is another classic thriller on this strange disorder..and doubtless also one of my favourites!!😳

so they are all gone..dia..royal..and i hope natasha is away for good..these rainas have caused enough trouble to last a lifetime..maybe more..😡

so next chapter is about the famous mother liyana..waiting to know her..

please update super soon!!😊

p.s.i have one complaint..i don't want a short epilogue...i want a long one..at least the size of one half of ur updates please!!😳

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venusfairy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1046

ur amazing⭐️... my heart was racin when readin the updates...and pics were perfect esp roy/alice👏 its very scary🤢... loved readn... loving u more...😊

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Vicks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1047

Holy smokes Tina.

I come to IF and see your PMs. I check the story and you are page 147.

See the power of your pen gal.

My personal favorite - The way you have portrayed the split personality syndrome of Roy/Alice is just absolutely magnificent. You are an author of par excellence...

I could literally visualise the scene in my mind where due to Khushi's support for Roy, Roy is turning against Alice and trying to dominate. The way the internal quarrel happens and the way Roy emerges successful by stabbing himself/herself...I have seen so many L&O (Law and Order) scenes of split personality...And so, could see that you have hit the nail on the head - bang on...Bravo...

Magnificent!!!!

Just pretend you are on the stage and I am in the audience...Here I go - I am getting up and giving you a 'Standing Ovation'...(My visualization is *NOTHING* compared to yours...)

Write a book, get it published gal...

I am not very good at articulating what I like or don't like in a scene. This is the most I can express my feelings about a scene...

You better not kill Aman - Else I am not talking with you for 10 minutes post the next update...This is my threat :)

Still reeling,

-Vicks...

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1048

What an awesome update

A standing ovation to u dear

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Also take a bow it is one of my fav.part it had suspense till the end oh I loved it
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