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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for ruby to be active
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turbotruffle

nice fiction!


but one thing has annoyed me here.

rano trusts maan so much around her daughter, but even if she's convinced about their friendship, can't she notice their growing closeness?

I mean, geet murmers his name in sleep, constantly chants his name for everything, isn't it enough to rouse rano's suspicions?

mothers are usually alert about their teenage daughters, but here rano madam is simply turning a blind eye to everything, though she is able to see everything with open eyes.

This can be enough proof that she is a dumb lady, not vigilant enough as a mother.

Writing such things openly, what does the writer want to say, that leave kids in the hands of strangers, so they can become playthings in their hands after a certain period of time, is that!

This will send the wrong message to all those if members and geet forum users who are below 17 years of age.

If you wish to write, then please make your writings worth learning some useful lesson from them, not simply for mere entertainment, and try not to represent people as perverted characters, that's all.


oye who the hell think ur haan..dare u a single word against my ff
ill show u what real devil means..do i ask ur useless opinion hell no..then y ur giving ur so called gyan here..
if i got u here on my thread next time..ill directly report ur id..so show ur efforts somewhere else not on my thread..


i m unactive it doesnt means i tolerate ur so called nonsense..think 1000 times saying anything here
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

Waiting for ruby to be active



meri maa plz fb pe reply do mere msgs ka...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
guy...i m getting married in july so little busy in preparations
isliye i dont know when i m able to update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turbotruffle

nice fiction!


but one thing has annoyed me here.

rano trusts maan so much around her daughter, but even if she's convinced about their friendship, can't she notice their growing closeness?

I mean, geet murmers his name in sleep, constantly chants his name for everything, isn't it enough to rouse rano's suspicions?

mothers are usually alert about their teenage daughters, but here rano madam is simply turning a blind eye to everything, though she is able to see everything with open eyes.

This can be enough proof that she is a dumb lady, not vigilant enough as a mother.

Writing such things openly, what does the writer want to say, that leave kids in the hands of strangers, so they can become playthings in their hands after a certain period of time, is that!

This will send the wrong message to all those if members and geet forum users who are below 17 years of age.

If you wish to write, then please make your writings worth learning some useful lesson from them, not simply for mere entertainment, and try not to represent people as perverted characters, that's all.



alright new kid on the block...well how about u come with ur original id here and show urself who u are actually, would really help us a lot...we honestly wont consider any newbie's comments and attacks here anymore...if u like the story stay here and comment and i if u have any problem u are always free to refrain urself from visiting the thread ever in future...it would be a very good help for the other people involved in this thread... and dont try to discourage any writer here...this is all about fiction and creativity...and i think u really need a reality check...the writer wants to say that the world is not like u think or anyone else that the world is a place of only the innocent people...take the characters involved be a possibility in this whole wide world...this can also be a learning and useful lesson to all those innocent people and know that people with such character and morale do live...at least in the fiction there will be positivity and right and appropriate judgement but in real world it is so not...if u wish to give POSITIVE criticism stay here else plz choose an appropriate thread urself...and once again do come up with ur ORIGINAL id not this newly created one and try to disturb the peaceful decorum of this this thread and and GHSP forum and IF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WARNING!

Some members chose to report the comment that was causing such chaos in the thread, which was the right decision. Others clearly, chose to take matters into their own hands, which was NOT the right decision.

First of all, readers have the right to post their opinion at Fan Fiction threads since writers put their work out there for EVERYONE to read. Constructive criticism and appreciation, both are welcome at the Fan Fictions forum because both help the author improve. However, discouragement is absolutely not permitted! Readers can not tell a writer to stop writing just because they do not approve of a character or the storyline. That is not acceptable.

It's a sincere request and a strict warning to all members to STOP replying to the member immediately. The DT will handle whatever it is that's become such a big deal.

-FF DT
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!u getting married in july...CONGRATS...hope u be able to updt son...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...
updt sooon...waiting eagerly...

Edited by ushankitvc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations to ruby for her engagement
So girls she is busy in her preparations
Pls thoda intazaar karlo
ruby ko aanedo
Let her enjoy her engagement n marriage..
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Posted: 12 years ago


when ever I read updates of this FF my heart beats raise to such an extent...

Geet still don't feel any love for Maan...it is just physical attraction and body's demand for her but Maan is insanely in love with her...in his actions he has shown that Title INSANE LOVER is perfect for him...he is so much involved in his desires that he is not able to think that his actions can make Geet away from him after some yrs when she will start understanding that he is taking advantage of her situation from so many yrs...

I am really very scared what if Geet becomes distant from him... whatever he is doing but still he is Maan and in love with Geet only... Maaneet fans want Maan to be with Geet only...on one hand he has already married her so it is his right to be close physically to her but on other hand Geet don't love him...he is forcing her to love him or being with him physically...and this fact is giving me negative wibes about story in future...

with Rishab in picture and Geet drooling over him...Maan going out of city for 15 days...I am scared what if something wrong happen with Geet...because of Maan her physical desires are high...so what will happen if Rishab tries to come close when Maan is not there to fulfill her body demands ?...and if something really happens then what will be Maan's reaction ?...he will kill them alive...

very interesting updates...

waiting for next part...

all the best for ur new married life...come back soon...


Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONGRATULATION

Ruby
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