MG..INSANE LOVER#3..note pg 119

usha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

waiting fr nxt parts eagerly...updt sooon...

Edited by ushankitvc - 12 years ago

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286pearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

pl add me n pm whn u update...

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

waiting for next update...

continue soon...

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

Edited by Prabhavati - 12 years ago

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Thanks for your opinion..

If you are not liking it

stay away from our thread

This is truely a fiction

N we have already told all

this is insane love

Again im saying

Who ever doesn't like this please stay away.

We want our thread only to enjoy maneet

N maan in a possessive way

Not to turn as war zone

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thebians

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

valli is absolutely right on that account.

if you feel you cannot tolerate such works, please stop reading, do not post such messages in here.

enjoying a fiction is our right as readers, and as a writer valli is at perfect liberty to write whatever she feels.

About perverted people let me tell you, you have yourself proven that you are perverted in some amount, so do us a favor and do not comment on this fiction ever again.

It is a good thing that not many people have come across your comment yet, or you would've seen the worse things.

I hope i made myself clear.

And valli di, please do not pay attention to such complete idiots, they just wish to irritate innocent people.

When will you update next, please give a hint or even teaser will do.

And yeah, please meri pm ko reply dena, me tired of sending pm to you.

I will wait for your updates.

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: turbotruffle
nice fiction!

but one thing has annoyed me here.

rano trusts maan so much around her daughter, but even if she's convinced about their friendship, can't she notice their growing closeness?

I mean, geet murmers his name in sleep, constantly chants his name for everything, isn't it enough to rouse rano's suspicions?

mothers are usually alert about their teenage daughters, but here rano madam is simply turning a blind eye to everything, though she is able to see everything with open eyes.

This can be enough proof that she is a dumb lady, not vigilant enough as a mother.

Writing such things openly, what does the writer want to say, that leave kids in the hands of strangers, so they can become playthings in their hands after a certain period of time, is that!

This will send the wrong message to all those if members and geet forum users who are below 17 years of age.

If you wish to write, then please make your writings worth learning some useful lesson from them, not simply for mere entertainment, and try not to represent people as perverted characters, that's all.

if u didt like tis be stay away, from tis.. u dont have any rights to comment other works.. better stay away.. wat u think of urself, always commenting and hurting others, r u human being or some thing else.. better stop it..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nowadays peoples create new ids only for this nalini..leave it..

PLs let that person know we are not writing for that only one.

We are writing for the ones who wait n read for us

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

This is a fiction if u dont like than stay away from here ... and u cant point out anything this world had all type of people here so asume it like that and all story had some taste this story had insanse taste plz go and dont bug to writer

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: turbotruffle
nice fiction!

but one thing has annoyed me here.

rano trusts maan so much around her daughter, but even if she's convinced about their friendship, can't she notice their growing closeness?

I mean, geet murmers his name in sleep, constantly chants his name for everything, isn't it enough to rouse rano's suspicions?

mothers are usually alert about their teenage daughters, but here rano madam is simply turning a blind eye to everything, though she is able to see everything with open eyes.

This can be enough proof that she is a dumb lady, not vigilant enough as a mother.

Writing such things openly, what does the writer want to say, that leave kids in the hands of strangers, so they can become playthings in their hands after a certain period of time, is that!

This will send the wrong message to all those if members and geet forum users who are below 17 years of age.

If you wish to write, then please make your writings worth learning some useful lesson from them, not simply for mere entertainment, and try not to represent people as perverted characters, that's all.

dear first thing is that it is a F I C T I O N
i hope u knw its meaning
secondly no one forced u to read so its f9 that u presented ur view
lastly fr forum members i guess they r sensible enough to knw d true meaning nd sense
so if u dnt like it in anyway u can simply leave reading it since no one forced u

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