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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG OMG riya actually kidnapped arjun 🤢
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much guys for your such a good response and for wonderful comments that you guys have put here...it meant a lot to me... i didn't know you guys would love this much... thank you once again...
yes... i am still working on its next part and hope you guys would love that too... it is going to have more fun, mor stupidity of Riya... and litle bit romance... i'll update that soon...
thank you

Edited by aptl123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
try to change it to an ff love to read the story further!! dont end soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mind-Blowing dear..
just Ossam concept..
Plz contiue asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

try to change it to an ff love to read the story further!! dont end soon!!




Ya i agree with queen.bee...u should make an ff...with lots of twist and turns...surprises...and ofcourse our favorite...romance...

I just want to imagine arjun face in surprise...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008




Ya i agree with queen.bee...u should make an ff...with lots of twist and turns...surprises...and ofcourse our favorite...romance...

I just want to imagine arjun face in surprise...

Me 2 agree with queen bee n kaveri...ur storyline is hillarious u have turned d tables around pls do turn dis 2 a ff...wud love 2 read it wit more twists turns n lot of romance... 😉 I am dying 2 see arjun's reaction when he gets conscious... 😆 lovely story... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lits_virman

Me 2 agree with queen bee n kaveri...ur storyline is hillarious u have turned d tables around pls do turn dis 2 a ff...wud love 2 read it wit more twists turns n lot of romance... 😉 I am dying 2 see arjun's reaction when he gets conscious... 😆 lovely story... 😊

hello guys... i am so happy and touched that you guys liked my worked... thank you so much... even i have thought about writing as an FF in the begining but the thing is that i am going somewhere in the 2nd week of january... and i am not sure if i am able to come back and continue my writting or not... so i have to think about it and if i change it and i might not come back till feb. 2013 and am not able to finish it then can you guys start writitng it as a group FF?... plz let me know
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys... thank you so much for your good comments that i had for the first part of ACP Arjun ka Apharan... i hope you guys would love the 2nd part of it as much as the first one... here is the 2nd phase of life of Arjun and Riya... hope you like it...
enjoy!!!😃😃
Phase -2
Some time before ACP Arjun was kidnapped…
ETF team solved a case and the famous business tycoon Mr. Shethi was arrested… it was in the news headline… another victory of ETF team… everyone was discussing about them in all tv channels, radio everywhere…. There were some interviews of ACP Rathod and ACP Rawte, also telecasted on TV… where ACP Arjun gave a statement that Sikander is behind all these… but they did not have a strong lead about their whereabouts, but very soon he will be in behind the bars….
Rathod: Rawte, tum ne sikander ke bare mein aisa statement press me kyun diya? Kya tum jante nahi iska anjam kya hoga…
Arjun: janta hun Rathod… achchi tarah se… isiliye meine yeh statement diya hai…
Rathod: kya matlab?
Arjun: Rathod… agar saap pe paav rakh do to woh hadfadahat mein dankh marnek i galti zaroor karta hai
Rathod (irritated): tum yeh paheliya bujhana band karoge…
Arjun: (with his usual look) mere is statement se who zaroor bokhla jayega… use dar bhi hoga ki kahi hum us tak pahoch na jaye… isi beech woh kuch aisa karega jisse hum use pakad shakte hai…
Shree: par sir.. isse aap ki jaan ko khatra ho shakta hai
Arjun (with pride): shree hum police walo ki life mein kadam kadam par khatra hai… aur mujhe khatro se dar nahi lagta
Rathod (irritatedly): par as a chief mujhe tumhari security ki chinta hai aur ab tumhare aaspas 24 hrs. security rahegi…
Arjun: nahi Rathod… mujhe kisi security ki zaroorat nahi hai… aur waise Mumbai ane se pehle mein Kolkata ja raha hoon
Arjun left for Kolkata and other ETF team members for Mumbai….
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Somewhere in the India…
A man was sitting on a big chair… he was smoking a cigar…… and there was a dark in the room… not able to see his face…. He was angry… he was watching the news and saw the statement that Arjun gave about Sikander… and that man picked up his gun and shot in the tv…. There were some men standing around him…. He stood up and grabbed one of his hitman's collar and said, "I want ACP Arjun Rawte… who bhi zinda"… he left his collar and moved to other side and said, "woh ACP Sikander ko pakadne chala hai… huh…(he roard) uski itni himmat.." his another hitman said, "boss aap mujhe ek mauka dijiye… mein abhi us ACP ka game baja deta hun…" Sikander went to him and slapped him and said, "bhediya kabhi sher ka shikar nahi kar shakta… aaj tak aisa koi nahi hai jo ACP Arjun Rawte ka game baja shake… sivay ek insaan aur woh mein hun… Sikander"…. He continued and said, "jaao… use utha laao…use mein apne hatho se marunga… bahut hisab chukana hai use…… mere kais are dhandhe usne bandh karwaye hai… mere kitne khaas admiyo ko usne mara hai… bahut nukshan kiya hai usne mera… un sab ka hisab use ab chukana hoga... jaao utha laao use… par dhyan rahe tum log uske bare mein puri tarah se pehle tehkikat karna…. Woh ACP Rawte hai… itni asani se hath nahi ayega… bahut hoshiyari se kaam karna"… and one of his hitman said, "dont worry boss… hum puri taiyari karke jayenge"… and some of his men left….
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And when Arjun went to Kolkata to meet that lady and when he was about to leave for his hotel and Sikander's men was planning to kidnap him on his way to his hotel, because the road were very quite… but fortunately or unfortunately Riya called him and she called him a place which was to the opposite way to his hotel and Arjun went there… and Riya kidnapped him, without knowing that she is not just taking ACP Arjun with him but also the trouble that Arjun was having….
When Arjun didn't come to that way… sikander's men tried to find him but they couldn't… they have never thought in their dream that Riya was a simple, common girl was having a dring to kidnap ACP Arjun… when those goons called Sikander… he was really mad at them and said, "bevakoofo… pata karo kaha hai woh… uski ETF ki car ko dhoondho"…. Poor girl she had no idea that underworld don Sikander is now behind them… he is behind Arjun but now Arjun is with Riya… so now Riya end up herself in another trouble…. And she didn't even know about it yet….
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It was already a night…Riya was driving a car- (ETF car)… and she parked her car to some safe place and took a rest in the car for night… now she couldn't leave him alone in the car… and in the early morning around 6 o'clock she again started driving to Darjeeling…. Total trip of Darjeeling from Kolkata is around 11 hours… so she had a long way to go… she turned on radio and also drank coffee from the thermos she bought from her house… she was singing the song that was played on the radio… it was from movie "jab tak hai jaan"…
Chali re Chali re… Junoon ko liye
Katara katara… lamho ko piye
Pinjre se uda dil ka shikra
Khudi se meine ishq kiya re
Jiya jiya re jiyare
Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya oh oh oh…

