ACP Arjun ka Apharan.. updated part 19 on pg 92 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ha ha!!!! LOL!!! What an update!!
Posted: 12 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
That was hilarious.
Loved it
continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Bechara Arjun...
Kya family hai Riya ki...😆😆😆
Aur ab ye chaaro bhi aajaayenge...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Riya ki family yaar 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.Characters ko dekhkar hi lag gaya tha it would be hilarious.Aur dialog to kya the masha allah.Riya's dad yaar.unke 1 liners itne funny the(this reminded me of Sarabhai VS Sarabhai)😆😆😆😆😆.Bechara Sam,Dost ko bachane k chakkar mein log use kuch aur hi samaj rahe hai.😆😆😆😆😆.Jab usko pata chalega ye teeno uske aur arjun k baare mein kya sochte hai to unki to band bajne wali hai🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.Eagerly waiting for the next update.Please PM me when u update this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for the late comment
suprb update yr...
omg riya ki family bhi na... bechara arjun 😆 ye family to isse pagal kar degi...
plane scenes were awsum... too good yr... bechara sam... 🤣 kya kya hua uske sath plane mai aur chottu ki imagination... cant stop laughing yr... 🤣 🤣 mahabharat hahaha...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it to the core..<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry guys...
my cousin was getting engaged, so was busy in her engagement...
so coulldnt update this FF...
thank you all of you who had read, liked and commented on my FF
i hope you guys loved the comming part too...

Phase 14

At Riya's house….

Sujoy: are koi doctor ko phone karo

Akhilesh(drunk… about to fall and gauri balanced him): me karta hun

Gauri: aap yahi ruko… me khud karti hun

Dadi: tab tak Rii ko uske kamrem e lejao…

Akhilesh: me utha kar le jata hun…

Arjun: ruko… kaise le jaoge tum? Khud ko to sambhal nahi pate… Riya ko kaise sambhaloge… me lejata hun… kaha hai room…

Onima: on the first floor at your right handside 2nd room…

Arjun again lift Riya in his arms and took her to her bedroom…. He was caressing her hair gently and staring at her… next moment her familymembers entered the room…

Onima: Mr. Arjun… Doctor bas ate hi hoge… unhone tab tak Riya ko warm rakhne ko kaha hai…

Dadi: are usko kambal se puri tarah lappet lo…

Onima: momiji… called blankets… kambal is sound like chumble and daku… so LS

Dadi: ori o chhamakchhalo… ise waqt na mujhe meri bachchi ki fikar hai… isi liye mujhe tumse bahez nahi karni…. Jo bhi hai use le ke aao aur Riya ko garmi do….

They covered Riya under thick balnkets… and in sometime doctor also came there and he checked the Riya…. Gave her injection… and said, "koi bat nahi sir pe chaut lagne ki wajah se aksar log behosh ho jate hai… fir waha sadak pet hand bhi to hoti hai… isiliye aisa hua hai… mene injection de diya hai… subah tak hosh ajayega"…. And doctor left from there…

Arjun was sitting next to Riya and was patted her forehead… he was very worried and also irritated by Riya's family… they all were still arguing with eachother…. Except her grandmother… here grand mother was sitting other side of Riya…

Onima (fake concern): oh my poor baby… ddekho na kitni pale ho gayi hai? I hope wo jaldi se uth jaye…

Sujoy: oni… jitna concern tum apne use 'Ravan' bhai ke liye hai… use agar 10% bhi concern tumhe Riya ke lliye hota to… (after 2 sec. pausing) to me kal pura 1 ghanta tumhara majak nahi banaunga….

Onima: thank you Sujoy… and yes yeh mera real concern hi tha... me sach me worried hun Riya ke liye… and yes plz mere bhai ko 'Rawan' mat kaho

Sujoy: haa sahi hai… warna 'Rawan' bura nahi man jayega… infact ek din mere sapne me khud 'rawan' ne aake kaha bhi ke mein itna kharab bhi nahi hun… kamse kam mujhe to baksh do… kyun use kham kham mere gale bandh rahe ho… me itna bhi low class nahi hun… bolo….

(Dadi and Sujoy laughed)

Onima: kitna ghatiya joke tha na… mujhe to hasi bhi nahi aayi

Sujoy: ha to kaha se ayegi… 'Rawan' pe joke maro to Shurpankha kaise has shakti hai….

Onima: shut up Sujoy… I am serious….

Sujoy: achcha serious ho… are Somya jao doctor ko wapas bulake lao… lage hath Oni ka bhi check up karwa dete hai… wo bhi serious hai…

Onima (angry): that's enough Sujoy….

Saumya: mom ignore him…. Aur dekho aapke toe nail me nail polish ko dekho…

Onima: o my god.. yeh to thodi kharab ho gayi hai…. saumya beta plz kal use nail salon me appointment le lo… sabse earliest lene ki try karna… oh god ab me kya karu… kaunsi nail polish lagau ise waqt…

Sujoy: dekha real concern… Onima tum kabhi nahi sudharogi…

Gauri: chhodiye na dady ji… mummyji kabhi nahi sudhaaregi… lijiye aap yeh thandi coffee pijiye…

Onima: tum dono sudhre ho aaj tak… nahi na..aur Gauri use cold coffee kehte hai beta...

