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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#711

awesome update

Arnav took time off. everyone know that work is always his first prioroty than family and here he is stating that he took break for the celebrations of his brother marriage.

its odd because using this excuse he want to spend spme time with khushi.

i hope khushi teach him hindi lesson and Arnav practice sangeet dance with her.

update soon

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Awesome . I just love all your stories. What can I say more.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#713

he is trying to confuse her

she seems to be on a emo high

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Archana

@Archu61

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#714

I like the way you portray their relationship like walking on quicksand ,he needs to pace himself take it slow as she does not know what his intentions are and she has lost confidence in men ability to be truthful and not let her down as both Shyam and ASR let her down for no reason of hers .looking fwd to you nxt update of mohobhatt door janne Na de .

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#715

arnav is so sweet... poor payal will run out of excuses some day... lol

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#716

That was beautiful!

I absolutely admire your way of writing i love the examples you give while describing a situation its like a reel is playing infront of us and we can see what's happening!:D

I loved how khushi actually spoke finally to arnav as before this update there was this different khushi who thought 17 times before speaking to him but today she spoke what she wanted to so cheers to that!

And payal is a sweetheart!

Loved the update!

Cant wait for the next one:D

Edited by __blossom__ - 11 years ago

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Read all the chaps, n gal...gotta tell u dat u sure r talented!! The way u hav written, correct blend of everythn, pain, happiness, anger, playfulness...all of it makes this seem more real, n nw getting bak to d story...i dnt blame khushi to b cautious...d guy in q, ie our arnie boy did condemn her everytym they met...so, nw he has to pay n wid dis sword hanging over his head ie khushi leaving him forever...is d best kind of thread n incentive...all at d same tym...great work n keep it up..n thnx for d pm!!😃👏

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

That's another lovely update nafisa
Great one dear
I need moh door tooo

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#719

Loved the update Khushi still confused what to think about Arnav and she still keeping her distance to him loved that he is trying to bring the old Khushi who always fought with him and always took her stand and who never give up glad he realized it was because of him that she had change awesome update thanks for the pm.