[SwaRon FF]. Adrenaline Rush - Replies 55+, #4 Pg59. (12/5)

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

amazing update nivi

i loved it

thanks for pm

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

the story is awesome
loved it
pm me wenever u update
sorry 4 not commenting before
had been busy
on my way to read all 500+ unread msg

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Yolo Peeps.

It has been long enough, more than an year, that I have touched this story. I have been a kiss arse in updating, and I shall still be. Anyhow, I did manage to write a decent, short update, in my study breaks. My exams have finished, and they went fairly well. I have started on to write the next one, but it might just take million years to materialize. This really did not turn out to be the way I had thought for it to be.

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Three.

As she was leaving her class after a lecture on love, her papers fell down, She looked up to see a boy on a skateboard staring at her sheepishly and then helping her out. It had been few days she had joined this college.

The boy took out a friendship band from his pocket. He almost went away when she suddenly caught hold of it and smiled slyly. The boy got up and skated away!

THUD

Kria turned around to see Sharon who slammed a coffee mug on the table with disgust. Sharon was fed up of Kria and her lovesickness. It had fostered into an endless torture for Sharon as Kria would come back every evening from college and see "romantic movies" as she called them.

"We have to go." Sharon declared.

"Where?"

"To the mall. To the adventure park. Maybe even the cafe, but I can't stay at home. You are beginning to torture me to death Kri." Sharon screamed helplessly. No, angrily

"But what did I do?" Kria looked at her innocently.

Sharon stared at Kria with a no-nonsense look at her face. She tried to calm herself, but this love thing was getting on her nerves. And a certain male specie was haunting her. The guts of the man to be able to endanger her image in front of the whole college. He was able to flustered her, and even get a shade of red on her cheeks, which she felt she never had.

Preposterous.

The man should be punished to be able to challenge Sharon Raiprakash. She felt she had a soft corner for him, and that was not good for her health. And to make matters worse, her sibling wasn't much of a help. Watching romantic movies, dating her boy, getting him home kissing.

She adored the couple, but love was something she felt happily untouched of. And the certain man had made her hate love even more.

Kria sensed that fighting Sharon would be of no use. She ran upstairs to her bedroom and got herself changed in a neat dress and grabbed her belongings. Sharon had already started her car and had an angry face. And she knew, this is when she had to keep herself shut and refrain from any kind of conversational advances.

**

Three hours of useless window shopping and tolerating Sharon's vehement mood swings exhausted Kria. She really needed to eat something or just Rey to relax her. She personally preferred the latter, but knew better the mention of his name would bring back Sharon and her sarcasms.

"I'm famished Kri. I need to grab a bite. Do you mind?"

Kria nodded and they reached the food court of the mall.

Sharon looked around and saw a certain male busy eating his food and talking to a girl. She did not know she was holding her breathe till Kria pointed towards the man in familiarity. She just hoped he would not recognize her.

"Look who is here."

That's it.

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 10 years ago

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

aswom update dear...

its fantastic...

do update soon...

loved krisha

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

woww u updated😳

Awesomeee👏👏

lovedd d krisha part😊

continue soonish😳

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Nice update👏

loved it❤️

upddate soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

awesome!!

so nice to read this!!
i always wanted you to update this one!!
great work!!

thanks for the pm.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

This is a brilliant piece of work.
I loved it. It was amazing.
You are a wonderful writer

please update soon. And do PM me

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Thanks for your feedback peeps.

Will do the replies soon! :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Finally I read it:-):-)
Wowww Its simply amazing yaar:-D:-D
I love sharon here:-):-)

Awww Swayam gunjan and Icecream scene was sooo cutie<3<3<3
loved it:-):-):-)
cant wait for next chapter now:-)...plz this time update soon Nivs...
Love u:-):-):-). ...

Hey, I am glad you liked the two. I think Gunjan was a much needed balance in Swayam's life, and thus a very important character.

Thanks again.