First of all congratulations for your 3rd thread🥳 You know what manu after reading each update i would check the username . Y?? Well its bcos of 2 reasons. Firstly to see whether Is this manasie seth who is writing such a lovely dovely FF and secondly, for the long and regular updates. I remember when you were writing HTP FF we would beg you to write Long,romantic things but you would end writing a short ones that too with a twist or making them fight.You have given us little of romance there so i think now you are compensating with that Anyways jokes apart, I know I m very late.I caught up with your FF 2days back and i finished it today.Now coming to the FF.
Well I must say its a very different concept with exceptional writing style.Your writing style is changed a lot and i liked it(kahan chupa kar raki thi yaar???) . The title is very apt and that itself tells the concept of FF. Beautifully started straight up to the point.I thought i was reading a novel. The characters are beautifully penned.In each and every update of this FF I thought there was a reader's satisfaction.And the contiuation of the chapters help me to get involved in it more.I liked the way how the story progressed. Swayam's anger initially was fully justified and after knowing about sharon how he has fallen in love with her and not missing an opportunity to grab her attention and finally succeded in making her to fall for him.And as for sharon's side though the things were going too fast for her pace. she finally fallen for him. All this is amazingly written. Now comes the actual test for their relation-ship.I think swayam will be ready for this but i doubt with sharon.All in all you made to fall in love with SwaRon once again.
Boring long comment right. I know sorry but i couldnt help it.
P S : After reading the half of this FF i thought of making a VM on this concept but i dint find right song for it. So i ended up doing this.Also this one is the return gift i wanna give you for giving us such a beautiful FF.Have a look not as good as your work but i hope it is worth your time.Once i find the right song i will definitely make a VM.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lFCMcgDhIs
Edited by nly4usharon - 12 years ago
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