FF: Keeping Khushi: Th 8 part 76 Pg 124

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soni_md

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Would bloody murder be petty of me? 😈 Especially if it involved resurrecting someone and then finding ways of S.L.O.W.L.Y torturing them before letting them sink into oblivion? I mean, before, I thought it was only my workout I could take the frustration out on, but I have found a new target! Muhahahaha!

Wow. Where do you find these characters from? But NK won't let her go that easily, and neither will the rest of them. She may see it one way, but the Raizadas' are not conventional, nor are they the type to pander to society. I am, however, supremely interested in how they make this clear to poor, naive Aarti. I adore her, and you! Awesome update, keep it going! 😊

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

now finally we know the story behind everything

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Msserialfan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

tremendously emotional! What a lot of baggage poor Aarti has on her frail shoulders! Where would NK begin to lift her spirits? Very well narrated Smita, truly moving!

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sree_dey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

GOSH! Wht a psycho dat Mohan mishra was...aarti had no drmz til nw nd nw wen she s flng smthn 4 nk she cn't go frward due to her moron father...😡 gud dat he died..its better nt to have ne fathr dn dis...waitng 4 NK's reaction i hope he marries her nw nd dn take his wife nd mthr in law nd gopi kaka to trip 😳
thanks 4 givng back to back 3 updates in a day...eagerly waitng 4 nxt

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christmas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

the imagery and the emotions you created with the last updated were splendid! glad that she finally attended at least the wedding after all those invitations. silly aarti. she is missing the easiest solution that is in front of her to fix her mother. the happiness of her daughter and her marriage. but i have faith in the sunflower. continue soon.

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mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Cried reading this update.. Not even an enemy shud go thru something like this that Aarti, Shikha and their mother went thru...

Im sure Raizada's wont let her go.. Aarti is such a gem.. So mature and suljhi hui...

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

You know, I had a fair idea what Aarti and her mother and sister had been through but hearing/reading the whole story was so painful..

sigh. You so beautifully managed to express what aarti had been through and everybody else's reaction to her story.

It was such a beautiful update :)

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

U made me cry
Somewhere my lyf has a bit of similarities to Aarti.
Fab one
All I can say

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Water

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Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Aarti's past was very painful. I am glad that she was able to open up in front of someone else...yes it was out of her comfort zone, yes it was almost as if she was forced to tell because she did not have any other choice...but I am glad she was able to express and pour out even if it was in words to another...

I know deep down she has all the grief and pain and right now she is as strong as a pillar, because people and their lives depend on her and so she is emotionless.

I am a bit scared when she mentioned they are going away for sometime, she is not gonna run is she? I mean move or something?

I know that NK's whole family will accept her no matter what...so I am not worried about that...

I am just worried about Aarti's emotional state or the way she has masked all per pain's, sufferings, for so many years. I want her to have a shoulder on whom she can support...

NK will be a great support for her but the whole of NK's family on her side would be even more profound

I want her pain, achievements, strengths to be acknowledged by NK and her family, I do not why..but I feel that way it would be kinda justified...I do not want her to suffer alone anymore...I do not want her to live within the 4 walls of her home (physical) and the 4 walls of her heart ALONE

Arnav got reminded of his childhood pain...wow that was intense too.

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago