ARSHI t.s.-Night After Their First Night *Cmplete*

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Alai123
Awesome OS!!!
I would love it if u continue...

Thanks for the update :D

Awww,thank u so much..

but its already a two shot,won't continue on here,but worry not,i have things coming .. LOl.

thanks again for reading and your feedback

.😊

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@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: trivedishraddha

Minnie,have you gone mad??

jale pe namak mat chidak..warna maar padegi..🤪

lol... ab hum kya karan? updates hi itni achi hai k dil kr tha hai k phly 1st hum hi ho.

a race to see who comments 1st LOL.

abhi 2 log lagy hoy hai 1st comment kr ny k ly.. :D

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@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

i did un res on page 13 :D

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

OMG begum...😲 too bold...😛

really censor...😆

hayee shadi baad ki first night... really too beautiful...☺️

the way they did...too too too hot...😳

khushi really dumb...😆

arnav want her to put on weight...😉

shadi ki baad apni patni ko put on weight ki baat i think every husband want...😆

thn y our ASR lag behing...

it was awesome os...

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anam munir

@anamunir

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

hey bud!!!!

i liked the whole update ,puttin' on some wait was real gud !!!!
i guess the whole makeout scenario was well placed n i liked the wordplay too!!buh i think the way they did it ,was kinda outta character for khushi specially on the first day after marriage!!!!
i mean bein' bold in bed isn't a bad idea buh it takes one a hell load ov time to reach that level ov comfort!!!
otherwise it was pretty wellwrittin!!!!
take a bow!!!!
anamunir

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awesum update u not only make arhi blussh but we also blush while reading it hehehe tirchitta hahahaha thx for pm dear

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ASRHOTNEZ

@ASRHOTNEZ

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

wow!

khushi sure is a wild.minx..look at the way she did! Omg!

bt for some wired reason my mind was stuck on the Saree that was thrown in the pool...was wondering when shel pick.it up...before any rm member sees and teases them like hell...

was reading n suddenly in the middle im like damn khushi first go pick up ur Saree...

haila Nannav itna naughty naughty hubby hai...oh m going to faint...

are u coming.up with a continuation for.the beginning??

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Sweta...

@Sweta...

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Awhh their love was perfect her innocence was sweet :) thanks fr the pm really nice Uodate lol :)

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

awesome loved it thanks for the pm

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Megha

@naughtymallu

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Wow...It was awesome...I was eagerly waiting for the making up part😳...Khushi is such an innoent woman😉...Arnavji should really work hard😆...10 as a target?!! Hey Devimaiyyah..Please pinch me...Is this the same ASR who hated kids?😳...They are Adorable...Thanks a lot for the PM and update...Do write more...

Megha😊