ARIYA FF: Yeh pyar maine kyun jaana? Pg139 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
just wow they meet again loving the story line
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ValleryRose

Kya FF hain! Amazing as always.. Par itna pain kyun..? I feel like crying I don't know why.. maybe it's because you write it so beautifully! Eagerly waiting for the next part!


for me poignancy and pain is beautiful, atleast in stories 😊...and i feel writing that gives me more creative satisfaction than the usual rom coms i prefer to read and write...

thanks to all!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
loved rathod's entry...
was realy missing him...
brng him back permanantly...!
n arjun's feelings...written so well...!!
lovely!
waiting for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
tere bina jindgi se koi sikwa to nahi
sikva nahi,sikwa nahi,
tere bina jindgi bhi lakin jindgi to nahi,
jindgi nahi , jindgi nahi

dedicated to only n only ariya,


next update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Hello Ariyans...back with a new part...I hope u like this...pls read and post comments...

thanks a ton for all those cute sweet comments...

Chapter 2A: Phir mohabbat karne chala…..

Riya: [turns back to him and smiles] hmmm waqt aur haalat sab ko bathal dehthi hai Sir…[and adds in an impulse]..aap bhi toh bathal gaye hai!! [she lets of a deep sigh and looks at him intensely…..their eyes lock for a long second…..it appears to be for eternity but it just lasts a second as she turns away soon breaking the eye lock and the silence] chalthi hoom…..

Arjun is left wondering what she meant by that…..his love for her was immense and was visible in his eyes however hard he tried to hide it…..but what did her eyes convey??? Did he see the same love in her eyes too??? What was it that she was trying to say or was it something that she wanted to hide but failed miserably that she had to turn away from him???

chhupana bhi nahi aata, jatana bhi nahi aata

hame tumse mohabbat hai, batana bhi nahi aata

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It was totally a rocking time waiting for Riya outside Arjun's cabin…..Shree and Chotu were already waiting for her to come out…..yes they knew she was in from her bag kept near her desk…..the one she used before she quit 3 years back…..it wasn't used by anyone else and was kept vacant as if waiting for her return…..Shree had cleaned it up soon after he knew that his best friend was coming back!

As soon as she stepped into the conf area, Shree yelled out "RIII " and rushed to her and gave her a big friendly hug……….

Chotu also walked to her quickly and hugged both of them in a group hug…..Riya couldn't keep her serious stern self for long….she loosened up and smiled like old times……her dimple showing up in the same cute way…..there was no change in it……she looked like an epitome of beauty and brilliance now…..She also responded to the hug and her eyes welled up with tears of happiness…..She had missed them both so much…..but she had no choice but distance from them too!

Shree spoke up after the initial round of hugs and tears "we missed you Ri….."

Riya smiled at him with a "you are so sweet guys" expression and said "I missed you tooo yaar"

"Jhoot….tum jhoot bhol rahi ho Riya! Agar tum miss karthi toh aise hum sab se dhoor nahi rehthi…..teek hai mil nahi sakhi….magar ek phone call, ek mail….woh bhi nahi kar sakhi??? Uphar se apna sab contacts bhi change kar diya????? Kya aise miss karthe hai dhoston ko??? Haan, shaayad tumne hum sab ko apne life se missing hi kar diya, right?? Kya yahi thi tumaara dhosti??"

Shree's initial excitement turned to anger…..he didn't stop his venting out till Chotu placed his hands on his shoulders and "bas Shree…..shaayad Riya ki koyi majhboori hogi!"

Shree: kaisi majhboori ke apne friends ko bhi bhool gayi….agar koyi majhboori thi bhi, toh humse share karthi…[adds after a pause]…..aisa kuch nahi hai Chotu…..Riya toh apne life mein mast thi aur humse baat karne ke fursat nahi thi…..hai na Riya?? [sarcasm dominated in his comment and it was more than evident when he addressed her as Riya and not his usual "RI"]

[Riya stood speechless not knowing how to justify herself…..She just let both her friends pour out their anger and sadness…..She felt, silence was golden at such times!]

Their ranting stopped when Rathod entered the office with a big hearty welcome message for Riya "Welcome Riya….good to see you back!"

Riya was surprised pleasantly to see Rathod sir…."Sir, aap?? Aap toh??

Rathod: haan main ek case ke wajeh se yahaan hoom…..aur waise bhi, tumaara ETF reentry ka pehla din hai….mujhe toh yahaan hona hi chahiye na??? aakhir yahaan tumaara first boss main hi tha na??[he grinned and she smiled at that]

Shree and Chotu forgot the rest and smiled too……Chotu remarked chirpily "Ab lag rahaa hai ke ETF hai! Sab ka full on attendance hai!!"

Riya's mind voice murmured "ek ko chodh kar….woh ab bhi wahi ke wahi hai jahaan maine teen saal pehle choda tha……haan hui hai bathlaav par phir bhi kuch bhi nahi bathlaa…" [she herself didn't know what changes did she expect in him or rather didn't see in him]

Shree: Arjun sir bhi yahaan hote aur bhi accha hota, hai na Ri???

Rathod: [searching around] waise hai kahaan tumhaara chief???? Apne room mein bandh hai kya??? Iss Rawte bhi na??? humesha aise naye naveli dulhan ke tarah apne kamre mein…..yeh kab sudhrega???

All the 3 were hell shocked and also amused by their ex boss's funny remark and comparison……

Riya: [rolling her eyes in doubt] Sir, yeh aap hi hai na??? aap itna funny baatein bhi kar sakthe hai??? Socha bhi nahi tha!!!