Can't believe this girl!!!...how can she be so relaxed!!?? Not only her but anyone… how can anyone be so relaxed?...well that's Riya Mukherjeee… she was always like this… anyway, it was early morning so there wasn't many people on the road… atmosphere was so calm… the sun was rising… it was beautiful colors in the sky… very beautiful… she opened car window… and put her one hand outside the window… it was little bit cold… everything looked so calm and peaceful…however, she forgot the mess she did, couple hours ago… she was enjoying the nature and peace… she was forgetting the fact that she was taking the time bomb with her… and once it reached to its time… there were going to happened a big blast…. A blast that might destroy her…. she was living and enjoying the present time…. That she has… she had never worried about future…. She believed to live in present time and live and enjoy each and every moment of life… and she never regret about her past… but this time she will regret about her past for sure… about what she had done… she has kidnapped ACP Arjun Rawte… as soon as she got that thought in her mind… her smile vanished… she was scared… she was too scared to turn her head to him even though he was still unconscious… she was more scared of thought that what if he gain conscious… she was driving the car quietly… it was around 7 o'clock and Arjun gained his conscious little bit… he moved his head… and made some noise…. "ohh..humm"… Riya's heart beat was increasing…then, he moved his hand… it was a November and there was cold there but Riya was sweating… she took paper tissue and wipe down the sweat… and drank coffee…. And her countdown begins now…
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7 o'clock in the Mumbai….
Rathod got a phone call of Commisioner…. He picked up the phone and he became very tensed…. He called his tem to ETF office…
In the ETF office…
Rathod: guys abhi thodi der pehle commissioner sir ka call aya tha aur humare informer ki maddad se yeh pata chala hai ki Sikander Rawte ko kidnap karne ka plan bana raha hai… infact usne ab tak apne aadmiyon ko us kam pe laga bhi diya hai… hume thodi der baad yeh information mili hai… we have to protect Rawte aur Sikander ko pakadna hai…. Meine use call kiya tha par switched off araha hai… phir se try karta hun
Shree: (in lower tone to Chhotu) yeh Rathod sir pagal ho gaye hai kya?... woh bhul gaye lagta hai… ki woh Arjun sir ki bat kar rahe the…Arjun sir ko hum kya protect karege… unhe kisike protection ki kya zaroorat hai…
Chhotu: sahi kaha yaar…. Agar glati se use sikander ne Arjun sir ko kidnap kar bhi liya tab to protection ki zaroorat use padegi….
Rathod (irritated): damn it!! Yeh Rawte ka phone switch off araha hai… shree tum uska call trace karo… aur uski last locatrion pata karo…
After sometime Shree: sir unki last location Kolkata bata rahi hai and it was around 8 o'clock…. Uske baad se unka phone bandh hai….
Rathod (worried): kahi use kuchh…. Guys hume abhi Kolkata ke liye nikalna hoga…. Lets go….
And they left for Kolkata
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Somewhere between Kolkata and Drjeeling…..
Riya was unaware about what had happened after she kidnapped Arjun…. And she was having one more trouble…. ETF…. She didn't even told about this to Shree…. So he also had no idea what Riya did….
Arjun gained his conscious little bit… he moved his head… and made some noise…. "ohh..humm"… Riya's heart beat was increasing…then, he moved his hand… it was a November and there was cold there but Riya was sweating… she took paper tissue and wipe down the sweat… and drank coffee…. And her countdown begins now…
