FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: serialjunkie
der se aayi durust ayi

can i write the ending??

YES PLEASE! 😊

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Crazzmatazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

So Khushi is the Ollivander of Gotas (Yes yes, I caught the HP joke, and grinned). And Arnav is filmy Bhagwaan believing Raizada. Me likey! What a talented bunch of ppl Doing it right :P

I await you, Dec 17.

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madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Abhi911
So Khushi is the Ollivander of Gotas (Yes yes, I caught the HP joke, and grinned). And Arnav is filmy Bhagwaan believing Raizada. Me likey! What a talented bunch of ppl Doing it right :P

I await you, Dec 17.

Thank you for noticing! Very pleased. 😊

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madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Banner updated guys. Thank you to Chutki and check out page 1. 😊

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aura9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Nice update. according to Khushi 'a person doesn't finds the gota, the gota finds the person' is it so. Anyways I like this Khushi she has so much of passion for her work. Well the end wasn't much clear though bhagwan jab deta hai to chappad phad ke deta hai does that mean that Arnav is not an atheist.

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samia19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

awesome start, thanks for the pm

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Shreya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

I loved this concept

And this chapter too...

Aah it all will start from a fashion show

Looking forward for the next update ...:)

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PaRuL(PaRi)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

haha...it was hilarious.
loved it.
gote wali swimsuit... 😆 😆

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MJ_K2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

khushi is really mad.sankadevi perfectly suit her.

loved dis

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Hey!

This is truely an amazing idea to collaborate with other writers that have sooo much talent that it is mind boggling 😃 Wow!

As a first chapter, this really set the bar pretty highhh! I'm sure the rest that will follow will also be exciting, well written and eventful as this one has been.

The concept of gota on swimwear is pretty cool actually 😎 Not predictable. What is the fun if you don't add some surprises into the mix when writing 😉😆

A particular part of this chapter that did really make me smile and was my favourite was when Arnav mocked,

"I guess they were right. Bhagwan jab deta hai, toh chappar phaad ke deta hai!"

Superb! Already looking forward to the next update!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks for the PM. I'll be adding secretsurprise in order to receive further PM's for this.