Dadi: are oo 'rawan' ki bahen… ja jake apni nail polish theek kar… hume angrezi ki classes bad me dena…

Onima left from there… Sujoy, Dadi and Arjun was in the Riya's room…. Sujoy was drinking cold coffee and dadi was chanting some mantra… Arjun was staring at Riya's face… he was remembering all the cute and sweet memories of the past day, which brought a cute smile and tears in his eyes… he wiped the tears and dadi saw all this… she gave blessing to them to stay together happily fore ever….

Dadi: ghabhrao mat beta… wo hai na!!! (to god) wo sab theek kar dega…

Arjun: wo… hum wo jo hai hi nahi wo kya theek karega…

Dadi: are kyun nahi hai… har jagah hai who… bas wo hume dikhayi nahi deta…par sachche dil se use yad karoge to wo tumhari har mushkil asan kar dega

Arjun: wo jo dikhayi nahi deta… use kaise manlu ki wo hai…

Dadi: mano ge tum zaroor manoge… meri Riya manti hai… wo tumhe mana legi use par yakin karne ke liye…

After sometime Rathod, Shruti, Shree, and Chhotu reached there… Somya opened the door and was surprised to see Shruti and Shree at the door… she also looked at Rathod and she liked him at first sight… she was staring him… Rathod felt weired…

Rathod: kya hua? Theek to ho tum?

Somya: ab tak to theek thi… par ab pata nahi… (going closer to him) oh my my… 'ghar aya mera pardesi… pyas bujhi meri akhiyon ki'

Shruti (pushing her back): Somyaa… kya kar rahi ho? Apni limit me raho samjee…

Shreetu: YA SAMJAU… (laught)

Rathod: guys behave….

Shruti (felt jealous and hold Rathod's hand): yeh hai ETF Chief ACP Sameer Rathod…

Somya (cut her in between): janti hun… inhe kaun nahi janta… apki bahut badi fan hun…

Shruti (more jealou): achcha to fir ye bhi janti hogi na ki ye mere fianc bhi hai… jald hi shaadi hone wali hai humari…

Shree, chhotu, and Rathod: kya!!???

Somya in sarcastic way: kya hua in sab ko… inhe dekhkar to lagta hai ki tumhari shadi ka faisla sirf tumne akele ne hi kiya hai…

Shruti: somya… shaadi ka faisla akele nahi karte… do logo ki marji se hi hota hai... haina jaannn…

Rathod was shocked tosee Shruti's behavior … he just nodded his head…

Chhotu(in to shree and shruti's ear): are Shree… yeh tumhari bahen to lagta hai pagal ho gayi hai… itni musibat me hai hum already… aur ek juth…

Shree: dimag kharab ho gaya hai uska… aur kya… shadi wo bhi in homos se… cheee… kya ho gaya hai di ko…

Chhotu: sab jante hue bhi aisa kar rahi hai… plane me to apni ankho se dekha tha fir bhi…

Shruti: guys mene sirf juth bola hai sach me nahi sahdi kar rahi hun… so just shut up…(in her mind) eventhough I love him so much… ye jante hue ki wo Arjun se…. ewww nooo….

Shruti: see!!! Ab hum kya andar aa shakte hai… ya yahi khada rakhogi hume… mehman se kaise treat karte hai yeh bhi nahi shikhaya tumhe… no manners you know… shayad isiliye tum aaj bhi single ho…

Shruti's last sentence made Somya Angry… she left from there… they all went in to house… they met Gauri, and Onima…

Onima: Shruti beta… Somya ki baat ka bura mat lagana… wo to bus….

Gauri: wo to bus aadat se majboor ek bigadi hui, battamiz ladki hai… so don't mind haa dear….

Gauri sarcastically smiled at Onima and then gave hug to shruti and greeted Sameer Rathod, Shree and Chhotu….

Gauri: to tum log achanak yaha kaise… Riya ne invite kiya hai….

Shruti: umm haa… Riya ne bataya tha ki wo apne husband ke sath aa rahi hai to socha ki use surprise de du…

Onima: puri ETF team ke sath surprise… thoda ajeeb nahi hai…

Shruti: kaha aunty… ab ACP Arjun to ETF team ka hissa hai… to … anyway kaha hai Rii…

Gauri: are ha tumhe to pata hi nahi hoga ki Riya behosh ho gai hai… yaha ate hue ek accident ho gaya aur uske sir pe chot aayi hai… to wo apne kamre me hai aur jijaji bhi usike pass hai…

Shree: kya? Riya ka accident ho gaya aura b theek to hai na… mujhe milna hai use…

Gauri: ha ha zaroor… upar apne kamre me hai…

Chhotu: ha mujhe bhi use bahadur ladki ko milna hai jisne ACP Arjun ko kidnap kiya hai…


so thats it guys for now...

tell me how is it? and plz hit like button and leave your comments here...

thank you!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Riya's family s really crazy excpt daadi... Ah Arjun woried for Riya... dats intresting... Shruti still cares for Rathore nd cnt evn tolerate any other girl near him... hmm... Aww Chotu spilled the beans... he said Riya kidnapd Arjun wat nw???? continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part Thanks so much for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
awww arjun picked her up in his arms :)
kambal is sound like chumble and daku 😆
love how arjun was so worried for riya :) and at the same time irritated with her family 😆
loved riya's parents nok jhok
thandi coffee 😆
arjun was remembering her moments with riya and awww he had tears in his eyes
loved when somya said "ghar aya mera pardesi pyas bujhi meri akhiyon ki" 🤣
shruti was jealous and omg she told somya that sam is her fiance
loved chotu and shree's conversation 😆
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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