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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#851

He came back for her, knowing she was afraid of the dark.

Loved how he held her and then told her he did it all for her.

One of the best confession scenes I ever read.

It was beautiful in its simplicity.

Expressing ones love for someone doesn't have to be with roses and chocolates and music and dancing.

Sometimes the emotion is better expressed in simple words and gestures.

Loved how she came looking for him at the poolside.

And his proposal of marriage.

Loved this perfect ending to the story.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#852

awesome...perfect end to the story

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

beautiful ending to an awesome story

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Reserved :)

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Brilliant ending!!

I loved every bit of it!

When Arnav came back for Khushi when it got dark was so sweet! "Because I care for you..." 😳 This line by Arnav was too good!

The letter that Arnav wrote for Khushi was wonderful! When Khushi came to meet him, I liked how you incorporated parts of the letter.

When Khushi said she would teach Arnav to dance and would dance with him was really nice!

When Arnav said he wanted to spend every New Year's Eve with Khushi was perfect!

When Khushi was holding Arnav's trembling hands showed that Khushi would always support him as Arnav would support her.

This was a wonderful story Nafisa!! Amazing job! 😃

Thank you for the pm!

Edited by dmg123 - 11 years ago

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Oliver.Queen

@Oliver.Queen

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

It was a great story. I always stalked ur FFs. Glad u r continuing them

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

For me, the most memorable moment in this story was the moment Arnav realizes just how much he's hurt Khushi. I don't remember the chapter exactly, but I remember thinking about how poignant it was when I read it. I also loved the part in the car, where Arnav just observes Khushi and Nanheji talking about movies. I will miss this story, but I cannot wait until you update MDJND! I'll be waiting :)

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Loved how you ended
But it left me wanting more

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arshiasya_101

@arshiasya_101

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#858

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Sad to read to FF end. My favorite moment:

"But you wouldn't hurt me now, would you Arnavji?"

"No!" his answer was almost vicious- the force of it surprised even him, but when he looked up, Khushi looked unfazed; she gripped his hands in both of hers still, and there was a smile on her lips- an understanding smile,