Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

its improving.. i mean their relationship.😊. the way u describe is really gud..👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

well that sure had him in a twist when she mentioned the boyfriends
awww isnt it just adorable to hear him go ballistic at even the thought of anohter man with her
and this is what i love this possessive side of his concerning khushi
and even he knows he can never let her go no matter what
and its a good thing he didnt know what those women in temple said to her or god knows what he would do
nothing good for sure as even she knows
and its good he doesnt knows yet
when he does oh man god knows what will be his reaction
but its bound to be anger and frustration
god how long do we think he will last before he says something about his feelings for khushi
awww his di and jiju and her bhai and bhabhi were able to get what they had promised its just they dont know it yet
but anji and shyam do i guess
so she was in a mood because of those ladies huh
you are right khushi thye have nothing better to do than gossip and talk rubbish am afraid
glad you are ignoring them and concentrating on arnie and the babies
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Now I really want Arnav to propose a marriage with Khushi, just to shut the society up!

Wonderfully written!

Edited by Rhysenn - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Awesome update, just love how this story is moving and loving the understanding between arnav and khushi. So happy arnav has finally realised he started to love khushi, thanks for the PM x

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

OMG!

Your updates eriously swirl something within me, They make me go from curious to angry (at the older women! Yet delightfully pleased 😛) to smily and drooly and laugh at Arnav's possesiveness to touching and almost teary at the last line, The 2 stars brightly lightly, ahh gosh, simnply beautiful!

I absolutely adore the way you write and seriously, It's a pleasure to read your writing and this FIC. I'm so thankful i found this!! <3

Please update soon, Can't wait to read more 😃

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Woh read it at one go
Its lovely nd amazing story :)
wud luv 2 read more :)

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eroni

@eroni

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

This really is a nice story. I like the way the characters pov is described carefully. Today I read all parts in one go. Love this story and am eager to read the next part. Please pm me for the next update. Keep up the nice writing dear.

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

wow great part
so finally arnav understands his feelings atleast upto some extent
waiting for more

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Zaara

@arshi28

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

I came across this story today and I am loving it
I can't wait for the next update
and till Arnav and Khushi's confession
I saw at the end of the update the notes you put and let me tell you/
my imagination is rubbish
All i have is praises for this story
Please carry on x