Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!* - Page 12

Lovely update, an insight to the real Khushi. I also feel she masks her vulnerability in her childish acts as a way to escape. I wasn't sure what to expect on her New Years resolution but it certainly wasn't that. Very detailed and thought out update.
Patiently waiting for next usage to see Arnavs views

Yes yes yes! I loved it! We always see a childlike Khushi and the mature one only comes out when others need her. And I loved this update for showing that at the end of the day, Khushi can be mature and she can be different and tired. And still she wants to help everyone around her. There was nothing selfish about her wishes. I just loved it and now Im going to go crazy wondering what Arnav's going to do!

Awesome twist in the tale . I am glad Arnav read Khushi's innermost feelings ...and yes ,I wholeheartedly agree , Khushi as I know her is childlike and cute ,endearing actually ...not annoying and unrecognisable as was towards the end . Look forward to your version of Khushi in this tale .

😛 That was brilliant. Loved it. A mature Khushi. Update please.

Omg...my baby...i sooo love khushi...
Thus is what khushi is not some nuisence they showed in the show...
I loved it!
Great update!:D

Ok I don't know if I commented on the first part of this or not buy I have to say I have loves all the different work that up have writen and this is no different. You manage to zero in on a particular incident that's so epic in the show and then dwell in it and take out and bring in certain emotions. You have displayed Khushis emotions so beautifully. All this time I thing this is how Khushi has been feeling. Sure she is bubbly and lively but where Arnav is concerned I think she just wanted to always know why he hates her! And she even at this point has already fallen for him and she just can't own up to it. His actions hurt so much because she loves him. I just love all this conflicting feelings and the stubbornness! My life is so boring in this department that I live vicariously through literature! Sad I know!

The Khushi you've described is very much the Khushi as I envision her - always looking out for her loved ones, very self-aware but not to be pitied. I can't help but wonder what Arnav's reaction will be upon reading Khushi's diary - will he understand her desires, her hurt? Maybe we'll find out in the next part? :)

That was wonderful! Loved her diary entry! You were dead On!! This is what khushi would have written!

I wonder how Arnav is going to feel when he reads the line where she will ignore him!

That was just, wow amazing! I was really really pleased with this chapter! Khushi's emotions, the way you described everything, her need to just get it all out and what she felt afterwards were written really well! There are very few writers out there that can write as well as you do and i'm so glad i've gotten the opportunity to read your works! I feel so bad that Khushi feels all of that :( I hope once Arnav's read her diary, he'll do something romantic and sweep her off her feet :')