Shree: Ri, sir toh ab full toss masti karthe hai!!

Chotu: haan Ri, dhaasu jokes bhi karthe hai….hai na Sir?? [places his hand on Rathod's shoulder in a casual friendly manner….suddenly Rathod stops laughing and glares at Chotu's hand….Chotu is a bit scared and slowly takes his hand off]

Rathod: [laughs out and comments] bechaara Chotu darr gaya!!!

[Al laugh out!...None of them notice that someone else is also observing all this masti and he is also happy seeing the sight he was longing to see……her smile!]

As Riya left the room, Arjun knew that whatever be her situation or worries, the moment she is in Shree-Chotu's company, she would forget all that and smile, laugh and have her quotient of fun……

So he moved aside a few blades of his glass window and watched what was happening outside……And he was right, she smiled…her dimple was intact…..cute and pretty as ever……then he witnessed the emotional hug and Shree's emotional outpour…..Rathod's entry and their fun talk together…….He noted every single detail although his eyes were focused on her….

He came back to his seat……he smiled at the amazing bond between Shree-Riya and Chotu, which reflected their strong friendship……Even in the past, their friendship always amused Arjun…..It surprised him big time…..he always wondered if friendships can be so much fun too….

He envied their friendship……He always lacked in it……a good friend was a blessing and he wasn't blessed at all with that…..he deeply sighed as he thought that….he faintly smiled at his own life….why only friendship, he wasn't lucky in love too…..be it love or friendship, both evaded his life always……his first love was snatched away from him cruelly….He couldn't save her and that was his biggest regret which haunted him……when he somehow managed to get over that after years of pain, suffering and self torturing loneliness, then again all he got was disappointment and more pain…..a failure again in all meanings…..His second chance in love was also taken away from him even before he could give it a start! Riya, the girl who had brought sunshine into his darkness engulfed life….someone whom he felt could take Roshni's place in his life…..someone with whom he felt he could share his life, his love, his happiness, his sorrows and pains……someone who could give him unconditional love and indefinite reasons to smile…..She also went away leaving his unsaid love incomplete…..

Yes, he was at fault there too…it was his mistake…..a reason to regret again…may be for the rest of his lifetime…...he never once spoke up about his feelings to her….he never once gave her the impression that he loved her…..he never once tried to stop her while she…..[he stopped his random useless thoughts] hell! why am I thinking of all this now?? Damn….why am I thinking of her??? She is someone else's wife now…..thinking about her this way is also taboo to me…..samjhe tum?

He had somehow made up his mind and deviated it away from her in all these past years…but now when he saw her face to face, the long buried love and all the bottled up feelings were trying to resurface and it scared him like a demon!

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila
Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya
Ho...

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya
Hmm..dil... Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Riya's POV: main samajhthi thi ke woh bhi mujhse pyar karthe teh aur zaroor kabhi na kabhi keh bhi denge……intezaar karthi rahi….par woh din kabhi na aaya……..Roshni ji ko bhoolkar life mein aage badhna shaayad unne manzoor nahi tha…..main unke iss faisle ko respect karthi thi…. Ab bhi karthi hoom…….

Jab unnone mujhe pyar ka matlab samjhaaya tha,maine unke aankhon mein Roshni ji ke jhalak dekhi thi….…..unn dono ke beech main toh kya mauth bhi nahi aa paaya…..mauth ne Roshni ji ko Arjun sir se cheena zaroor hai par unke pyar ab bhi waisi ki waisi hi hai… unka pyar adhoora hi sahi, par kabhi khatam nahi hogi …

Tab maine faisla kiya ke unnse dhoor chali jaavungi…..phir ETF ko Jaipur mein ek case milaa…..wahi se shuru hui meri pyar ki kahaani….ya shaayad…….[she snapped out of her wandering thoughts, rubbished it and opened a file with the latest ongoing case details!]

Precap:

The next part will alternate between the past and present cases……so essentially, Riya's meeting with Suraj, her husband….and then her present encounters with Arjun Rawte, her boss!

[To be continued]

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Hey ...
That was amazing ... :)
I'm in live with your song selection ... It just suits the situation like the song was made for this update :)
Awww I just love the bond shared by Riya- Shree- Chottu n now even Rathod ...:)
Ahaaa Arjun is witnessing all this n especially her ;)
N the precap sounds fab :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
What a fab update di..i m speechless..
i got every emotion in dis part...
frndship bonding btw ria n shreetu...
emotional turmoil of arjun..ria respect for arjun!!
funny shade of rathod loved d most..!
rathod comment on arjun nayi naveli dulhan rofl..!!! arjun watching everything..felt really bad fr his loneliness first roshni n nw ria too..!!
precap is super interesting..!!
i m speechless dan i wrote dis comment hehe..!!
grt update di.. hats off!!
hope u lyk my comment..
hope u dnt bored by my comment..!!

Loved d song too di..
awesum i get every aspect of life in dis update wow..!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
full and full emotional update xcpt the part were Rathore joined them...is this really Sameer Rathore???? feeling so bad nd sorry for Arjun... yeah i agree it tuk him so long to come in terms with his feelings for Riya bt still its nt his fault... Wish Riya hadnt tkn de decision of marrying sum1 else... bt it looks lik sumthn s wrong in her marital relation or am i reading too much into the lines... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
where is riya's husband now...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Amazing update Di!

Loved shree-riya-chotu mel-milaap! 😆

And rathore's comment on arjun being a nayi naveli dulhan! 🤣
Lmao..! 🤣

But i'm still really confused! 🤔

Who loves whom and who loves whom back!
but anywayz..
Loved it! 😉

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