Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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kshows_fangirl

@kshows_fangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Thank u for including the dialogues! I was missing them. So, finally Khushi agreed to study as of now...Arnav must be feeling quiet sure of himself, as he accomplished what he wanted to! Wonderful update!

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Awesome!!! A very nice update:)

Thank you for writing out a dialogue, it was very nice!!

I especially like the last sentence!!

Great job and thank you for the pm!

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Hmm, Arnav is falling for Khushi quite hard, and he doesn't even realize it! I wonder what would happen if he marries her; will he keep her forever?

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nandu3991

@nandu3991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

hey Anony_mous busy with some project <sorry> hence unable to post reviews but dying to read the next update. when are we getting it ?

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: nandu3991
hey Anony_mous busy with some project <sorry> hence unable to post reviews but dying to read the next update. when are we getting it ?
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I try to post updates every alternative day. So soon, pretty soon :)

Thanks for waiting. And good luck with your project :)

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Mariam Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Poor Arnav the guy really wants her to stay now. I think it's truly adorable how his character has changed so much from chapter 1. I really enjoyed his self monologue. I actually did want Khushi to resume her studies but I really don't like the idea of a nanny esp for twins that recently lost their parents. Thanks for the update :)

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farha

@farha5556

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

wow nice,loved it,continuesoon,so kushi is going to reappear for exam ,good.loved it.

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Sweta...

@Sweta...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Awhhh arnav as thinking about khushi was vey very very sweet :) and then when she's like but she likes taking control of the household and eventually he convinces her and he smiles is epic :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

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proshomi

@proshomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

I am loving this story...Arnav's unknowingly being possesive of khushi,still not ready to admit he has started falling for her...Awww...Great going,the story day by day is becoming more gripping