FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Fab update!

"Kya kaha aapne?Are you saying I'm fat?"—Only Khushi can say this when she is in the arms of a stranger!

And a misunderstanding paves its way in the very first meeting!

Would love to read where the next writer will take it!

Again, its exciting to read different chapters by different writers!

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

i'm already fall in love with the story.

Gota work on swim wear, not bad!

Khushi is one hilarious character. I loved it how she think of Arnav as an alien.

Though Arnav was really rude with Khushi, but he actually got attracted to her.

So happy that Khushi could find the way to flee.

Can't wait to read more.

Edited by sohara - 12 years ago

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Awesome...Loved it😊...Dialogues are crisp and realistic...i can actually imagine them talking...

funny and cute in parts...romantic also...

The description of how he is actually feeling looking at her...when he is projecting something else was very well written...

Wonderful story in the making😊

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ReginaPhalange-

@ReginaPhalange-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

The world better not end before Khushi's (not so) sweet escape! 🤔

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Just read the chapter & lovely update Meera. Though it was a tough act to follow, you did an awesome job! Only Khushi can still manage to be her talkative and eccentric self during a confrontation with ASR.

The part where she wanted to punch him was funny! 😆 Enjoyed reading the chapter and curious to read how she makes her escape now.

Edited by Shalu87 - 12 years ago