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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!! arnav is so confused .. he finally convinced khushi to write her exams...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have this overwhelming urge to point at Arnav and laugh my butt off!!! BWAHAHAHA!! He's so CLUELESS!! Poor guy is an absolute dunce when it comes to the matters of the heart. Koi nahi...dheere dheere sab samaj jayega! :P I get the feeling that Khushi will start to feel for him later...much later..(?)

Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
It would be interesting to see arnav falling for kushi, but kushi oblivious to arnav 's feeling. It could lead to some very hilarious situations. Arnav needs to learn to lighten up and have fun. And no one is better to teach him that other than our own crazy kushi. Kushi also needs to reassert her crazy side, after living with so much burden and gloom in the past few months.


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Posted: 12 years ago
I liked ur different take on the story...Good ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just came across this FF. And may I say I love your plot-line ? And the way you have sketched Arnav's character ? I am sending you a buddy request, please do send me a PM when you update this. Really enjoyed reading these 8 chapters :)
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank you guys for such wonderful, in-depth comments. I really appreciate your reading and reviewing my story :)

Thanks a lot !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fleurs

Fantastic update 😊

Arnav's restlessness throughout the chapter in trying to make Khushi accept for studies fearing that otherwise the topic of marriage would come into light was really good ...hmmm...plainly saying ASR wants to keep his girl next to him... this shows his insecured feeling of losing his new found friend & the love hiding in his heart.

Hope to see Arnav realizing his love for Khushi

I was wondering what would Arnav do when Nani openly discusses about marriage to Khushi... & what all he would do to prevent the most hated topic by ASR - "Khushi's Marriage"... Would love to see the avatar of 'Possessive Arnav' coming into play


Loved all the lines quoted below:

  • He was okay till the night before. Encouraging her to take household responsibilities easy and not take stress, and the very next day he wants her to leave EVERYTHING and concentrate on her studies

  • Ignoring all this, he had told himself that he does not want Khushi getting married because it's only right that she concentrates on her career, and was clutching dear to this theory with all his might. He was afraid to think that it could have something to do with his not wanting to let her go, from the Raizada mansion, from his life.

  • Hope she is not thinking of getting married before that. He will NOT LET THAT HAPPEN. If she is so careless, he'll safeguard her interests.

  • And? What else do you want to do? Any other plans for future that you would like to share?' he asked carefully, trying to hide the curiosity and anxiety in his voice.

  • It was getting difficult for him to not mention the actual word, Marriage. But he did not want to plant any ideas in her mind if she wasn't thinking about it herself.

  • 'Of course nani will say that' he muttered under his breath. He will have to convince Khushi AT ALL COSTS.


  • Had it been in his control, he would have made her sign a stamp paper saying that she will not get married before clearing all her papers and groups.

  • She can't possibly take care of twins AND nani AND study AND then get time to pursue any matrimonial endeavors. ... And he was at peace for the first time in last two days.

  • And deep down, his subconscious had started figuring out his actual intentions towards this girl named Khushi.

Please PM me future updates.

The concept of the story is different & nice







THANK YOU Fleurs for telling me what all actually clicked :)



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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally arnav managed to convince khushi.no wonder he's a business tycoon.
Update soon,waiting for more arshi dialogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i read it one go dear... i am glad i found it!! Its very interesting and the thing that stood out for me is the way you have described the characters along with the story goes on... Also the gradual happening in their lives, its true it takes time to change our opinion about people and its not possible over night!! I appreciate kept thing real, like the way Arnav did what it takes to clear the doubt Khusi being the gold digger... Trust should be earned and Khusi well deserved it!!!
its different no doubt!! I also liked the way u telling this story ... i look forward to it!! It sweet and simple!! continue soon... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!! You are very clear about the characterisation of ASR and I love him for being so stubborn n cute at the same time. Love to read your story... Please do continue.

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