Arjun opened his eyes…. Couldn't see anything… everything was black…he then realized that his eyes were blindfolded so he couldn't see where they were going…. he felt he had handcuff in his hands and hands were tied up tightly with clothes and tied those clothes in the car somewhere above the window…. he gained fully consciousness and he remembered that very last time he had caught Riya and she put something on his nose and then he passed out…and now he found out that his hands were tied up and put blindfold on his eyes, and he understood everything and he roared, "RIYAAA"…. Riya was scared of death and the scream was so loud that she lost the control of car and she was almost to hit a car to rock near the road but she slammed the break… her heart was racing… Arjun was screaming… "Riyaaa… Hath kholo mere…aur yeh kya meri ankho pe kya bandh ke rakha hai?... tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum yeh sab karkr bach jaogi?"… he was right… after all he was Arjun…. The chances of Riya's servival were very very less or I would say Neal…. Statically speaking jo log ACP Arjun se poanga lete hai unke survival ke chances 100% kam ho jate haii… Arjun roared again… "suna nahi kya kaha?... I said leave me Riya…" Riya wasn't sure what to do… coz Arjun was screaming and tried to untied himself by pulling clothes and he was super angry… his face was red… and the angry, and disgust expression were seen on his face…and Riya could hear the noise that he clinch his teeth so hard…. If his hands wouldn't be tied up then he could end up killing Riya… he was hitting his shoulder in to door…he just shake his whole body… his this action made whole car shake and so as Riya… sometime he hit his shoulder to the door and sometime to the other side where Riya was sitting … tried to hit her... but fortunately she was little further from him and his hands were tied up so she was saved but not sure for how long!!!???... Moreover he was screaming…. He was out of control… he had become a tiger in the forest… to whom somebody tried to catch him or hurt him and it become so dangerous… Arjun right now is as dangerous as that tiger…. it was unbearable for Riya… one she was scared and he was screaming and made her more scared….now she had no choice left…either way she was dead…
So, She started her car and started driving again… but fear had reached to her mind and her hands were shaking… hard to control even car, her car was going let side of road to right side of road, so she was driving very slow…. She was sweating…. "ohh god kaha fas gayi mein… yeh kya kar diya meine… ab jo hua so hua… ab mujhe kuch karna hoga"… she was thinking to herself… and then she opened the drover next to her seat and took out his gun and she opened his blindfold and pointed the gun to him while she was driving too… it was too much to handle for Riya… a car, gun and the hardest one angry Arjun… Arjun gave his usual look to Riya and said, "pagal ho gayi ho kya?... neeche rakho ise… suna nahi kya??"… Riya was trying to focus on road and avoiding to look at Arjun…. But she forgot he was Arjun… he wasn't scared to death and that gun could not scare him, but yes it was scaring Riya for sure… and this time she was holding gun to him… it didn't take much time to know Arjun that she was scared and she wasn't going to push trigger… and her hand were also shaking while she was holding gun… so he was trying to lean toward her and Riya lost control of the wheel again and her car went to other side of road … and it was little squirrel there so, she just slammed the break and at the same time by mistake the trigger was also pulled and a loud noise of gun fire was heard…
Yes it was mistake but she did fire the gun and the gun was pointed towards Arjun…. So now… she also shot our- the great ACP Arjun Rawte- not intentionally but she did….😲😲

So... how was it? if you like it then plz hit the like button and leave your comments here...
thank you so much...😊😊

Edited by aptl123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first to comment...wow...its getting more and more interesting
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very nice!!! cant wait to read the next part plzz update soon ;)

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